Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Mad @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 2:28 AM

aha stuffed toys? my fursona's stuffed? -lame-
I hate this picture it took way to long and looks crap ;_;
originally she was going to be falling but I couldn't get the background right so I made it so she had completed her fall and well, gone splat. c:
(og yes and please feel free to crit anatomy since I. Can't. Do. It.)
(Edited on January 20, 2009, 2:32 am)

(Edited on January 20, 2009, 2:53 am)

Hazuza @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 3:06 AM

You should be trying out for advanced >:

Both of your tryouts were amazing! Since your style is kinda sketchy, I dunno really how to crit it ^^;

On this one, I'd just say that the chest around its arm looks a little off, and its right hind leg looks attached funny, but I can't redline or anything because I suck worse *0*;

On your first tryout, the paws looked a bit flat, but you can pull it off imo ^^ The mid-set of paws look a little closer together than the other sets because of the shading and the left one is a bit forward... I think you coulda shaded a bit better on the tail

Still, you draw awesome... ly.... Nice concepts, nice sketchiness, and I adore how you color~
I say in. Innnnnnn. *^*

Mad @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 3:08 AM

thankyou so much and I shall certianly take those crits into account.c:

Advanced you say? whoa I've only been doing oekaki for like a month I don't think i'm good enough for advanced x.x

Toasteh @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 5:37 PM

WIN

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 6:10 PM

IN.

And yes, you should try for advanced. (still, if you could help draw here that'd be epic sweet)

Mad @ Wednesday, January 21st 2009, 2:44 AM

well you guys inspired me, I did go and tryout for advanced if you want to see xD

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Mad @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 9:48 PM

purple no?

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:10 PM

I love. That fur. O_O
ffffff and that tail.

Can't wait to see your next tryout ><

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:26 PM

VERY PURPLE <3

Edit: lol it matches the layout.

(Edited on January 20, 2009, 10:57 am)

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 6:09 PM

Oooh, wonderful texture of the fur, loving this!

Can't wait to see your next tryout!

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Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:30 AM

This was fun~ |3

Haha I should of been doing homework. ._.; Oh well.

So... Uh..... :333?

And crits on either? :x

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:17 am)

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 2:48 AM

Hurrhurr <333

Detective Wolf @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:10 AM

innnn

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:17 AM

ilu2. ouo

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:25 am)

Ichigo @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:03 AM

This is awesome! Nice cave scene. For crits I think dark shadows on your charrie somewhere would be nice and maybe more definition of the inside and gooves of the cave. The glowy things could have more definition and the mushroom looks like it's just floating there...lol.
But you did the scenery amazing! I love the sharp pointy things jutting out. They're neato. The small background outside the cave - love it. O3o

Anne Dyari @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:21 PM

The far back leg looks alittle far to the side, but other than that, good job! I say In.

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 1:08 PM

Thanks guys ^^

Yeah, I seem to put the back leg too far out a lot X-x I need to practice on that xD;

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soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 4:56 PM

(Uploaded by Voodoo)

thank you Voodoo<333

well here's my first tryout X] sorry the bg is kinda...lacking...hopefully the subjects are good enough to make up for it >w< well crit away if u want =]

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 5:17 pm)

fusion @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 5:43 PM

o.O
this is amazing! the shading and the detail oh my god!

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 6:49 PM

I think the characters make up for the bg. :>

WOW
THAT SHADING
WOW
TRYOUT TWO PLEASE
<333

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 8:26 PM

OMG. Your shading is shmexeh. XD do your second tryout so we can let you in already XD

Hazuza @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 8:46 PM

Amazing colors O_O

You should be trying out for advanced, not here~ :>

soulwithin465 @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 9:57 AM

aww thank ya'll~

and i'm also trying out for advanced as well X] but i felt like finishin up dis tryout first cuz it wouldn't take as much time as my other~

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Hazuza @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 12:52 AM

THAT. TOOK TOO LONG. I spent so long on the BG but it still looks terrible xDD; (Edit; I should edit rain in o-o
... but I'm lazyyyy >: )

Mm... Trying to get in so I can help make this place active >:O Help my effort by... commenting.... or drawing someth.... And yeah ^^;

No idea when I'll get to the next tryout ><

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 5:25 am)

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 11:52 AM

Looks good so far, I like how the background is incorporated with the character, and the strong highlights on her are great!

Can't wait to see your nezt tryout ^^

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 5:49 PM

aww this is so beautiful~

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Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:05 AM

Sparkley Ket wants YOU to be active on WOI.

Thudd @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:33 AM

i might try out.
but I don't think i could make it in...

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:35 AM

Doesn't hurt to try XD

Thudd @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 1:59 AM

yeah your right C:

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:16 AM

jfgjkgfkj It's adorableee~~~<3
Those eyes are so lovely and shading is beautiful too =3..I want that shirt C:

Toasteh @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 11:51 AM

I need to tryout here. :I

Daisoku @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:22 PM

:3 I would, though I can't really do my 2nd tryout as I have absutely no ins/outs/borderline on my 1st.

Loveless @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:23 PM

I will try D:

love them eyes.

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 1:47 PM

You need ins/outs/borderlines on your first tryout? I thought it was just your second?

Voodoo @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 2:42 PM

MISSINGNO BACKGROUND OMFG

Yeahhhh I SHOULD draw here
and me and the other admins should get rid of the remainding troll comments -braces self-

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 11:18 PM

I'm pretty sure you can draw both regardless of the comments you get on the first o3o

fusion @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 2:19 PM

that shirt is so killer lol
I would try out, but I would never make it

Daisoku @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 3:02 PM

It's kinda a re-tryout...

But it's re-tryout 1.

I can't think of anything to draw for re-tryout 2 anyway. x.x

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 3:03 pm)

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 3:52 PM

Welll when you retryout you really need to draw BOTH.
The only time you get ins/outs/borderlines on an odd numbered tryout here is if you're requested to do a third tryout.
You know
for further analysis.

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 24th 2009, 1:57 AM

.... I wonder what an 'almost in' looks like for this board?

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Upendi @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 4:42 PM

...ahahaha....I'm so tired...my first tryout and it sucks D:!..Well..this is my first time at oekaki,so I don't understand....well...everything D:
Does this counts as a full body pic >>;;??
Lol...my chara Cotton....*yawn*.....Now...I hate to finish my homework...
Fell free to laugh

Thudd @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 5:08 PM

aww this is cute C: I like how you colour
this board isn't very active unfortunately.
and I can't vote because i'm not accepted here yet
but I hope you make it in C:

Hazuza @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 6:24 PM

Haha. It's funny.

It's inactive because there aren't many people accepted, and there aren't many people accepted because it's too inactive so they get no comments or legitamate in-out votes </3

I'm not in here either, so I'll just say this is adorable xD

Ichigo @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 6:36 PM

it looks very fluffy and bright. it's cute.

Anne Dyari @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 9:09 PM

I think this is very cute ^^ I love the pose, though I think her rump wouldn't be so high, still, very cute XP

I hope to see your second tryout soon ^^

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 10:31 PM

UPENDI MY LOOOOVE *raep*
I REALLY HOPE YOU GET IN BABYCAKES. <333
I'd
critique
if I were accepted at the advanced. :I
But this is awesome I love you I love you I love you. <333 (lolobsessivemuch??)

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 10:34 PM

PS, I suggest using animation mode.
That way, if you can't finish, the layers won't go "SPLAT!" and merge. :C
That makes it really hard to retouch. :C

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:15 AM

Ohmaigod guys~~Thanks for the all nice comments!!!!*melts*
I really didn't expect so many nice comments..<3
Lol...we should make this board a little bit more....active :D!...although I have no idea how xD..
Thank you for all useful advices...you rock >w<!
*gets raep'd by Toasteh*

Loveless @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:23 PM

baw this doesn't suck, its better then my first tryout at WOA.

n__N I really love the face and those wittle bitty wings :>

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Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 5:01 PM

wakey wakey eggs and bakey.

edit: guten morgen is German.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 10:19 pm)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:22 PM

Guten Morgen <3
NO WAIT
IT'S
NOT
MORNING
!!

Loveless @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:34 PM

but..
I'm already fully awake :>

those eyes are GORGEOUS

Thudd @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:09 PM

aww this is so cute ^^
Hey Toasteh, what language is that from?
Because in nederlands (most people know it as dutch) you say good morning "Goede morgen

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:49 PM

If I remember right
It's German

I had to take it in third grade, although I didn't learn much of anything. :I

Thudd @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 12:49 AM

okey >.>
Dutch is very much like German :B

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 11:27 AM

So I've heard. |D

Arf @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 2:23 PM

lol, Toasteh, I learned some german in 4th grade.. I don't remember crap tho... Guten Tag 8D
These eyes are fabulous<33

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 10:32 PM

Guten tag...was that "good evening" or "good afternoon??"
I
REALLY WANT TO LEARN
GERMAN NOW @_@

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:05 AM

Hahaha.....you made me lol xD..."Guten tag" means "Good afternoon"...I think....well..literally it's "Good day" xD....But I don't know,I don't learn German xD
Anyways,those eyes are adorableeee~~!I could stare at them all day...*w*

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 7:18 PM

OHHHH UPENDI YOU AND YOUR EUROPEAN-NESS. <333

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ShaoShao @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 5:28 PM

Done.

I've been a member of the advanced since like, September 2007, guys. Dx Why is it every time I draw here even admins think I'm trying out when I say nothing of the sort?

Anyway, this was a request for a fur called Niyoh. Tis his tricky chimera (I kept thinking dragon and getting it wrong :{).

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 8:18 am)

Daisoku @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 1:57 PM

OHGOSH SORRY. >.<'

Epic winnage though.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 11:06 am)

Kyogre @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 11:03 PM

Awesome design! Goodluck~

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:57 AM

skjdfklsdjfsdfj
<333

Voodoo @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 1:04 PM

Lolol who's been saying that? I guess it's cos people don't see you much..??

But this is pretty cool. I love the vibrant colours and the face, it's especially well done (: Nice combo of solids and watercolour, too.

Hazuza @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 11:23 PM

idk ouo it seems the only time people post is to tryout usually O_o

and most find the fullbody+background thing a pain, so they assume you did it only because you had to. ouo

That's how it went in my mind anyway.

--

Ahhhh, I like that wing~ And your shading...

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Daisoku @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 4:11 PM

I hope I can re-tryout now..

Anyways, the infamous scene in Sonic the Hedgehog OVI (The movie) where Sonic and Metal bang heads, and Sonic says: "You might know everything I'm going to do, but that's not going to help you, since I know everything you're going to do! STRAAANGE, ISN'T IT!?"
It's sorta frozen in time...
ANYWAYS.

It was completely done in watercolours.
Exept the sketch and the lines which I erased.
Other than those, it was done in watercolour.

Comments and crits plzu? :3

(Edited on January 11, 2009, 4:15 pm)

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 7:28 PM

You should be able to retryout. :>

Errr I can't crit, nor am I the person to ask when it comes to Sonic. :I
Sorry.

Daisoku @ Monday, January 12th 2009, 12:10 PM

It's ok. :3

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K0ji @ Wednesday, January 7th 2009, 4:41 PM

Not done D: anyway this is one of my many ways of colouring my pics.

Toasteh @ Saturday, January 10th 2009, 12:32 PM

Finish soon!

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Paperclip @ Monday, January 5th 2009, 1:19 PM

hmm not even a quarter finished.

hm My lineart scares me

Paperclip @ Monday, January 5th 2009, 3:24 PM

oh shi-

Its not safety saved

Hazuza @ Tuesday, January 6th 2009, 12:27 AM

Yeah, gotta draw in Aamnimated mode to save yer layers :x

Toasteh @ Tuesday, January 6th 2009, 11:03 AM

Yes, we do not have a safety save button. :I

But since we aren't crazy active we don't mind uploading a tryout before it's finished. :I

But since this isn't on animated mode you might have to redo this. D:
Which sucks because this is really coming out nicely. D:}

Ichigo @ Monday, January 12th 2009, 6:49 PM

Wow this is some awesome sh** babe! I love the anatomy.

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MechanicalMiles @ Sunday, January 4th 2009, 5:08 PM

Sorry guys, it looks like shit. So many interruptions and then I had to hurry, so my lines were rushed and I couldn't even fix the anatomy. = EVERYTHING LOOKS SO WRONG. AND THEN I COULDN'T COLOUR. Fuck.
Okay. Uh... this is Miles, my border collie character. He's not my fursona, though. XD;

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 4th 2009, 5:39 PM

Ohhhh finish soon. <33

You shouldn't have any problems getting accepted, however this board is a little...*cough* inactive. o^o

But we're trying to give it life once again.

Hazuza @ Tuesday, January 6th 2009, 12:28 AM

*sprinkles life on everyone* 8D

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Paperclip @ Sunday, January 4th 2009, 1:52 PM

DHSJDHJDHJKSD i am sorry this is so HORRIBLE i will do better on my next oneee crits plz.

if your confused about the bg its a kind of nether sewer. urk

Paperclip @ Sunday, January 4th 2009, 1:54 PM

wtf I did not spend 30 mins on this. I spent like an hour fjkdfjkd

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 4th 2009, 2:40 PM

Th-this isn't terrible. DDD:

I can't crit yet...BUT hopefully some of the advanced people will get over here. >C

(Edited on January 4, 2009, 5:40 pm)

Voodoo @ Monday, January 5th 2009, 11:56 AM

I KNOW THIS BOARD IS LIKE...DED
That's why I'm trying to recruit more members.

But anyway, doll, this isn't so bad. It's actually kinda cool that it's grungy.

Ok, crits. You see the knees that are bending? It looks as if they are bending outward, not inward, liek they should. The neck is way too short and the forhead too broad. And yes, this is a stylized anthro but I'm just pointing that out.

As for shading, it's rather messy. You seem to be suggesting a light source butyou might want to make the highlights more intense. For your next tryout just try to work on your colouring/shading.

Here's a redline -not good with anthros, sorry-

http://i325.photobucket.com/albums/k400/chiefrabbit/redline3.png

Good luck, man.

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Angol Moa @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 3:20 AM

Look at the title.

SS, not finished yet.

Arf @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 2:59 PM

lol, I know this style anywhere, your disguise does not fool me n_n
good luck~ this site is kinda dead, so take your time.

Angol Moa @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 3:41 PM

xD I wasn't trying to, but I want to make a new account for some reason...

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