Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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Tansy @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:15 PM

tansy's back
back again
tansy's back
tansy's back
tansy's back

woop woop.
anyway.
critsplease?

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:43 PM

nice, I love frogs <33
I really like this picture, especially the shading, but I don't like how the stomach looks, it's a little flat. I like the lineart though, good luck!

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 6:48 PM

Ahh, awesome! Yay frogs x3

Crits...
The lilypad seems to be at a different angle than the frog, so the frog looks to be floating.
Very simple picture but that's just fine, I absolutely love it <33

Good luck!

Random @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 7:13 PM

What an interesting idea for a tryout. c:
I love this. But I'm not for one who likes solid lines with watercolors.

ShaoShao @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 9:15 PM

I think you need to give more thought to lighting. What parts of the lily pad and frog are caught in the light, what obscures the light and where does the light not reach because of that?

There are a number of areas where the shading feels inconsistent; you expect it to continue for the rest of a limb but it doesn't. Things like that. The best way to understand these things is often to look at real life examples, try shining a lamp down onto a toy animal and note how the shadows are formed. Move the light or toy about to see what happens. It's something we see every day but fail to really notice.

Where use of the oekaki applet is concerned, I think you could work on blending shades a bit better, or deciding how blended you want them. Are you aiming for soft or hard? With more gradual shades you'd expect soft, but the effect isn't so seamless when the beginning and end of different shades are so distinguishable.

Criticism aside, the lines are wonderfully smooth and neat with great tapering. I have no doubt that this skill will be a strong factor in whether you're accepted. Looking at your DA, I'd say I'd probably vote you in on your willingness to draw a variety of things and complete pictures as well. I hope everyone else feels the same. :3

(yeah, I suck at praise... sorry orz;;)

(Edited on July 4, 2008, 9:16 pm)

Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 7:17 AM

heh heh
not many people are a fan random
including me ;____;
but thank you for the crits guys!

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Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:34 PM

All done (:
I decided Trick, after my Manetric on Ruby x)

Her nickname is Sheebs though.
I just like that name (:

No shading. Too lazy!

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 8:23 pm)

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:58 PM

omg so cute
i think sheebs idk why
it sounds cute lol

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:23 PM

Thanks Mango (:

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:32 PM

apparently you named him trick lol
dang i really like the colors
and anatomy
very nice

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:36 PM

lol, yeah, her nickname is Sheebs (:

thank you<3

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:05 PM

hahah that makes sense
i could do somefanart for this guy
defintaly worthy of it except ill do it on wob sense im not excepted yet

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:14 PM

Really?
Woah. Thanks<3
I feel special lol.

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:21 PM

lol

Taz @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 8:26 AM

sheebs.
heh.
such a cute name. ^^

i love this designn.
its like...a giant pikachu mixed with a black lab or something. :]

Zero @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 1:17 PM

anatomys @w@

I love the paws

Laurz @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 10:54 AM

Haha I agree Taz xD
Pikawolf!

Thanks Zero<3

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Kyogre @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:36 PM

EDIT: Done!

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 1:04 am)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM

Good luck ! >w< This looks amazing so far !!! <333

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM

fhewkj love the background btw ; u ;

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 12:18 am)

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:23 AM

Nice, good Luck!
I'm trying out too~!

Zest @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 1:06 AM

This looks -so- awesome <33

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:18 AM

hey, this is really awesome! ^^

your watercolors are great. and the pose was a good choice too, the picture flows very nicely.

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Random @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:44 PM

I would asume that the people who are accepted at WOA are accepted here. |3
Ignore this picture.

Zest @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:51 PM

But I can't ignore it...such amazing perspective ;O;

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:16 PM

That we are Random, that we are (:

Hehe. I'm getting the evil eye.

It's Chesse's fault x)

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Mara @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 4:40 PM

Safety Save :3
Subeta commish
Someone really liked the Skitty picture and asked for something similar

(Edited on June 29, 2008, 4:42 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 12:40 PM

Mara <33 *3*
I love this fhjkew ~!

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:14 PM

Your coloring ;-;

ily<3

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Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 3:17 PM

whoooot intermediate is finally open. :]

yeah so i see we have some tryouters here already? ^^

well hi i'm Taz and as far as i know, im the only admin for this oekaki at the moment. although im sure within time there will be one or two more.

ask me if you have any questionss. :]

Tor @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 3:35 PM

Hey buzz.
you're sexy. :3

lolsorry. the picture made meee

TAZZZZ. xD <3

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:14 PM

Buzzums!!!
I love her lol

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Deceised @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 10:21 PM

My favorite food turned into a dog (:

Cheeeeeseee!!!

Also, do we need to try out here
if we are accepted into WOA?

Moo @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 11:18 PM

Nope~ No need to tryout if you're already accepted over there.
C:

PS I LOVE CHEESE<3

Deceised @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 1:04 AM

Okie dokes (:

Thank you<3

Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 2:34 PM

reminds me of Cheese from Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends<3

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:13 PM

lol, I know right Taz.
But she isn't xD

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Rupe @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 1:34 PM

s.s

Star @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 4:00 PM

wewt good luck to you <3
looking good so far!~

Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 2:33 PM

i love the color scheme. :]
good luck! ^^

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treefaec @ Tuesday, November 13th 2007, 9:26 PM

i'm making a journal layout for a friend.

Eiffel @ Thursday, December 13th 2007, 10:56 PM

for mayaaaaa (:

treefaec @ Monday, December 17th 2007, 5:09 PM

hindeeeeeeed

Claps @ Friday, June 27th 2008, 3:17 PM

it is really cute i love it! u should draw another one!!!

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Arf @ Saturday, April 19th 2008, 8:06 PM

-yawn- e.e

Detective Wolf @ Sunday, April 20th 2008, 2:53 PM

o mai

;D

Arf @ Sunday, April 20th 2008, 11:03 PM

lol, I still haven't figured out what I'm making them give weird looks at XD
--And I drew oon here cuz I didn't want people to see my awful peoples,lol...

Detective Wolf @ Monday, April 21st 2008, 2:02 AM

you should draw me
they should be looking at me
^w^

Detective Wolf @ Monday, April 21st 2008, 2:02 AM

and your people arn't bad
i like them

Arf @ Monday, April 21st 2008, 2:53 PM

thankies DW-- That's an awesome idea too XD I'll have to think more on it though... <3

Detective Wolf @ Tuesday, April 22nd 2008, 6:08 PM

or or maybe
it's ~*the phantom of the opera*~

Arf @ Thursday, April 24th 2008, 11:26 AM

Orrr, maybe I'll leave blank and let people's imagination do the rest 80
(which is another way of saying, I'm too lazy to finish it XD)

Tor @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 3:57 PM

Whilst reading the comments i felt like saying...
"SHOULD BE A STREAKERRRR... or DW... WITH LEAF-CLOTHING-THINGS." xD
Ive always loved your styley

(Edited on June 26, 2008, 3:57 pm)

Arf @ Friday, June 27th 2008, 11:06 AM

awww nun thanks, and lol your ideas are so original xD

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POODLEPEE @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 3:33 AM

It's official.
So, here's what's "going down:"

1. Not being done anymore.

2. Getting 3 new admins.
We will be getting 1 for each oekaki. This will create a total of 2 admins for advanced, 2 admins for intermediate and 3 admins for beginner. Our current admin for intermediate is Taz. If you would like to apply for the position, please o-mail me and i'll make the form whithin 2 days.

3. O god... Banners...
Everyone knew this was coming. I'm pretty picky on banners and such, so i'll make a new post on the banner stuff.

And my dearest appologies to Moo.
She made me this awesome bg and I didn't even use it. I'm REALLY sorry. I'll talk to you later about that.

Arf @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 9:58 AM

Awesome!~ Looks like you've been working PP<3 Glad this place is finally opening 8D I like the color of the bg, btw ^^ This is all so exciting, Woot!!

Moo @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 11:41 AM

No need to apologize~ I don't mind at all.
I'm actually liking this bg better than mine. It matches all the other kakis.
XDD

Star @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 12:44 PM

WEWT

now i can tryout c:

Tor @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 3:58 PM

WOO.

IT'SOPEENNNNN.
*parties with silly-string*

Kyogre @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 4:09 PM

Yeeesssssshhhhh!

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blcfuzz @ Monday, April 14th 2008, 7:40 PM

Saftety save.
Yeah, well i have to go home from megans.
so yeah.
ill be here tommorrow to finish.

(Edited on April 14, 2008, 9:29 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Monday, April 14th 2008, 9:37 PM

this oekaki isn't open just quite yet
i would wait until it opens
^^;

blcfuzz @ Tuesday, April 15th 2008, 11:12 AM

Seriously?
I feel.
retarded.
uhm.

yeahhh...
>.< WOO for retardedness!
anyway.. uhs.
should i finish this or just leave it?

Detective Wolf @ Tuesday, April 15th 2008, 12:17 PM

you can leave it and when it opens, one of the admins can bump it
^^

blcfuzz @ Wednesday, April 16th 2008, 6:34 PM

can uhm, this somehow be moved to advanced? or can i like finish it here, and then someone upload it in advanced? cause i wanna tryout there.

Moo @ Wednesday, April 16th 2008, 7:37 PM

I'll move it to advanced once you're done, no worries.

Good luck<3

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Claw @ Sunday, December 23rd 2007, 1:46 AM

WIP.

Yeah. Yeah. I know this oekaki is closed. I'm just getting away from the shit at WOA. Theres spam and crap, and everyone's pissed off at someone there.

Claw @ Tuesday, March 25th 2008, 12:21 AM

holy shit this is old....

Jaderain @ Monday, March 31st 2008, 6:40 PM