Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Gecko @ Tuesday, March 9th 2010, 3:21 AM

Gonna transparent when I get home as my school has blocked iaza :I

Pixel Requests? I'll do them later~ Animals only please C:
1.Seidal
2.
3.

(Edited on March 12, 2010, 3:05 am)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:51 PM

This is sooo great! <3 I can't pixel to save my life.

Seidal @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 10:20 PM

Ooh! Umm.. I have only one animal character.. and it's this really crazy... rabbit named Yasu.. Urrrgh I'm so bad at drawing animals... lol

here:
http://oekaki.weazie.com/index.php?artist=seidal&sortartist2=Go#1334

and here:
http://oekaki.weazie.com/index.php?artist=seidal&sortartist2=Go#1295

Gecko @ Friday, March 12th 2010, 3:06 AM

Thanks c:
And yeah, I can do that for you~

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 6:08 PM

(Edited on March 8, 2010, 6:14 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 10:31 PM

Oh my the facial characteristics are so nice! I love the shading you have around the eyes. And wow she has quite the interesting outfit! Hope to see this finished soon >u<

Gecko @ Tuesday, March 9th 2010, 11:52 AM

I spy some improvement!

<3
I love your lines so much ;;

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:49 PM

Whoa! Awesome detail!

Seidal @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 10:18 PM

Ooh, this is a concept I haven't seen before-- ^^

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 9:08 AM

Meh I feel so uninspired lately...Like everything I draw is so common and unoriginal. Gosh I just want to graduate and move back to the states already! I'm sick of living here...

Gecko @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 11:42 AM

Gaah your colouring is pure amazing ;; <3
Common and unoriginal? Hell no. Awesome? Hell ya.

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 3:58 PM

BUT I LOVE YOUR STYLE! and your colours and your textures

soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 10:28 PM

Aww thanks you guys ;u;

I guess I'm just going through one of those fazes (AGAIN!!!) were you don't like anything you draw...

Hopefully it'll pass soon >A<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:48 PM

-pokes with inspiration stick- YOU. YES, YOU THERE. Don't ever be so hard on yourself. Sure, it's good to look at your art, nitpick and look at things that you'd like to improve on-- it helps you get better. BUT YOU. ARE AWESOME. YOUR ART. IS AWESOME. It is NOT common and unoriginal. It is absolutely AMAZING. YOU are absolutely amazing. <3 Seriously, hon, I love ya, and am so inspired by you and your beautious art. <333 -hugz-

Seidal @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 10:17 PM

THOSE LIPS... O___O

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, March 12th 2010, 7:02 PM

i know what'cha mean, totally kissable, lol jk

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 8:50 AM

So I haven't draw here lately....guess I just haven't been in a drawing mood much.

Gecko @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 11:36 AM

Oh my, this is goregous! ;; <33
It looks so floofy

soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 10:29 PM

Aww thank you! And I love drawing floof *u*

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:42 PM

I KNOW I KEEP ON SAYING THIS, BUT IT NEEDS TO BE SAID: you are amazing <333333

Seidal @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 10:17 PM

O wow, I really love those details on the face *v*

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Gecko @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 2:25 PM

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Anne Dyari @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 7:34 PM

xP That is a cool shirt.

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:39 PM

Ooh I like the design on her arm!

Gecko @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 9:25 AM

Thank you guys

Seidal @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 1:40 PM

Ooh, do I see a little bit of One Piece influence? I like it a lot

Gecko @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 3:03 PM

Yep, definatly One Piece inspired :3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:41 PM

Mmmmm I love this <3

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Gecko @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 7:10 AM

Finished :3

(Edited on March 7, 2010, 9:46 am)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 7:47 AM

OH wow!

Khadyah @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 9:10 PM

Wow looking amazing :3

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:39 PM

Mmmmm this is coming along nicely!

Gecko @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 9:25 AM

Thank you ;u; <33

Seidal @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 1:39 PM

HOLY!
THIS IS COOL!
More please <3

soulwithin465 @ Monday, March 8th 2010, 3:08 AM

Oh man that's a pretty sweet shading style! This turned out great!!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:40 PM

Aaahhh this is so cool! Love the blue highlights!

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, March 5th 2010, 6:47 PM

doodling.

Seidal @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 12:22 AM

Oh wow, those wrinkles on the clothes look super <3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 7:38 AM

thanks!

u rock!

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:38 PM

Man I love your style! Its so original and ahh I just LOVE IT!!! Awesome choice of colors here and pretty cool outfit too!

Gecko @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 9:25 AM

Gaaah I really love your style, and your lines and shading amazes me so~

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Khadyah @ Wednesday, March 3rd 2010, 7:44 PM

W-well it's done! I'm sorry it took so long for me to start on my third tryout |D; I really had no idea what to draw for a long time.

I sorta feel bad because all my pictures are cats but really... cats are the only thing I feel confident enough to draw to get accepted :D; Other things like canines and rodents are works in process. I only JUST started drawing rodents a lot and I have a problem of defining canines. I can't seem to define a fox from a dog from a wolf very well. I'm working on that |D

And I decided to draw this because I got a lot better at drawing female bodies. :3 Like... pretty quickly.

So crit away~

(Edited on March 6, 2010, 4:39 pm)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, March 5th 2010, 6:05 PM

ya, no safety save button here.

keep up the good works

(Edited on March 6, 2010, 9:17 am)

Seidal @ Friday, March 5th 2010, 8:08 PM

Looking sweet so far, Khad~
^__^

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 6:20 PM

You've definately been improving throughout your tryouts, but I would've liked to see stronger lighting on the black parts, especcially with the moon so big.
The shading on the face is really nice, and the lock of red is really well done. Overall, I'll say in. ^^

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:24 PM

Alright there is obviously BIG improvement right here!
The proportions are well balanced out and you really seem to be strengthening your style! However, as stated, I would have liked to see some more distinct shading. However, the shading is beautiful it?s just a bit hard to distinguish between the different shades. But the highlights in the hair are wonderful and I really enjoy the serene feeling this image gives off. And I must say, I LOVE that right hand! Overall I vote in as well. You?ve obviously grown in many areas and I feel that you are defiantly intermediate enough. Hope to see more from you soon <3

Gecko @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 9:24 AM

Khad, this is amazing ;; <3
I definatly say in, you're shading is amazing and ffff <33

Seidal @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 1:39 PM

Great improvement! Oh this looks nice.
I like how you used different colors to outline your character and how your subject shows action

For a touch-up, I might erase the gray line either half-way or completely in the elbow area and put some shading instead to keep the smooth look. The glow around the stars are also done very well.

The violin and angles of the feet might be a little wonky.. but I still give you kudos because most people are paranoid about drawing feet..... and musical instruments (myself included).

And don't feel bad about only being able to draw cats... I can really only draw men... so let's both practice to draw other things well together~ <3

Or.. you know, we can both just really improve on drawing cats and men to make a sweet trademark

IN

(Edited on March 7, 2010, 1:42 pm)

Khadyah @ Sunday, March 7th 2010, 6:38 PM

B'aaaw thanks for the positive feedback, everyone~ ^^ I'm so glad you liked it :3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:37 PM

KHAD <3
I think all the crits have been stated, so I'm'a go ahead and say IN!

Seidal @ Saturday, March 13th 2010, 9:41 PM

so start drawin~ <3 XD

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Gecko @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 11:10 AM

Reference sheet for my new character, Skylar :3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 5:04 PM

cool character

Star @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 5:16 PM

this is awesome plz. ;D

Seidal @ Monday, March 1st 2010, 9:55 AM

Cool design~
Is that... a skull shape on its neck?? :O

Gecko @ Monday, March 1st 2010, 11:26 AM

Thankies guys

And yeah, it's a skull shape, I keep on doodling it everywhere, so it made its way onto this guy shgfsghfd

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:35 PM

I like those patterns *u*

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Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 9:58 PM

I rarely draw the same character twice..
..but I like this guy a lot <3 lol

err.. I think.. I can draw here... ...right?
Or.. this could be a.... third.... *struggle*
T___T

(Edited on February 27, 2010, 10:02 pm)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:29 PM

very nice!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 11:39 PM

umm well yeaa, like 6 people said you were in and now im eggsadurating

Anne Dyari @ Monday, March 1st 2010, 4:48 PM

xD I'm pretty sure you're in.

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:34 PM

akf;ngjlfgn Gosh this is awesome! everything you draw looks so cool >3<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:38 PM

ahdjklfhjksdfhjlh/typesmash
Mecha-character is so amazing <3

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 7:49 PM

my dad thought i should try something different and his friend wanted me to draw his bike, i don't know bikes though

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:33 PM

Ah this looks really nice!

Man...I want a motorcycle so badly.

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 11:07 AM

just a scribble

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:12 AM

w.i.p

Seidal @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 12:16 AM

Wait.. is that.. Jolteon?
Or something.. much cooler?

Gecko @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 6:45 AM

It's Jolteon

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:31 PM

Oh man that's some great shading!

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 4:25 PM

just an outline made I'll finish up later?

Seidal @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 8:04 PM

A fighter in heels. NICE XDDD
This looks cool so far!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:24 PM

heck yea, what other kinda warrior is there? i dunno i was just messing around when i started this

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:47 AM

some really bad stuff happened last night and i really don't want to delet this picture but i don't feel like i can finish this picture

Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 4:09 PM

Hey it's all good. Things happen, and you can always come back to this when you're up for it, right? Actually, I find that big events in my life end up adding more character to my art. I'll be supporting you!

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:40 PM

You make the coolest clothing designs!

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Seidal @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:51 AM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It's done..and just in time for midterms LOL!
And I didn't go over the 500kb limit XDDDD

As usual... crits, comments, and redlines are warmly welcomed.

1st tryout
http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/429.png

(Edited on February 25, 2010, 5:57 pm)

(Edited by Anne Dyari)
Bumped for Completeness ^^

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 12:19 AM

Oh gosh this is going to be amazing!!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 7:46 AM

great poses~! Can't wait to see it done!

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:27 AM

AHHH I'm getting so pumped to see the final outcome of this!!! It keeps looking more and more amazing everytime you update it <333

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 9:09 PM

much more work's been done of this since i last saw it, the armour is really somethin' COOL!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 9:19 PM

done? Okay, so this is what I personally think. the colours are quite nice and work together well. I think that the girl neds more of a curve to her back, she looks a little unnaturally stiff. something I noticed in both tryout is that you highlight one specifc area with black pen, while much more effective in this one then the last I might go for a colour/shade that is less dark as nopt to distract from the rest of the picture. i like the plants, they really liven up the scene. the amour is my favourite put, it has the most detail and is obviously in your comfort zone. you're one of those artist who actually does manga/anime/whatever really well, most people see anime/manga as big-headed kids but you kept the proportions good

and now i will shut up >IN<

Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:56 AM

The faded look is very appealing, and the metal, I really enjoy how it's put together to form the human body. Beautiful folds, I say in ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 12:32 PM

AAAAAAHHHH GET IN HERE YOU!! This is awesome, the clkthing folds are @_@ ...IN. IN.
If I wanted to be nit-picky I could point out some things, but I don't feel at liberty to crit this (and I'm also on the Wii right now...), so I'm'a leave that to others

Gecko @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 3:15 PM

I say in. Fo' sure~

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 9:40 PM

I say get in here NOW

Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 4:14 PM

Ho---my goodnez--
Thank you everyone for your comments! I will definitely take everything that was said into account!

@Kyuubi: Nit-pick all you want!!! I need an ARTISTIC DETOX SESSION! lol

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:30 PM

OH WOW this turned out AMAZING! I love the soft colors you used it really gives off a majestic feeling. The folds in the clothing and the little details here and there really make this image POP! I do notice a few color bleeds in a few places though, but they don?t take away from the piece at all, so no worries. And the background fits so perfectly with the foreground! All in all this is a gorgeous piece and I?m happy to see you?re in!

Love the little droplets of water too and the break of light in the clouds! Guess it just rained ;]

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