Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:06 PM

This took longer than it should have been >:(

timer lies by atleast 3 hours >:( i got distracted w/ my mom's friends dog

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:48 PM

wha so pretty~!
Great angle by the way! I love the paw that's coming towards us~
And the style of the clouds and shading is awesome!
so cool so cool~!!!

chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 3:03 PM

this is wonder ful, i love the shading and background on this

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:46 AM

i really like the shading and the style of shading on this <3

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 5:20 AM

Born in '91 baby~!

chainedfox @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 3:38 PM

this is lovely, i love its pink nose and its horns, i was born in 1996'

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 7:28 PM

>_> the title makes me think dirty thoughts...
Seriously, you have the coolest style <3 I love the horns and those widdle feet x3

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:16 PM

Aww thanks you guys ;u;

@ Kyuubi: hehe that's the point ;D

Fl?ss @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 1:18 PM

whoa, amazing horns~ so lovely glossy and swirly

Ichigo @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 8:18 PM

:DDDD I LOVE RAMS! This one is niiiiice :3

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 10:34 PM

Thank you <33

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:46 AM

haha you made my ram picture look like terds.. this is amazing!
loving the big ram horns.. or rack as you like to put it ;D haha

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 8:29 AM

Oh gosh every time I try to comment on my pieces I always click the 're-touch' button instead >A<

@Psychopath: Ahhh nooo but your ram is sooooo cuteeeeee <33333 And I think your ram and my ram should get together to double their awesome rack-ness XD

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 11:37 PM

FFFFFFF character concept~i think i'm gonna keep him

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:55 AM

Ah I like his color and patter design!!
Cool ears btw~

chainedfox @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 3:39 PM

i love this character design, its ears r amazing

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 7:29 PM

I agree with them, the ears are cool o////o
love the fur, too

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:07 PM

Thank you guys

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:47 AM

oooh cool designnn!
i love the fluffyness around the neck and the long tail C:

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 5:23 PM

OINK OINK

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 6:18 PM

^the title... O_O fffffff this is beautiful lol

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:56 AM

O-oh my gosh...this..is...wonderful!

Ahh that expression is great X]

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:48 AM

hehe the piggy looks like he has a dog nose XD

and that title just made me laugh XD lol

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chainedfox @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 5:18 PM

i used to have a pet rat, i had to get rid of her because my mom wanted her gone, it was sad, but i gave her to someone who would take good care of her, i miss her
my chinese zodiac animal
a fuzzy l'il rat

(Edited on February 1, 2010, 3:37 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 6:19 PM

Eeeeep hooray for rats! (I've a pet rat, she's sooo sweet <3)
Can't wait to see this finished

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 10:35 PM

Rats are my favritest animal ever!!!

Looks EPIC so far

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:57 AM

Ah the first animal of the zodiac!

hehe he's so cute >u<

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:48 AM

aww sorry to hear about your rat D:

but i like how this turned out! its very cute

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:19 PM

thanx

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.Psychopath. @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 3:52 PM

kinda for the theme..
i didnt do my chinese zodiac which is a dog (1994) cos i draw dogs alla time anyways XD
so i did my birthdate one, Aries. which is a ram.. thing..

chainedfox @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 5:12 PM

this is so loverly, and cute!
i'm an aries to, i think, i was born on the cusp so im an aries some years, and like a piceses other years
its very confusing for me

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 6:21 PM

Oh my gosh this is so cute <33 I love the fur, and the adorable face ;_;
I'm a Leo (I share a b-day w/ Obama lol) so maybe I'll draw a lion later

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 10:38 PM

This pic makes my love of rams grow

FFFFFF I wanted to be Aries but i'm stuck with piceses >:(

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:58 AM

AHHH I love sheep with a burning passion of a thousand suns!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww so cute oh gosh!!! ;A;

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:49 AM

bawww thanks guys <3

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 11:43 PM

Sorry for being so inactive i was grounded >:(

Rio and Hobbs/Zan (C) to me

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 6:22 PM

aww naughty you

This is so cool, your pixels are awesome <3

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:59 AM

ahh this is epic! your soooo good with pixels ah gosh I need MOAR <333

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:49 AM

oi.. this is great

i love the glowing eyes!

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 5:10 PM

For the theme (I believe it's talking about Chinese zodiac animals, right?)
I was born in teh year '95 C:

lol this looks like a dog xD

(Edited on January 31, 2010, 6:23 pm)

chainedfox @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 10:05 PM

this is really cute, i luv his nose and foofy ness

i should draw my zodiac animal, im the rat!~

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 11:45 PM

This is so adorable

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 5:00 AM

awww this is adorable!
I like the little pieces of hair here and there~ oooh I just wana huggle him!!

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:50 AM

woof woof.. ima doggg born in year of '94 8D lol XD

awwwehhh this is sooo cuteee. i wanna hug itttt XD

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Gecko @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 2:57 PM

First tryout, not really much to say :I

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 4:32 PM

Herro! I'm Kyuubi, welcome, and I'm glad you're trying out!

I think you have a pretty decent chance of getting in.

My main beef with this is the shading- you've only shaded with one or two colors, and I don't see any highlights. Shading really puts together a picture, giving it definition and DEPTH. Depth is what I really like to see in a tryout picture C: I quickly did a shading/highlighting redline~ http://www.iaza.com/work/100131C/tttt51526.png - I'm also not sure if the sketchy shading was the best style to use, but, erm, I dunno. I DO think there could be major improvement on the tree & leaves, they should have more texture to them, y'know? The scribbly lines aren't giving the tree texture, it's just making it look.. half-donkey-ed

haha. But seriously, it doesn't look all that good

I'm no expert with solids, though, so I'm just gonna use tigerchic's picture as an example http://oekaki.weazie.com/pictures/1149.png See how (awesomely<3) she did the fur? Something like that could've been done to the tree/leaves.
Only other thing I'm having a problem with is the front legs: I mean, it's a dragon char, so the anatomy isn't set in stone, but unless the branch is really thick, the front legs should be more like this- er... maybe--http://www.iaza.com/work/100131C/tttttz60291.PNG
This is nice, though, and I can't wait to see your next tryout!

Gecko @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 4:56 PM

Oh wai thank you :3 I see what you mean with the texture on the leaves, and the shading, thanks for the links

Next time, I'll do something with more shading and an actual awesome background xD

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:46 PM

Oh gosh this is adorable! And those eyes!! EEEK too cute >u<

But yeah Kyuubi has pretty much said everything I would?ve so uhh as far as crits go that haven?t been stated?I don?t really know what to say?

I do love that you did this lineless though! It?s pretty tough to do! Well good luck >w< And I kinda did a redline~>

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn219/soulwithin465/redline.png

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:55 AM

yea i think Kyuubi and Soulwithin have pretty much summed things up.
I believe that with this little of shading, it looks a bit flat. and we want this baby to POP! haha
i do like those clouds tho C:

anyways, whatever Kyuubi and Soul said, i agree

good luck on your second tryout!

ShiPainter

chainedfox @ Friday, January 22nd 2010, 8:57 PM

do u see a style here, im not qiute sure i have any style

haha, one of its eyes are bigger than the other, i will fix that later

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(Edited on January 22, 2010, 9:00 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Friday, January 22nd 2010, 10:18 PM

yes of course there is style here~!
I like the various colors you used to shade. Especially the reds and blues in the face. Also the freeness of your strokes looks nice!

chainedfox @ Friday, January 22nd 2010, 10:36 PM

thank u, im trying to work on my style alot,,, im trying to master it

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:57 AM

of course! everyone has a style C:
and your's is awesome!
i love those little peacock-like dots along the side of it. and the face looks neat <3

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:19 PM

thank you

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 7:06 PM

Ew. This is gross.
So my tablet came in on the 13th but I haven't really had any time to use it. My little sister's been using it a lot more, haha :C
Erg, the way Soul colors her pictures looked fun, decided to try. But... I didn't try very hard, obviously xD
timer lies, my dog was distracting me, I had to pee, etc. C:

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 7:56 PM

waaa this is so cuteeeeeeeeee
I love his little feet and furry tail!! I just wana snuggle with him >3<

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:57 AM

awww Cx
i love squirrels, therefore i love this <3

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soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 9:05 AM

Hope you don't mind that I didn't add wings!!

Ah and I forgot the blue fur on the face and ears >A< Fixed that but couldn't upload it... so here's a link if your wana see
~>http://soulwithin465.deviantart.com/art/Whisp-fanart-151211045

chainedfox's lovely character Whisp <3

(Edited on January 21, 2010, 9:20 am)

Fl?ss @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 9:13 AM

sdsfdfdsfsd I love the body shapes... looks incredibly smooth, and I like the kinda glossy effect... so cool!

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 9:25 AM

Eeeh thank you!!

chainedfox @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 5:33 PM

omg! i love how curvy she looks, and shiny
Thanks, i loves it

its okay u didn't have to add wings

i need to make a new ref of hur, cuz that one dosn't show her fulol body, heres a chibish pic
http://play.scanvas.net/pictures/play_38817.png

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(Edited on January 21, 2010, 5:36 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 5:48 PM

Glad you like it~!
Ah and the idea of the swirling blue on her legs is so cool!!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 6:15 PM

Ahh this is so pretty, I love how you highlighted it, and the claws are just awesome! C:

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 8:02 PM

Thank you Kyuubi~!!

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:58 AM

i absolutely adore those highlights!
and those claws are pretty awesome too

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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, January 20th 2010, 8:01 AM

Wow I haven't drawn DiZZ in so long!!! So sad ;^;

But now I don't know what to draw...so post some refs!

chainedfox @ Wednesday, January 20th 2010, 10:37 AM

intresting chracter u have there
i loke his floofe tail

my character whisp

http://www.verpets.com/oekaki/pictures/OP_5749.png

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 2:04 AM

Hehe thank you~! But I just realized that I forgot her ears and horns >A< fehhhhhhh

Oh my and I love your character! Silver and grey are my fav colors <3333

Fl?ss @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 9:13 AM

love all the fluffy fur :3 and those blue tones look great

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 9:24 AM

Aww thank you Fl?ss <3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 6:17 PM

I love the colors, and the whole style of it <3 The fluffiness of the whole thing is so cute C:

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:59 AM

this is neat looking

and i love all the blues together

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chainedfox @ Thursday, January 14th 2010, 6:52 PM

one of my favorite digimon, and more practice wit watercolors

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 17th 2010, 1:14 AM

ahh the fur looks so soft and fluffy~!
Oh I just wana pet 'em <33

chainedfox @ Sunday, January 17th 2010, 10:55 PM

XD he does look pretty soft

for some reason, i have this song called pants on the ground
stuck in my head
its from american idol and its so funny

soulwithin465 @ Monday, January 18th 2010, 4:13 AM

haha omg I keep hearing about that song but I haven't actually heared it myself! Sounds like quite the interesting song XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, January 18th 2010, 8:09 AM

Oh good grief, the pants on the ground song is awesome. My family's been singing it nonstop since the episode aired. xD

soulwithin465 @ Monday, January 18th 2010, 6:04 PM

Ahah omg I just watched it on youku! Oh gosh so funny!

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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, January 13th 2010, 5:46 AM

Bleh snake/lizard thing with...feathers?? fur?? not really sure...

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, January 13th 2010, 9:17 AM

haha man that's wicked cool... i love the colors of the furs/feathers and the definition of the face <3

chainedfox @ Wednesday, January 13th 2010, 3:29 PM

this is way cool!!!, i love the fetahers/fur, reminds me of fire

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