Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Khadyah @ Monday, April 26th 2010, 7:59 PM

For an art trade for someone on dA c:

(Edited on April 26, 2010, 9:49 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 27th 2010, 10:30 AM

KHAD DOLL good to see ya <3
HNNNNNNGG your lineart is so nice!!

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:24 AM

Those lines are so smooth *u*
And I like the outline of blue with the dots~

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:50 AM

Omigawrsh those are some delicious looking lines... and the bg is adorable :3

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Aikara @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 9:40 PM

title .-. tryout numbah one

came out bleh though

(Edited on April 28, 2010, 1:07 am)

Star @ Thursday, April 29th 2010, 9:55 PM

ugh
im too lazy to crit
so ill just say a few things
the hand thats holding the staff
seems too straight
uh
i dont get the leg on the right
i think youre trying to do perspective
idk

uhhh
are you using burn/dodge
its better
to just pick the colors
& color it in
because burn & dodge + pencil = a no no
uhh
i really like the right hand
the pinky seems too small
but its really nice

your lines are really clean & i appreciate that

anywho, goodluck on your next tryout.

Aikara @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 12:15 AM

thanks for the crits

i didn't use dodge and burn though.. -takes note to make sure her shading doesn't look like that-

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 4:37 PM

uuhh yeah i was too lazy to crit too so I waited for someone else to crit first gggggggg
but yeah agreed w/ star
I think next time you should use thicker lines and taper
cuz it looks really choppy here??
And errr I just think that you should also give your next one a more realistic background that the characters are interacting with?
Cuz I've seen your stuff on PHO and you tend to do this sort of background a lot... and I'd really like you to stretch yourself :3

(Edited on April 30, 2010, 4:38 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:21 AM

Wow I really like the box theme going on here! Good use of textures and design!
I also enjoy the color pallet; the colors go very well with each other. However, there are a few major flaws within the anatomy of the subject. It appears that you were attempting to do something with perspective, and while I do applaud you for doing something as tricky as perspective, I find the proportions to be rather wonky. The difference in size between the left and right eye is rather distracting and the left leg seems rather awkward. Also relating more to anatomy the arms seem a tad bit too long. But aside from that the shading is quite decent. It?s obvious where the light source is coming from and I find the object he?s holding rather interesting. Overall this is a nice tryout and I can see that you put quite a bit of time and effort into it! For your next tryout I suggest using references such as photos or real life observation. They?ll help with getting proper proportions and correct anatomy. Well, good luck and I hope this helps >u<

(Edited on May 3, 2010, 10:23 am)

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:49 AM

The boxes look cool in the bg and the gadget/weapon he's holding in this right hand works well with it. That texture in the hair is pretty sweet too <33

The crits above covered a lot. As for suggestions or tips, I sometimes like to use lines that aren't 100% black, but instead a really dark grey. They sometimes give an illusion of cleaner lines. Also, the bezier / curved line tool works really nicely on living subjects than straight lines. It might be frustrating at first, but I can see an improvement from your last tryouts

Good luck! Keep going!

(Edited on May 8, 2010, 11:28 am)

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, April 20th 2010, 8:34 PM

I NEED TO DO MORE STUFFFFFF

ALSO HELP VOTE JUSTIN BEIBER INTO THE WORM GENDER

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 7:23 PM

Om nom nom this is cool :3

and yes please I want that child to disappear into obscurity :X

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 7:36 PM

Some one on my bus must be brain washed by him because every time we hear one of his songs someone shouts TURN IT UP

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 8:00 PM

Why? WHHHYYYYY?
That is why I'm homeschooled. U_U

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, April 24th 2010, 6:28 PM

It's like they WANT to make our ears bleed

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, April 24th 2010, 7:26 PM

I'm so sorry for you *pats*
Isn't there anyone else on the bus yelling, "TURN IT DOWN" cuz that's what I'd do u_u

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, April 24th 2010, 11:53 PM

Yeah like seven and the bus driver says "But they like it!" >:C

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 27th 2010, 10:43 AM

HNNG bus drivers >_>
Last night I had a dream w/ Justin Bieber in it. D8 At first he was this skateboarder guy who won some skateboarding contest and he was having asthma problems but no one wanted to help him cuz they were mad at him for winning. So I took him to my house and he lied down in my sister's bed... at that point he was Justin Bieber and not a skateboarder... and he was really depressed because of his fame and was telling me about it and was like REALLY NICE and I started thinking that I liked him and then he told me that he liked me and then we started going out. DDDD8 But eventually I decided I didn't like him in that way and so I broke up with him. We stayed friends though, but he still liked me krykshgdoyskgfihiijgfhq
Why can't I have dreams like that about people I DO like?!? xD
My sister had a dream that she set the Jonas Brothers on fire... now THAT'S a cool dream! xD

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 7:49 PM

I'm doodling here once again!
This computer is pretty much a piece of crap, so I haven't been on it in awhile. I check up here now and again on the Wii, but I never feel like commenting on it. xD
ANYWAYS it seems like everyone but me is sick at my house. D:

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 8:40 PM

That is one epic HI! I want to give him a high-five~

And I'm sick too! ...but at school =[

Star @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 1:32 AM

eugh
whats with people getting sick lately OTL
um but like
/HIGHFIVE

Arf @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 8:16 AM

WAI HAY DER SXC!!
my computer's crap.. it got a virus, and I pretty much can't do anything on it...

I have my lil laptop but i can't drawww on itt.. and I have been drawing, but like i said, my computer kept bein g a freak and shutting me out of the screen after so long... XC oh and btw, ilu!!<3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 12:52 PM

YUS highfives all around!! 8D
Bawww, I'm sorry you're not feeling well. Dx

HAY ARF BBY HAY. I hate computers and their stupid viruses D8 I'm sad that you can't draw but I understand... :C and ilu too <333

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:54 PM

daaawww cute pawwwwwww X3
WHAT... I love Kyuub more...

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 7:31 PM

lol Thanks... it's just a paw, though.. ^^;
M'sorry, Arfie's my wifey, so I'm pretty sure she loves me more... but you're free to engage in a hot n' spicy secret relationship w/ me... 8D *coughArfwouldnotapprovebutthenagainshe'salsomarriedtoOriasooooocough*

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 9:17 PM

Oh no you should be faithful to your wifey~ lol. I don't want to compete with Arf, I luv her tooooo X3

Arf @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 8:01 AM

I was about ready to start a serious smack down-- but then Sei has to go and be awesome xD
We could always have one of those triangle relationships.... 0__n lol

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 11:10 AM

LOL yes like a love triangle but with everyone's feelings being mutual n'stuff. T'WOULD BE DELIGHTFUL 8D

Seidal @ Thursday, April 15th 2010, 4:07 PM

LOL I don't minddddddddd XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 7:29 PM

YESSS and so begins the Cubey/Arf/Seidal relationship!!!! 8D

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 1:59 PM

Ho hum, vaporeon.

My 19-year-old brother said, "It's a vaporeon! I can't believe I remember that..." and I said, "Why not? You and I were obsessed with Pokemon growing up."
Then he said it looks like something from Avatar

Khadyah @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 9:13 PM

Oh my this is amazing <3 It's so cool and the water effects of this piece is just awesome

Yesss

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:55 PM

THAT IS F'IN SWEET HOLY $^Y%%#$R

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 7:27 PM

Ahaha thanks you guys!
That's quite a reaction Seidal... xD

Star @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 10:19 PM

HI
DUDE
THAT
SHADING
IS
BOSS

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Wednesday, April 14th 2010, 8:49 PM

If you look up the word amazing this will be right next to it

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, April 15th 2010, 1:08 AM

I second that statement!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 7:28 PM

<3333 thanks

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Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 9:48 PM

Hey Cube!!! I drew you a cubey kitsune!!! XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 7:19 AM

adgsgfsjjssgi This is wonderous lol <3333 It's wicked adorable too 8D
IDK I'm seriously considering changing my name to Cubey now, at least it'll be pronounced the same DDD8

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 7:21 AM

....plus the password on this account is broken....

Arf @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 8:04 AM

You may be able to change your name, my kyuub, but you will never be able to hide from me

And Sei, this is amazing. I love those eyes!!
I wish i could draw here... seriously considering trying to finish my second tryout with my mini-laptop's touchpad... xP

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 11:11 AM

I'd never try to hide from you, Arfie <333

Star @ Tuesday, April 13th 2010, 10:17 PM

hi there
my name is star
nice to meet you
super kawaii cubey fox-chan.

Seidal @ Thursday, April 15th 2010, 4:10 PM

lol thanks everyone <333

Kyuub: I think Cubey is a cool name... hmmm Cubey Key..errr nothing in english that sounds like tsune.. cubic keys? T$#@%$%!@$ @___@

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 7:27 PM

Ha, to be honest I'd rather just drop the "kitsune" part at the end anyways. xD I'm very tired of having such a long name.
.... I made a Cubey account but I'm still hesitant to use it... =X

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, April 6th 2010, 10:51 PM

YOU GUYS yesterday i was in the computer lab goofing off and i found this japanese name mabobber and i put my friend shaggys name in it and it said his name was CHUCK

...but then we found out it was spelt the same way as chuck and we were all sad

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 6:15 PM

CHUCK that is amazing
Amazing.

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 8:38 PM

I'm sorry for your sadness =[

Star @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 1:32 AM

CHUUUUUUCK

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:52 PM

LOL what? That's so weird... If you ever need help with Japanese names, you have a Japanese person here at yer service

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 7:31 PM

SEIDAL you're Japanese WHUT??

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 7:49 PM

Yeah.. lol

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 7:58 PM

Can you like... speak it? lol

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 8:15 PM

...are you indirectly asking me to translate stuff?? O__O;; jk jk
Yeah I can speak Japanese fluently, but my literacy level's like a 3rd grader's hahaha

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 8:29 PM

Ahahaha no, I just think it's pretty cool! I'd love to be fluent in another language xD (who wouldn't?)

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Wednesday, April 14th 2010, 8:50 PM

I wanna take a rossette stone german doohickie

NO FAIR i wanna learn japanese

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 6:04 AM

Dad just came back from the states the other day and brought me a new silver DS along with Soul Silver!! OMG its amazing!!!!! So yeah...now I'm addicted to yet another game X]

Bet you can't guess which Pokemon I started with ;D

Gecko @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 8:54 AM

I swear I'm one of the very few that has HG xD;

And this is awesome :3 I'm guessing you started with Cyndaquil? ;D

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 9:48 AM

FFFFFFFF I got HeartGold the day it came out and i got soulsilver yesterday XD

I guess EEEERRRMMMMM JOHN ADAMS

soulwithin465 @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 1:10 PM

Well silver and grey are my favorite colors so I had to get soul silver >3<

And omg you guys are such good guessers =D

Star @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 7:05 PM

i got heart gold
because
i love hearts okay
2 days ago
and finished it yesterdayy
oh me

soulwithin465 @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 8:36 PM

H-how do you finish so fast?!?!
Omg I got it a few days ago and am still not half way done ;^;

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, April 6th 2010, 9:04 AM

I got to the kanto place in like 7 hours but got bored there and restatred

Khadyah @ Tuesday, April 6th 2010, 2:34 PM

Eeee I have SoulSilver too and I love it

My starter (and main) is a cyndaquil named Martin and I FREAKING LOVE HIM <333

Well he's a Quilava by now c:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 6:18 PM

I feel so out of loop since I don't have the game. I really want it, I just really don't want to pay for it xD
I LOVE BAYLEEF. <3 I usually start with a water type in the games but I'd probably start with chikorita if I got it.

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 8:30 PM

@ Majestic Cardboard Box: You are epically talented at Pokemon! My gosh *A*

@Khadyah: Yeah for Silver~!!! And omg yes Cyndaquil is an awesome one to start with! I actually usually would start with him but I felt the urge to try someone different~

@ Kyuubi-Kitsune: WHAT YOU DON'T HAVE IT?!?!??! OMG!!!!
jkjk! Yeah I wasn't even planning on getting it till this summer when I go back to the states but my dad took a trip there and suprised me *3*
And how much is it?? I've kinda lost track of the genral price of video games since they don't exactly sell the real deal over here > >

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 9th 2010, 12:56 PM

Ummm WELL I think the general range for new DS games is 30-40 dollars? I could get it, but I really, really hate spending my money, for things I NEED, let alone want. (quite dearly) I've been trying to convince myself that the game would be worth it, but I'm having a hard time doing so. xD
I really hate spending money. D:

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:31 PM

Wow, those leaves look amazing... I want to eat them *___* lol

hahaha I got HG the other day... XD

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Gecko @ Sunday, April 4th 2010, 5:11 AM

W.I.P

Really cannot be bothered to do this at the moment -W-; I'm really lazy haha

Star @ Sunday, April 4th 2010, 2:34 PM

you better finish
i love it so far

soulwithin465 @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 1:06 PM

This looks really awesome! I love how the space is being used. Hope you finish some time soon >u<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 6:19 PM

I love the ~*dynamic*~ pose here! Very cool!

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:30 PM

O_____________O
That pose.. that pose that pose!!!!!
it's so well done... I hope you will finish
T__T

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, April 3rd 2010, 9:37 PM

So ysterday i was looking up halloween stuff and made this guy

I'm supossed to be doing my homework for a way important class today

Gecko @ Sunday, April 4th 2010, 3:43 AM

Ohmy, this is totally amazing D:

Star @ Sunday, April 4th 2010, 2:34 PM

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
this is coooooooool
i like the camo
on his pants

soulwithin465 @ Monday, April 5th 2010, 1:07 PM

Okay...this is REALLY cool!!
I like the black dog/cat creature like thing and that mask is awesome *A*

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, April 8th 2010, 6:20 PM

I like this.
This is cool.
I like his face behind the mask too lol

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:29 PM

that is one sweet pose... holy mutha

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, April 2nd 2010, 12:21 AM

work in progress

Gecko @ Saturday, April 3rd 2010, 9:13 AM

Nyeee I love your stuff ;; <3 Finish soonplz~ <3

Star @ Saturday, April 3rd 2010, 3:28 PM

dfgdfg indeeeeeeeed
look at that
coloring

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:28 PM

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT
this is soo cool
and your coloring skills are
like
epic

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Gecko @ Thursday, April 1st 2010, 5:39 AM

I'm at school in I.T, last day of term so we're messing about :>
Trafalgar Law icon, because I think I'm obsessed dfgsfsgs

Star @ Thursday, April 1st 2010, 8:05 PM

at my school
in I.T.

you get to make
flash animations
and stuff
... its not fair

im in band ;A;

Seidal @ Monday, April 12th 2010, 5:27 PM

omg.. that shading... <3333

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Seidal @ Saturday, March 27th 2010, 10:31 PM

wip...
crits, redlines, or suggestions are super welcome~

I found a new solution... mech parts for anatomical nuisances XD
and... I might save this lineart for later.. my coloring styles keep on changing @_@

(Edited on March 29, 2010, 7:00 pm)

Khadyah @ Sunday, March 28th 2010, 7:08 PM

I agree, but you did it so wonderfully <3 I can't wait to see the finished result.

Star @ Monday, March 29th 2010, 1:05 AM

no crits or anything here
but like
this is so lovely
i cant wait
to see it done
i love your style
its so unique
and
pretty
youve improved so much in like 2 months

Seidal @ Monday, March 29th 2010, 1:20 AM

Dawwwww thank you guys--- <333
Y'alls love and nurturing here has helped me to blossom a bit ^_~
I'm pretty sure...

Gecko @ Tuesday, March 30th 2010, 3:14 AM

Woah, detail much ;; <3 This is looking amazing! <3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 5:13 PM

HOLY.
JUST... HOLY.
This is amazing.

unicorn_horse @ Saturday, April 3rd 2010, 3:28 PM

Oh me gosh.
This is amazing. :O

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Gecko @ Tuesday, March 30th 2010, 12:09 PM

So, I haven't been that active lately -W-; Mostly to do with school

And lack of sleep.
No sleep = Razortooth Bubbi.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 5:08 PM

Hahhaaa xD
I get hyper when I don't get sleep. xD
I really love how you shaded this <3 It's really neat!

Seidal @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 6:03 PM

wow, that coloring is so cool X3

Star @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 11:20 PM

indeed that coloring is so coooooool
nyaaa~~
i wish i could shade like that /jealous

Gecko @ Thursday, April 1st 2010, 3:07 AM

Thanks guys

<3
And Starrr, don't be jealous D: But then again I'm jealous of your human skills, so I guess we're even? -w-;

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 5:30 PM

Sorry bout being inactive/uploading this poop guys, this computer's been really slow lately, so I haven't been a-using it. Taking a computer break, heehee. :C

Seidal @ Wednesday, March 31st 2010, 6:02 PM

those weighted brush strokes are delicious ^__^

Gecko @ Thursday, April 1st 2010, 3:06 AM

Mmmm~ I am liking those lines <3

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