Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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Daisoku @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:26 PM

^^'
Tryout number 1.

I know my atonomy isn't the best,or my backgrounds...And you're all gonna probably say no...but I wanna try anyway.
Hehe...She's flying...Slowly.Very slowly.

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:38 PM

I'm not accepted yet, but I think this is awesome.
In your next tryout maybe try using textures in the background and stuff. You don't have too, of course, but I'm just trying to give you dumb little tips to try and help. xD; /fail
Good luck.

Jazzy @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 6:40 PM

this is so pretty c:
since i'm accepted on woa.. i guess i am on here too, so would you like a redline?

Daisoku @ Thursday, August 28th 2008, 8:18 AM

Oohredlineplzu

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 5:14 PM

Hello, welcome to WOI C: I'm Voodoo, an admin at WOA.

It appears that you've used a more stylized approach, making it more chibi-ish, but the most important thing to remember in this style bones and joints sitll have to look natural. Here, the legs seem to bend like elastic annd that is not the case in vertebrate animals such as this canine. The head appears a bit large, and there doesn't seem to be a neck to support it, as it just rests on the shoulders.

Dog's eyes are focused more on the front of the head, and you dred the eye somewhat too far to the side. From the angle they look like kind of a "pizza slice" if the shape is simplified.

Here, I made you a redline, I hope it helps c:

http://i325.photobucket.com/albums/k400/chiefrabbit/dairl.png

As for coloring I see a few color leaks aroudn the edge. But good luck!

Moo @ Saturday, August 30th 2008, 12:00 AM

Voodoo got all of the crits I can think of. Good luck though~

ShiPainter
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Rupe @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 12:44 PM

S.S

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Robot @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 9:46 PM

Kekeh.
Tryout numero uno is finally completed.
;^;
... whatever.

(Edited on August 27, 2008, 3:30 pm)

Ichigo @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 2:17 PM

You are such a great artist you know that? I superly love your shading.

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:34 PM

Bawh. ty so much. ;m;
Seriously, you're gonna give me a big head or something. xDD

Daisoku @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:46 PM

Damn,You are really good.
You should get accepted. NOW.

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 7:56 PM

Wow, you have really awesome skills.
I especially love the background, and those trees omg.

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issi_007 @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 4:01 PM

Ahaha, haven't tryed out anywhere since June XD
Ahaha.

Anyways, first tryout, not done. Background ideas? My mind is dead.
I was thinking of some backyard leading to a varied forest further back.
But yah, this will be somewhat lineless. x3

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 8:01 PM

Ohh, I'm lovin this so far. ;D

I like that backyard idea. xD

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 9:19 PM

Yep, yep.
Backyard idea is cool.

Now that you mentioned that I can't picture any background that would be better. xD

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Spoo @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 3:52 AM

the oekaki i drawl at is down so i decided to drawl here.

i guess this is a WIP tryout?
i just needed a place to drawl
idk!?

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 8:02 PM

Holy crap, that's cute.
I love the face! ;o;

skullywolf @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:42 PM

HI SPOO
this is adorable bawww

i'm trying out at advanced here
/lame

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:55 PM

Adorable ;A;
Finish soon kk?

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plusook @ Sunday, August 17th 2008, 6:10 PM

"I'll come back
when you call me...
no need to say goodbye..."

This board needs more drawing!
I am going to draw here for while.

Ichigo @ Monday, August 18th 2008, 12:00 PM

Very nice. But I think it'd be beter if there weren't yellow tones in his skin, at least not all overr. I really love the face and stuff.

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:55 PM

AS AM I, SIFU HOT-MAN

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Moo @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 2:03 AM

first time I've actually drawn here since this place opened.

SO HI<3

Tansy @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 4:34 PM

HI MOO -wavewave-
gosh this place kind of died
but I'm not even sure if I made it in
so whatevur D8

(Edited on August 12, 2008, 4:34 pm)

Ichigo @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 7:05 PM

HIHI.

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Ichigo @ Friday, August 8th 2008, 3:12 PM

HAHA SPAM DOODLE.
This board is again dead so...spam doodle for joo. I did the theme. A rip off a peanut butter jelly banana. I combined her with a strawberry but the end looks like camel toe.

Taffy @ Friday, August 8th 2008, 9:05 PM

D8 This place died?

This is a cute picture btw!

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Mara @ Friday, August 1st 2008, 4:49 AM

Just gonna color e__e;

(Uploaded by Mara)

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 4th 2008, 12:01 PM

oooh, pretty design.

Voodoo @ Saturday, August 30th 2008, 9:28 AM

i-i love this thing
Is it a draik?

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Jumbalaya @ Wednesday, July 30th 2008, 9:02 PM

okay I promise now that I'll stop changing my tryouts.. I really didn't like the other one so I deleted it..
I'm loving how this is turning out though 8D
I love using the watercolor tool now XD
This'll be a new charrie of mine.. Her name will be Era C:
but yea, this is a s.s.
I'm gonna go outside and take pictures of my sister riding her horse

oh and I got a new haircut yesterday C:

I'll finish this laterrrr

Edit:
Done!

I quite like how this turned out actually.. But I may do a bit of touching up though because I'm still not satisfied with the lineart on the dog D:
And, I couldn't really think of many background ideas.. so I just did that XD i hope it's okay though C:

oh and one more thing,
I'll be away from tomorrow(the 1st) to next Monday(the 4th) because I'm going up to see cousins, so I probably wont be able to start or finish my second tryout yet but I shall do that when I get back home C: But, goodbye anyways!
(Edited on July 31, 2008, 12:19 pm)

(Edited on July 31, 2008, 12:43 pm)

mango @ Saturday, August 2nd 2008, 4:40 PM

oh myyy that is one amazing picture
ugh so so pretty
goodluck i hope you get in
this is so pretty
i love the colorfullness
and the char is absolutly beautiful

Ichigo @ Monday, August 11th 2008, 5:37 PM

THIS IS PRETTY. IT IS FLIPPN ACCEPTED DESPITE THE COMMENTS.

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Ichigo @ Friday, July 25th 2008, 8:41 PM

Art trade with Summer. Pixel-ating took for ever...I'm serious.

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ShiPainter
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Persistance @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 4:38 PM

s.s

ugh..... i cant get anyhting right today.. it looks horrible (blame my mouse)

timer liesss

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plusook @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 4:19 PM

my first thing on intermediate, so now i've drawn on all the boards! |D

Messin' around with checkerboard textures and colors and stuff while doodling Obini.

Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 10:46 PM

You use textures in an amazing way ;;;; <3

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Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 8:04 AM

I was drawing something else but my computer lost all it's memory and it wouldn't send the other picture.. At least i got a screenshot

I'm too lazy to ask an admin or someone to upload it though
And im also too lazy to ask for upload access bawwww /lazy bum

(Edited on July 19, 2008, 8:19 am)

Ichigo @ Saturday, July 26th 2008, 9:32 PM

Eet is so cute! So is this. I like spots!

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Murderous @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 8:25 PM

Done

(Edited on July 16, 2008, 12:05 am)

Zest @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 12:17 AM

...
/touch

Hazuza @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 1:03 AM

... *hides behind ribcages* AHHH HALP IM IN JAIL ):

*KICK'D*

Hee. That aside, dude this is awesome |D and creepy. Awesomely creepy. Idk D: *gets kicked out*

Gizmonian @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 2:39 PM

God. Your art never fails to impress me and make me jelous.

I can't even shade that well, let alone, I can't even taper.

Detective Wolf @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:00 PM

duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddeeeee
simply stunning

Tansy @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:16 PM

ahhhh.
paws.
one word -
paws
<3

Random @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 3:42 AM

........ I love the quotes/phrases you put in your pictures ;;; you have the most beautiful lines and coloring <3

Murderous @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 12:54 PM

Bawww

thank you so much guys <333

Fluffy @ Thursday, July 24th 2008, 5:59 PM

Oh my god.
Can I have it's babies? O;

you are amazing.

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