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[81] Artist: Gizmonian | Title: No Title | Time: 13m 53s
Pic #69

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Gizmonian @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 10:53 AM
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mm

Murderous @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 7:01 PM
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dude seriously.



This is stunningggggg sdkjfn

Zest @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 10:55 PM
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gah, your STYLE! gorgeous!
omnomnom

Random @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 3:43 AM
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LIOOOON
fftright?
This is pretty btw cc:


[80] Artist: Gizmonian | Title: No Title | Time: 6m 6s
Pic #68

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Gizmonian @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 9:14 AM
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MWAHAHHAHA


Lol I woke up this morning and there was this fucking huge moth in my window and my cat chased it around my room and unplugged my tv in the process. I finally got sick of that and got up, turned on the light, and picked the moth up and shoved it in my cats mouth. She was like MMMM! <3


xD Now a pale, powderless, hairless moth carcass is in my bedroom on the floor. Yay.


I'm the master of catching moths, so don't try me. I can catch moths if I loose a hold of them, I know how to catch them.


I'm good at catching moths. -queen glow-

Murderous @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 1:21 PM
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Nom nom nom :3

Voodoo @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 7:51 PM
I LOVE MOTHS 8D


[79] Artist: ayaface | Title: tryout one? | Time: 2h 47m
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ayaface @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 9:10 PM
if im doing something wrong ill freak out fbshfbfs
ok anyways this is my first tryout
im scared

(Edited on July 13, 2008, 10:37 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 12:58 AM
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Ahh don't be scared
We're really nice people!
xD
I won't try to be harsh or anything
Um
Here's a redline:
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y242/Moon_Wolf/redline-1.jpg
You have a good sense of human anatomy, but you need to now define it
In this picture the girl has a really small head compared to her body
and her body is very long and stiff
And her face is scrunched up also
all though you did a nice job on the coloring and shading
The last thing I will include is that the perspective is off in the background
Things don't add up and are akward
Though I DO have to admit THAT is amazing grass
fkaldf
uh
that's it for now
good luck on your next tryout!

ayaface @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 1:01 AM
yyyeah this is why i never really draw from references?
i never understand them well enough

Detective Wolf @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:27 AM
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do you have a link to your ref that I could look at?

Star @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:01 PM
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goodluck ayaayayayayayayaa


[78] Artist: Tansy | Title: No Title | Time: 54m 3s
Pic #66

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Tansy @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 6:04 AM
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Hello old beans.
I asked how many more votes I needed, and DW said wait a day or so for a change, so I did... and no change.
Tell me if I'm not good enough to be here though ;___;

This is a character I keep drawing.

Random @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 11:21 AM
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I think you're good enough. And this guy is really cute. <3


[76] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 4h 21m
Pic #65

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Ichigo @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 11:34 PM
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Finished!

(Edited on July 11, 2008, 9:56 pm)

Tor @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 6:22 PM
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WHY ARE YOU SO GODLY!!!!!!!!!!??????
... i mean... i didn't look. *coughs*

Touch @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 7:59 PM
mymy;
It's lovely .0.
I can't think of good words.


(Bearbeitet am July 11, 2008, 10:21 pm)

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:01 PM
oh i love it...

plusook @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 4:18 PM
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oooh... this turned out really soft and pretty. Looks nice. :D


[75] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 31m
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Ichigo @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 5:45 PM
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watercolor shading

Zest @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 7:48 PM
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well holy crap .-.
excuse me while i find words to describe this gorgeous piece!

unicorn_horse @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 8:12 PM
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What Zest said.

plusook @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 11:10 PM
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what unicorn-horse said.

x3

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:51 AM
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this made me swallow my tongue.

Hoshii @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 12:43 PM
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This is so pretty o3o <3

Laurz @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 4:17 PM
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archive.

unicorn_horse @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 5:18 PM
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Yes, archive.

Zest @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 11:53 PM
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archive archive archive!

Random @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 11:26 AM
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Holy shah. I agree with everyone, archive
I love the background the most. ;; I love the sunset feel, and the trees. And you captured the fur pattern in an amazing way <3

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:01 PM
oh my gosh... it's a bobcat... :D

Moo @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 9:17 PM
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-archive'd-

My goodness this is beautiful<3

Zest @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:29 PM
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whoo, first archive!
you totally deserved it <33

manic-sonic @ Tuesday, October 7th 2008, 3:15 PM
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wow, this is beautiful, congrats on the archive, well deserved :) <33


[74] Artist: Laurz | Title: No Title | Time: 34m 44s
Pic #63

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Laurz @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:18 AM
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Rhiloooo!!

I cannot draw dragons ):

BLAHHHH.
(:

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:03 PM
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yes.
yes you can.
this is very sexy <3

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:51 AM
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YES YOU BLOODY WELL CAN!!!!!

Kyogre @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 12:05 PM
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This is cute! :D
Yay dragons! <333


[73] Artist: mango | Title: tryout 2 | Time: 36m 45s
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mango @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 6:44 PM
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s.s.
um second tryout
i got permission to go straight to my second
sence my first got messed up
im not sure if its still there but you can still see it if you need it
ill finish later

daaaaang ive been really into the rainforest theme lately.....wierd
i used to not like them that much....lol

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 8:23 pm)

POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 11:56 PM
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GL
:D

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:52 AM
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goodlock!!!!!

Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 1:03 PM
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this looks so sweet!
Good Luck


[72] Artist: ShaoShao | Title: mein spellchecker does not like copypasta Germans, lol | Time: 46m 45s
Pic #61

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ShaoShao @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 2:09 PM
'Der Hasen und der L?ffel drei,
und doch hat jeder Hase zwei.'


(I wonder why it says spoon and not ear? They are a bit spoony though)

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 4:04 pm)

mango @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 6:31 PM
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dang i can ALMOSTa understand the whole thing
o well
very nice theyre all jumpy rabbity
and btw why have i seen these three bunnies before? are they from something?
im reatrded lol

Ichigo @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 3:43 PM
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Wow! That really pops out! Real cool!

(Edited on July 9, 2008, 3:43 pm)

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:52 AM
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... Wow O.O


[71] Artist: Kyogre | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 1h 42m
Pic #60

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Kyogre @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 12:23 AM
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S.S. :)
Almost done!!

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 12:20 am)

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:53 AM
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Goodluckkyy.

mango @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 4:53 PM
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mmm this is gonna be so great once you finish


[70] Artist: Zest | Title: BRUSH YOUR TEETH >| | Time: 40m 17s
Pic #59

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Zest @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 7:15 PM
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My own take on the Cheshire Cat <33

(Edited on July 7, 2008, 2:30 am)

Kyogre @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 12:01 AM
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Lol I love that expression and the shading of the eyes

Tor @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 2:53 PM
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heytheresmileyy :)

POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 11:57 PM
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Hott Stuff
Right Durrrrr.

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:02 PM
yikes... :(


[68] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout two. | Time: 2h 19m
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Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 9:41 AM
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heh heh heh... crits/voteplease?
not exactly sure how this is going to turn out x)

POODLEPEE @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 12:49 AM
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Innnnnnnnn.
Your shading is lovely.
I'm not an expert on human anatomy, so I can't really crit, but...
the feet/legskinda bother me a little.
I wanna say too simplistic almost?
I'm not sure though.
I also really liked the colors you used throughout the whole picture as well :D
Good luck and hopefully someone can crit you better than me
XDDD

Mizuchu @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 3:57 PM
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This is really cool, I like the pose.
Though it is a little awkward...The waist line bugs me a little, and the legs are a little off. they should "flow" more, so to speak. The fingers are very strange, on the hand to the right especially, but i realize there aren't too many references for poses like that, and hell, I can't do something like that lol. I really like the clothing folds and the coloring.

I would say In, but I'm not sure if I'm in or not lol

Zest @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 6:23 PM
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I -love- the colors you used and the sky looks awesome <33

I'm not good with human anatomy, but the fingers look pretty strange to me...I think the head looks a bit small, but like I said, I suck at human anatomy, harhar.

The shading kind of bugs me and the person and trees don't seem to be casting a shadow?
I also think some of the grass would come over the blanket, if you know what I mean. The blanket would probably be kind of crumpled where the person's hands are.

I'm sorry but I say out D=...I think you have a lot of potential, though.

Hoshii @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 3:15 PM
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I say... IN

because your shading is awesome <333
and you're intermediate (:

there are some crits but im too lazy right now XD

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 11:35 AM
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3 ins + 1 out.
that's not overly unanimous.
so am I in?
thanks for the crits/votes!

Zest @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 7:49 PM
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Being the only one to say "out" makes me feel even meaner Dx

Chelly @ Monday, July 28th 2008, 3:39 PM
I say out D;


[67] Artist: Hoshii | Title: Levi Bebe~ <3 | Time: 1h 34m
Pic #56

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Hoshii @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:40 PM
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My Levi dhwqjk <33

Added moar crap for i was ... bored .

(Edited on July 4, 2008, 3:54 pm)

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:45 PM
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haha awe I luv your Levi, he's adorable <333

Hoshii @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:55 PM
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Everyone does 8D <33 lol

Thank ya c:

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:02 PM
awwww cute.


[66] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout 1 - froggeh. | Time: 57m 56s
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Tansy @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:15 PM
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tansy's back
back again
tansy's back
tansy's back
tansy's back

woop woop.
anyway.
critsplease?

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:43 PM
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nice, I love frogs <33
I really like this picture, especially the shading, but I don't like how the stomach looks, it's a little flat. I like the lineart though, good luck!

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 6:48 PM
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Ahh, awesome! Yay frogs x3

Crits...
The lilypad seems to be at a different angle than the frog, so the frog looks to be floating.
Very simple picture but that's just fine, I absolutely love it <33

Good luck!

Random @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 7:13 PM
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What an interesting idea for a tryout. c:
I love this. But I'm not for one who likes solid lines with watercolors.

ShaoShao @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 9:15 PM
I think you need to give more thought to lighting. What parts of the lily pad and frog are caught in the light, what obscures the light and where does the light not reach because of that?

There are a number of areas where the shading feels inconsistent; you expect it to continue for the rest of a limb but it doesn't. Things like that. The best way to understand these things is often to look at real life examples, try shining a lamp down onto a toy animal and note how the shadows are formed. Move the light or toy about to see what happens. It's something we see every day but fail to really notice.

Where use of the oekaki applet is concerned, I think you could work on blending shades a bit better, or deciding how blended you want them. Are you aiming for soft or hard? With more gradual shades you'd expect soft, but the effect isn't so seamless when the beginning and end of different shades are so distinguishable.

Criticism aside, the lines are wonderfully smooth and neat with great tapering. I have no doubt that this skill will be a strong factor in whether you're accepted. Looking at your DA, I'd say I'd probably vote you in on your willingness to draw a variety of things and complete pictures as well. I hope everyone else feels the same. :3


(yeah, I suck at praise... sorry orz;;)

(Edited on July 4, 2008, 9:16 pm)

Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 7:17 AM
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heh heh
not many people are a fan random
including me ;____;
but thank you for the crits guys!


[63] Artist: Mizuchu | Title: Tryout #2 | Time: 15h 47m
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Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 8:37 AM
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My tryout #2
Alef, my icon character <33

please crit and comment!

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:37 pm)

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:52 pm)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:43 PM
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Good luck ~ <33
I saw it D< sew me jk
fineesh sooonnnn

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 4:41 PM
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omg this is so great i want to see it finished :D

Etch-a-Sketch @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 2:56 PM
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WOAH.
Mannnn I so wish I could say in but I still need to try out ;; <3
this looks FANTASTIC. I love the background, color choices, and shading. THE SHADING IS AMAZING. ily.~<333

Tor @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 12:53 PM
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i love how you shaded it, and that facee :)
you have a nice style :o

all i can think of saying is that the arm pose looks slightly uncomfortable (i actually tried to do it and hurt myself, but that may just be me). And some of the lines, mainly in the curtain, could do with being more tapered as they look oddd.

I say in.
goodluck.

Hoshii @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 3:16 PM
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Yea the arm is still a bit weird ): it just looks awkward but i love how you did the skin and the shading on the curtains C: <3 Very pretty ~

WTFINPLZ

You're definately intermediate *A* <33

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:10 PM
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uh uh how many more votes should I wait for? DDD:

Hoshii @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 2:17 PM
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idk prob a few more because i dont think 2 is enough to be a unanimous vote but im not the boss n_N

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 5:03 PM
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Mmkay, crits:

Some areas, especially the curtains, probably could have been filled in a little cleaner. Notice that the curtain in the top right has purple edges. Next time I'd probably take the tool, make it 1 pixel and carefully color in on the edges :3
Also there's a bit of coloring outside the lines in a few areas.

Despite those two problems, I think your coloring style is -amazing-. I LOVE the face here, it's oh-so-awesome <33 Great shading too.

So I will say IN because I think the small errors can be corrected over a short amount of time. :D

Mizuchu @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 4:54 AM
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ok so far is 3(lol?) In votes and 0 outs, anymore people want to crit? I love learning, so please do...I will wait till Wednesday maybeh to finish counting votes? DD:



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