Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Gecko @ Friday, June 4th 2010, 6:12 PM

Nyark~ c:

Anne Dyari @ Friday, June 4th 2010, 10:35 PM

Very cute! Like the little bow.

Khadyah @ Saturday, June 5th 2010, 6:54 PM

Eeee I like it c: I love your lineart c:

Star @ Saturday, June 5th 2010, 9:06 PM

hi
this is really pretty

Gecko @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 1:44 PM

Thank you guys~ <33 ;u;
I felt bad for being away a while and only coming here to vent, so I think I'll stay this time xD

Seidal @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 10:19 PM

Ooh I like this style-- and that bow is cute XD

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 11:19 PM

yea, i like the bow too Cx
and those eyes are very pretty!

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Anne Dyari @ Sunday, June 6th 2010, 5:01 AM

yeah.. title says it all? XD

Gecko @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 1:43 PM

Holy awesome! *u* How can you speedpaint like this? It's too cool ;A; <3

Star @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 7:31 PM

serioius dude
i think
everyone is jealous
of theses SKILLS

Fallout @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 8:25 PM

thats a really pretty speed paint ; ;
im lovin those bats

Seidal @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 10:19 PM

@$%@#$@%%!!
brain doesn't comprehend
awesome overload

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 11:18 PM

ffffffff Hellsingggg ftw

You drew Alucard veryyyy awesomely (awesomely?.. is that a word?.. no.. i dont think so XD)

love the piercing red eyes!

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Gecko @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 2:30 PM

New deviantART id~ C:
I have a new dA for those who want it, it's coldchristmas.deviantart.com

I chose that username because it's the name of a haunted church near where I live, I visited it, and lets just say... I now believe in the supernatural xD; It may not seem like I'm tellling the truth, but I managed to pick up a ghost o-o; I'm going to see my friends mum to know more about it in a few days, but maaaaan I feel like I can't do anything by myself anymore xD

Tree @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 3:01 PM

i don't believe in ghosts at all i think it's all a bunch of mumbo jumbo but this is super cute!! i love the eyes

Gecko @ Monday, June 7th 2010, 3:10 PM

Yeah, neither does my dad xD But I've started to believe in it, and I'm quite interested in it now :>

And thank you~! <3

Tree @ Tuesday, June 8th 2010, 4:41 PM

aha i used to believe in them but i just.. i guess i grew out of it??
i mean i'm not saying belief in ghosts is childish!! but i haven't believed in them in yeeaarrs
BUT EVERYONE IS ENTITLED TO THEIR OWN OPINION i'll be quiet now

Seidal @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 10:21 PM

Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeee!
...I think.. I'm more afraid of car accidents than ghosts.. lol but that's just me.

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 11:17 PM

bawwww this is adorableeee!
i love the little face Cx

im not sure if I believe in the supernatural.. I guess it'd be neat to experience it, but at the same time, very frightening

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Gecko @ Wednesday, May 19th 2010, 12:51 PM

So, in England, we are not allowed to wear our footie shirts for the world cup because it causes offence to the other people here

OUR COUNTRY. I will still wear my shirt and support my team!

Star @ Thursday, May 20th 2010, 8:01 PM

yay for gecko! n_N

Tree @ Saturday, May 22nd 2010, 1:32 PM

i know! it's ridiculous. if you're offended by it, then why are you in england?

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Gecko @ Tuesday, May 11th 2010, 2:04 PM

Things actually keep getting worse -.-
I feel like I'm always left out, none of my friends seem to invite me out unless I'm busy doing something else, and then they all rub it in my face

On another note, I did well in my end of year exams C:

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, May 11th 2010, 7:52 PM

Aw, that's no good. Well, summer's coming up, so you'll have more free time for fun?

Congrats on exams!
Pretty dragon is pretty ^^

Star @ Tuesday, May 11th 2010, 9:49 PM

augh same with me!
well most of the time
they do something stupid
like this thing called the pepsi dance

...ugh its so gross over there
the guys try touching your ass when you dance with them

Seidal @ Wednesday, May 12th 2010, 4:30 PM

Goodness lady...
I'm happy you did well on your exams, despite all these crazy happenings!
And the eyes you drew are so endearing-

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:47 AM

Quick speed paint before I go off to bed~
Just got back from the states and omg I'm SOOO happy I got to see this movie!!! It was amazing! If you love animations and haven't seen it yet I definatly recommend you go and watch it!!!!

Arf @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 9:46 PM

AWESOME movie

I got to see it Saturday and loved it. Toothless is my favorite!!

Pretty sweet sketch you did right here~

Star @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 9:47 PM

i wanna seeee it so badly

dude your coloring is so coooool

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:59 AM

That shading.. is sweet.. especially with the blues and purples *drool*

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 10th 2010, 3:41 AM

Aww thanks guys <33

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, May 11th 2010, 7:46 PM

*echoes Seidal*
I liked this movie a lot! The characters were so cute ^w^ aaaahhhhh

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Gecko @ Sunday, May 9th 2010, 3:03 PM

Sooo.... I haven't been here in a while

It's due to the fact I've been really stressed lately, my parents argue whenever they cross paths, my brother has started to become more naughty everywhere and exams at school do not help

And I'm also moving to Yorkshire at the start of the Summer holidays... leaving everyone I've ever known, including my dad, my older sister and my best friend

...fun.

Star @ Sunday, May 9th 2010, 3:10 PM

awwwwwww that sucks ):
exams are stupid aughhh
i have them soon ):
& youre moving? leaving some of your family?
thats not good ):

..uh anyways
that some nice shading & lighting you got there

Gecko @ Sunday, May 9th 2010, 3:17 PM

Yeah it does suck :c -sad-
Thank you! <3

Seidal @ Monday, May 10th 2010, 8:21 PM

Ahhhh! Good to see you back, Gecko~!
I'll be praying for your recovery and happiness
>___<

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beatrix @ Sunday, May 2nd 2010, 5:47 PM

tryout one s.s.

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:29 AM

Oh man I like how this is turning out!

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:58 AM

Me too!!!!!!! It reminds me of something, but I can't put my finger on it... O__O

ShiPainter
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Khadyah @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 6:42 PM

For another art trade |D;

(Edited on April 29, 2010, 8:21 pm)

Star @ Thursday, April 29th 2010, 9:44 PM

dude

the rainbow on its chest
is so boss
& your lines are neeat~

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 12:36 PM

Hahaha I love the lineart again xD
And yeah the rainbow gradient is nice :3

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:28 AM

Haha this is the most awesome character design EVERRRRRR!!!!

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:56 AM

Wow, that design IS really awesome.
And the world needs more rainbows.
Khad, you're improving so much!!

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 6:36 PM

last one

(Edited on April 29, 2010, 3:56 pm)

Star @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 6:56 PM

thats a lot of hw you got.
i love the little creatures you always draaw~

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 7:41 PM

project.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 12:37 PM

Haha it's so freaky/cute x3

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:55 AM

Wow, that's gotta be the cheapest prescription ever... if... it's a prescription...

Those toes are cute. I want to pinch them

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 5:24 PM

more more homework

Star @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 6:56 PM

ill remember that!
and his expression
is funny x3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 12:37 PM

Nuuuuuuu
gggg this is so cute!

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:53 AM

oh.. oh my...
This character reminds me of Falcor from Never-Ending Story. ^___^

ShiPainter
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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, April 28th 2010, 4:35 PM

more homework

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 4:24 PM

gggggggggggg this is so freaky/cute <3

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:26 AM

Man I wish my homework was like this!

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:52 AM

The pressure... must be building???
AHHH THOSE BEADY EYES! They burn into my arteries!!!! <3

ShiPainter
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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, April 27th 2010, 6:47 PM

working on a school project

(Edited on April 28, 2010, 8:13 am)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 4:25 PM

he's going to have high blood pressure
I just know it :3

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:50 AM

so... much... salt...
will it survive? I hope so.. it's cute..

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Khadyah @ Monday, April 26th 2010, 7:59 PM

For an art trade for someone on dA c:

(Edited on April 26, 2010, 9:49 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, April 27th 2010, 10:30 AM

KHAD DOLL good to see ya <3
HNNNNNNGG your lineart is so nice!!

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:24 AM

Those lines are so smooth *u*
And I like the outline of blue with the dots~

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:50 AM

Omigawrsh those are some delicious looking lines... and the bg is adorable :3

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Aikara @ Friday, April 23rd 2010, 9:40 PM

title .-. tryout numbah one

came out bleh though

(Edited on April 28, 2010, 1:07 am)

Star @ Thursday, April 29th 2010, 9:55 PM

ugh
im too lazy to crit
so ill just say a few things
the hand thats holding the staff
seems too straight
uh
i dont get the leg on the right
i think youre trying to do perspective
idk

uhhh
are you using burn/dodge
its better
to just pick the colors
& color it in
because burn & dodge + pencil = a no no
uhh
i really like the right hand
the pinky seems too small
but its really nice

your lines are really clean & i appreciate that

anywho, goodluck on your next tryout.

Aikara @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 12:15 AM

thanks for the crits

i didn't use dodge and burn though.. -takes note to make sure her shading doesn't look like that-

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, April 30th 2010, 4:37 PM

uuhh yeah i was too lazy to crit too so I waited for someone else to crit first gggggggg
but yeah agreed w/ star
I think next time you should use thicker lines and taper
cuz it looks really choppy here??
And errr I just think that you should also give your next one a more realistic background that the characters are interacting with?
Cuz I've seen your stuff on PHO and you tend to do this sort of background a lot... and I'd really like you to stretch yourself :3

(Edited on April 30, 2010, 4:38 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, May 3rd 2010, 10:21 AM

Wow I really like the box theme going on here! Good use of textures and design!
I also enjoy the color pallet; the colors go very well with each other. However, there are a few major flaws within the anatomy of the subject. It appears that you were attempting to do something with perspective, and while I do applaud you for doing something as tricky as perspective, I find the proportions to be rather wonky. The difference in size between the left and right eye is rather distracting and the left leg seems rather awkward. Also relating more to anatomy the arms seem a tad bit too long. But aside from that the shading is quite decent. It?s obvious where the light source is coming from and I find the object he?s holding rather interesting. Overall this is a nice tryout and I can see that you put quite a bit of time and effort into it! For your next tryout I suggest using references such as photos or real life observation. They?ll help with getting proper proportions and correct anatomy. Well, good luck and I hope this helps >u<

(Edited on May 3, 2010, 10:23 am)

Seidal @ Saturday, May 8th 2010, 12:49 AM

The boxes look cool in the bg and the gadget/weapon he's holding in this right hand works well with it. That texture in the hair is pretty sweet too <33

The crits above covered a lot. As for suggestions or tips, I sometimes like to use lines that aren't 100% black, but instead a really dark grey. They sometimes give an illusion of cleaner lines. Also, the bezier / curved line tool works really nicely on living subjects than straight lines. It might be frustrating at first, but I can see an improvement from your last tryouts

Good luck! Keep going!

(Edited on May 8, 2010, 11:28 am)

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