Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 12:36 PM

for the game i pre-orderd
WIP
i cant draw underwater crap

i guess lugias trying to make all the plants glow or something...

full screen plz

(Edited on February 9, 2010, 1:11 pm)

(Edited on February 9, 2010, 1:45 pm)

Gecko @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 12:52 PM

I downloaded HeartGold onto my r4, but some of it's in Japanese still D: I can still play it though, and it's amazing! I'm going to buy the game when it comes out though so I have a good version :>

The shading on this is lovely!

chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 1:10 PM

thank u, the shading was hard, and it still is

i would have gotten heart gold, but the fact that i like lugia made me get soul silver

omagosh, it won't let me log out, sorry

(Edited on February 9, 2010, 3:35 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:46 AM

Oh fudge I love this!!!!!
Nice use of the dodge tool too! It really brings out the plants~
Yeah underwater is hard to do...but this turned out so awesomeeeee >A<

And omg I'm so excited for the games to come out! I really want SoulSilver <33

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 7:26 PM

thank u, they were going to be regular plants, but it wouldn't work so i made them glow,

look! a new pokemon,
http://www.serebii.net/index2.shtml

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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 3:19 AM

At school again.
Had another argument with my mum last night, she's taken the internet away from me at home

I'm going to my dads tonight though, and he's got internet there c:

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 6:45 PM

LOL loop-hole? cute drawing

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:48 AM

I like how you have the thick black line here and there~

And its good your dad has internet! I want to see you draw more >3<

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:37 PM

Early and lazy Valentine's Day picture C:
I was working on a better picture but when I hit undo shi deleted the whole thing D:

chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 2:36 PM

love potions! i like the colors here, and the shading
love potions make me think of harry potter XD

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:49 AM

Ew I hate when shi messes thigs up like that D=

And sweet V-Day picture! I really like the shading. It's so lovely~

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:30 PM

thanks you guys C:

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chainedfox @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 4:49 PM

OKAY SORRY
i screwed up the antomy big time by not paying attention to what i was doing, im not sure what it is, but iu can have it if u want
he is supposesd to have kangaroo legs

on a brighter note, i'm having a wonderfule week, i have no school tomorrow due to snow, i got a ps3, and an awsome game for it, i pre- ordered the new pokemon game soul sivler, and i got a four day weekend up ahead

(Edited on February 8, 2010, 4:52 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:41 PM

Ah, wow, sounds like you'll have an exciting weekend! I don't want the snow to some up here, I don't like snow. And since I'm homeschooled I don't get snow days D: D: And AAAHHH I want Soul Silver badly...
the shading on this is nice

chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 12:09 PM

i don't like snow either, but as long as it gets me off school, im okay with it, i can't wait till soul silver comes out either

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:51 AM

Man sounds like you are ahving the most awesome week ever! And yes I'm soooo excited to get the new Pokemon DS games <3 I'll probably have to wait till my dad's done playing them though since he's a big Pokemon fan *fail*

And loving the colors and shading~! The red eyes really pop for me *u*

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Gecko @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:22 AM

Right, I was drawing something awesome yesterday, and as I went to send it in, my internet cut out, so I asked my mum ro reset it. She didn't. She told me to apologize because her partner called /me/ ugly

So I didn't save the picture.
And now they're not feeding me, I went to make a sandwich and they took the stuff off of me, so I didn't eat anything yesterday. I'm still hungry now, and probably won't get to eat for a while.

Btw, this was drawn with a school mouse

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:30 AM

Th-this was drawn with a mouse????? MY GAWD so gooooooooood!!!!

And I'm sorry =[ You should eat somethinggggg <3333

chainedfox @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:27 PM

i like the shading, and those eyes

wats wrong with drawing with a mouse? i always draw with one
i wonder wat using a tablets like

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:42 PM

Aaa I like the shading on this :3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 6:47 PM

good for you, standing up for yourself, this is cute, and no food? who does she think she is huh?

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soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 8:15 AM

Ughhh I duno what to do...I'm so bored today and don't have the motivation to do anything even if its entertaining....

Gecko @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 11:39 AM

Oh, how cute!

I love the style you've used for this~ <3

Ichigo @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 1:53 PM

D'awww! Adorable blocked colors and figure

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:23 PM

but.. this is so cuteeee XD
i love the little eyes Cx

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 8:22 PM

Aww thanks you guys <33

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:43 PM

Soul everything you draw is full of win

this is ridiculously adorable <333

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:55 AM

@Kyuubi: T-thank you ;u;

<333

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Gecko @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:06 AM

Ref sheet for Ticket c:

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:57 AM

Man you have such a sweet style~!
I love how you draw legs!!

Gecko @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 11:39 AM

Haha thank you

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:25 PM

i like the nice smooth lines

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:44 PM

I love your style <333 I like the name Ticket, too C:

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 6:06 PM

Ref sheet for Dixon~

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:56 AM

I like the color choices OuO

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:27 PM

yes i like the colours C:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:45 PM

Oooh I'm liking the pattern on the fur ;3

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 10:31 AM

Timer lies~ I got accepted here, I might as well draw something worthwhile "/

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 1:43 PM

haha wow, I like how clean this is C:

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:56 AM

Ah gosh I love this character of yours <333

Man I have such a weakness for dragon realated stuff~

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:28 PM

neat shading

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.Psychopath. @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 10:59 PM

just a random drawing of Zee.. i think im definately gonna keep her as a furry dragon. except i dunno if i wanna keep her hair like that or like a horse mane like i had it tho.. haha she looks like a llama or some creature from Dr. Zeuss
this kinda helped a bit cos i'd been having a bad day.
now off to do homework D:

chainedfox @ Friday, February 5th 2010, 3:58 PM

she looks so cute, i love the soft colors

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 3:06 AM

Oh my what a pretty design! The choice of colors go really well together and I just adore the hair!

Hope you feel better soon =]

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 1:44 PM

UUUUU this is really pretty <3 I really like her design <33

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:28 PM

thanks guys <3

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Gecko @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 1:09 PM

Timer lies, I was eating dinner then had to look after my baby sister and brother for 10 minutes

Sooo, I guess I'm accepted in then?

-happydance-

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 3:04 AM

Yep you are in =D
And whoa I like this a lot! The use of lines for the shading has a pretty sweet effect!

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:29 PM

ooh the textures look cool C:

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Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:06 PM

I am SO proud of this, and I have no idea why D:

Tryout 2~
:>

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 1:57 PM

FFFFFFFFF I've alays failed a criting stuff XD. So I'm just gonna skip ahead to the part where I say In.

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 2:02 PM

I've never written a crit ever, so I guess I know how you feel? D; Thanks though

How many do I need to get before I'm officially accepted here?

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:12 PM

Haha, I'm not exactly in the mood to critique, but I'll take a shot at it~
I would've liked to see something more on the outside of the cave- it's just grass and sky, y'know? To me, it just makes the perspective feel... off... I can't explain myself at the moment so hopefully someone else will be able to later xD The lighting is a bit funky, too, like I'm seeing the way the shadows are being cast and... it just feels like the sun would have to be in our sight for it to work.. but, uh, idk. The cave is nice, but it still seems like you were lazy doing it

The anatomy of the leopard looks off, but I don't have the time to talk about it ...er... sorry xD
But this is overall a great tryout, I love the composition, and I say.. in!

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:14 PM

Thank you

<3
Eh, I was going to put in a sun somewhere, but I seriously fail at them and it would ruin it completely Dx

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 5:22 PM

In, love the composition of this, and the lighting really gives depth to the picture.
Yes, the blue sky and grass may be abit overdone, BUT, I think it puts an interesting perspective on it xP

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 8:23 AM

Oh my, this is a great improvement! I really feel you took the critiques given to you before to heart <3
The shading is much more dramatic and gives the image itself more character and depth. Also I enjoy the various details you?ve added to the cave. Rather than just leaving it as a plain old cave you added plants and rocks here and there which gives the eye more to look at. However, I do notice a few missteps. While the shading is nice overall it seems kind of blotchy in some places, specifically around the cave walls. Also the highlight shouldn?t be quite so thick. And to add to what Kyuubi had mentioned, I do feel you could have done something a bit more interesting with outside of the cave. Why?s the subject looking outside? What kind of environment does s/he live in? What feelings does the subject have? What?s the story behind this? Thinking about these things and then applying the answer to them visually can really increase the interest of a piece. While blue sky and green grass with the occasional cloud is accepted it?s quite clich?. Why not set up scenery that involves a change in seasons like fall or winter? Or draw a point of interest that the subject is focused on like an old rotting tree or a flock of birds. You can also depict the subject?s emotions through the colors you use. Add some shades of blues and violets here and there to express a calm and tranquil feeling. Or change the weather to a chaotic thunderstorm. These are all just suggestions! Overall this is a decent tryout and a wonderful improvement! And you should be proud of this! All in all I vote IN~

=]

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:30 PM

well, you're already in (lol late comment XD)
but i really like the lighting in this

and the background looks awesome!
welcome to WOI

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Aikara @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 10:30 AM

shi died on me 9 times while working on this...

but anyway! tryout 2!

first tryout:
http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/242.png

o.o; in may

(Edited on February 3, 2010, 2:14 am)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 11:29 AM

I say out, but you're really close.

Your shading technique is quite nice and smooth, but there needs to be more in order to define a lightsource. On the yellow dress, on the middle I can only see a light highlight, and no shadows following the fold lines on the front.
So next time, dynamic shading, and perhaps a reff for a more dynamic pose? Symmetry may be appealing, but creating symmetry in movement is art.
Nice use of the tones, and the texture of the hair, and the dress design is very cool.

Please come back and tryout again when you feel you're ready ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:15 PM

I'm gonna have to say out as well

What Anne said- you have to work on your shading a bit-- don't be afraid of strong lighting! And yes, a more dynamic pose would be nice; she looks awfully... stiff.
But I do think you have what it takes, with some practice you should be able to get in! :]

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:31 PM

sorry im gonna haveta say out too.
i agree, you need to show more shading to make it pop more.. and yes, a more dynamic pose would've been nice.
good luck next time tho!

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 7:03 PM

Timer lies. Playing around w/ pen pressure~

(Edited on February 3, 2010, 9:07 am)

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:20 PM

this is so cute, i lllike his crinkle - cute face

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 8:25 AM

Pen presure is so fun~!
And oh gosh I just want to hug this little pup!!! Ahh and I love his name OuO

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 2:32 PM

haha this is adorable Cx

i have recently discovered the joys of pen pressure myself

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chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 3:00 PM

one of my digimon characters
kohmalemon, i think, i might have to redo her name
any way this is just a quick sketch of her

Random Question Time:
When did u start using oekaki and what age were u when u started???
i started using it around 2008
i was 11 when i started, and now i'm 13

(Edited on February 2, 2010, 3:08 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 5:48 PM

FFFF this is cool C: I never really got into digimon ;__;

Uhhh lol I started oekaki-ing when I was 9 or 10... and I'm 14 now xD
I must be a really slow learner, though, cuz I feel like I'm only getting comfortable with the tools now... xD

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 8:35 PM

This is Way EPIC!!!

I got into oekaki in late 2007 and i was 12 i think

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 10:31 PM

Whaaaa so cool~ That eye is mighty sweet! Loving the color designs too and fluff around the neck and ears <3

I believe I started when i was 16 going on 17...and am now 18 so 2 and 1/2 years now~ Wahoo!

Oh right forgot to state the year! uhh I believe it was the winter of 2008.. Awesome question btw! I love learning about how long ppl have been using certain tools or how younge they were when they first started >w<

(Edited on February 2, 2010, 10:33 pm)

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:45 AM

ooh awesome character C:
i like the colours!

uhh.. i started oekaki-ing innn.. 2007 i believe. i think i was 12 or something. either way i was in grade 7 then XD
and so, its been about 3-ish years now.

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:18 PM

thanx, i love learning how much people have improved in a certain amount of time, like soul, XD

(Edited on February 3, 2010, 3:22 pm)

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