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[83] Artist: Random | Title: No Title | Time: 48m 35s
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Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 8:04 AM
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 I was drawing something else but my computer lost all it's memory and it wouldn't send the other picture.. At least i got a screenshot :D I'm too lazy to ask an admin or someone to upload it though
And im also too lazy to ask for upload access bawwww /lazy bum


(Edited on July 19, 2008, 8:19 am)

Ichigo @ Saturday, July 26th 2008, 9:32 PM
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 Eet is so cute! So is this. I like spots!


[82] Artist: Murderous | Title: What Ivvee donnneee | Time: 4h 27m
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Murderous @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 8:25 PM
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 Done

(Edited on July 16, 2008, 12:05 am)

Zest @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 12:17 AM
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 ...
/touch

Hazuza @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 1:03 AM
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 ... *hides behind ribcages* AHHH HALP IM IN JAIL ):

*KICK'D*

Hee. That aside, dude this is awesome |D and creepy. Awesomely creepy. Idk D: *gets kicked out*

Gizmonian @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 2:39 PM
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 God. Your art never fails to impress me and make me jelous.


I can't even shade that well, let alone, I can't even taper.

Detective Wolf @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:00 PM
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 duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddeeeee
simply stunning

Tansy @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:16 PM
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 ahhhh.
paws.
one word -
paws
<3

Random @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 3:42 AM
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 ........ I love the quotes/phrases you put in your pictures ;;; you have the most beautiful lines and coloring <3

Murderous @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 12:54 PM
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 Bawww

thank you so much guys <333

Fluffy @ Thursday, July 24th 2008, 5:59 PM
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 Oh my god.
Can I have it's babies? O;

you are amazing.


[78] Artist: Tansy | Title: No Title | Time: 54m 3s
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Tansy @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 6:04 AM
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 Hello old beans.
I asked how many more votes I needed, and DW said wait a day or so for a change, so I did... and no change.
Tell me if I'm not good enough to be here though ;___;

This is a character I keep drawing.

Random @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 11:21 AM
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 I think you're good enough. And this guy is really cute. <3


[76] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 4h 21m
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Ichigo @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 11:34 PM
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 Finished!

(Edited on July 11, 2008, 9:56 pm)

Tor @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 6:22 PM
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 WHY ARE YOU SO GODLY!!!!!!!!!!??????
... i mean... i didn't look. *coughs*

Touch @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 7:59 PM
mymy;
It's lovely .0.
I can't think of good words.


(Bearbeitet am July 11, 2008, 10:21 pm)

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:01 PM
oh i love it...

plusook @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 4:18 PM
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 oooh... this turned out really soft and pretty. Looks nice. :D


[75] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 31m
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Ichigo @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 5:45 PM
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 watercolor shading

Zest @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 7:48 PM
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 well holy crap .-.
excuse me while i find words to describe this gorgeous piece!

unicorn_horse @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 8:12 PM
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 What Zest said.

plusook @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 11:10 PM
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 what unicorn-horse said.

x3

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:51 AM
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 this made me swallow my tongue.

Hoshii @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 12:43 PM
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 This is so pretty o3o <3

Laurz @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 4:17 PM
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 archive.

unicorn_horse @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 5:18 PM
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 Yes, archive.

Zest @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 11:53 PM
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 archive archive archive!

Random @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 11:26 AM
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 Holy shah. I agree with everyone, archive
I love the background the most. ;; I love the sunset feel, and the trees. And you captured the fur pattern in an amazing way <3

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:01 PM
oh my gosh... it's a bobcat... :D

Moo @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 9:17 PM
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 -archive'd-

My goodness this is beautiful<3

Zest @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:29 PM
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 whoo, first archive!
you totally deserved it <33

manic-sonic @ Tuesday, October 7th 2008, 3:15 PM
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 wow, this is beautiful, congrats on the archive, well deserved :) <33


[74] Artist: Laurz | Title: No Title | Time: 34m 44s
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Laurz @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:18 AM
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 Rhiloooo!!

I cannot draw dragons ):

BLAHHHH.
(:

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:03 PM
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 yes.
yes you can.
this is very sexy <3

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:51 AM
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 YES YOU BLOODY WELL CAN!!!!!

Kyogre @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 12:05 PM
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 This is cute! :D
Yay dragons! <333


[73] Artist: mango | Title: tryout 2 | Time: 36m 45s
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mango @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 6:44 PM
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 s.s.
um second tryout
i got permission to go straight to my second
sence my first got messed up
im not sure if its still there but you can still see it if you need it
ill finish later

daaaaang ive been really into the rainforest theme lately.....wierd
i used to not like them that much....lol

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 8:23 pm)

POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 11:56 PM
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 GL
:D

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:52 AM
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 goodlock!!!!!

Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 1:03 PM
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 this looks so sweet!
Good Luck


[71] Artist: Kyogre | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 1h 42m
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Kyogre @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 12:23 AM
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 S.S. :)
Almost done!!

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 12:20 am)

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:53 AM
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 Goodluckkyy.

mango @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 4:53 PM
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 mmm this is gonna be so great once you finish


[68] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout two. | Time: 2h 19m
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Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 9:41 AM
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 heh heh heh... crits/voteplease?
not exactly sure how this is going to turn out x)

POODLEPEE @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 12:49 AM
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 Innnnnnnnn.
Your shading is lovely.
I'm not an expert on human anatomy, so I can't really crit, but...
the feet/legskinda bother me a little.
I wanna say too simplistic almost?
I'm not sure though.
I also really liked the colors you used throughout the whole picture as well :D
Good luck and hopefully someone can crit you better than me
XDDD

Mizuchu @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 3:57 PM
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 This is really cool, I like the pose.
Though it is a little awkward...The waist line bugs me a little, and the legs are a little off. they should "flow" more, so to speak. The fingers are very strange, on the hand to the right especially, but i realize there aren't too many references for poses like that, and hell, I can't do something like that lol. I really like the clothing folds and the coloring.

I would say In, but I'm not sure if I'm in or not lol

Zest @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 6:23 PM
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 I -love- the colors you used and the sky looks awesome <33

I'm not good with human anatomy, but the fingers look pretty strange to me...I think the head looks a bit small, but like I said, I suck at human anatomy, harhar.

The shading kind of bugs me and the person and trees don't seem to be casting a shadow?
I also think some of the grass would come over the blanket, if you know what I mean. The blanket would probably be kind of crumpled where the person's hands are.

I'm sorry but I say out D=...I think you have a lot of potential, though.

Hoshii @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 3:15 PM
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 I say... IN

because your shading is awesome <333
and you're intermediate (:

there are some crits but im too lazy right now XD

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 11:35 AM
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 3 ins + 1 out.
that's not overly unanimous.
so am I in?
thanks for the crits/votes!

Zest @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 7:49 PM
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 Being the only one to say "out" makes me feel even meaner Dx

Chelly @ Monday, July 28th 2008, 3:39 PM
I say out D;


[66] Artist: Tansy | Title: tryout 1 - froggeh. | Time: 57m 56s
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Tansy @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:15 PM
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 tansy's back
back again
tansy's back
tansy's back
tansy's back

woop woop.
anyway.
critsplease?

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:43 PM
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 nice, I love frogs <33
I really like this picture, especially the shading, but I don't like how the stomach looks, it's a little flat. I like the lineart though, good luck!

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 6:48 PM
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 Ahh, awesome! Yay frogs x3

Crits...
The lilypad seems to be at a different angle than the frog, so the frog looks to be floating.
Very simple picture but that's just fine, I absolutely love it <33

Good luck!

Random @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 7:13 PM
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 What an interesting idea for a tryout. c:
I love this. But I'm not for one who likes solid lines with watercolors.

ShaoShao @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 9:15 PM
I think you need to give more thought to lighting. What parts of the lily pad and frog are caught in the light, what obscures the light and where does the light not reach because of that?

There are a number of areas where the shading feels inconsistent; you expect it to continue for the rest of a limb but it doesn't. Things like that. The best way to understand these things is often to look at real life examples, try shining a lamp down onto a toy animal and note how the shadows are formed. Move the light or toy about to see what happens. It's something we see every day but fail to really notice.

Where use of the oekaki applet is concerned, I think you could work on blending shades a bit better, or deciding how blended you want them. Are you aiming for soft or hard? With more gradual shades you'd expect soft, but the effect isn't so seamless when the beginning and end of different shades are so distinguishable.

Criticism aside, the lines are wonderfully smooth and neat with great tapering. I have no doubt that this skill will be a strong factor in whether you're accepted. Looking at your DA, I'd say I'd probably vote you in on your willingness to draw a variety of things and complete pictures as well. I hope everyone else feels the same. :3


(yeah, I suck at praise... sorry orz;;)

(Edited on July 4, 2008, 9:16 pm)

Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 7:17 AM
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 heh heh
not many people are a fan random
including me ;____;
but thank you for the crits guys!


[59] Artist: Laurz | Title: No Title | Time: 56m 41s
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Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:34 PM
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 All done (:
I decided Trick, after my Manetric on Ruby x)

Her nickname is Sheebs though.
I just like that name (:

No shading. Too lazy!

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 8:23 pm)

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:58 PM
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 omg so cute
i think sheebs idk why
it sounds cute lol

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:23 PM
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 Thanks Mango (:

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:32 PM
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 apparently you named him trick lol
dang i really like the colors
and anatomy
very nice

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:36 PM
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 lol, yeah, her nickname is Sheebs (:

thank you<3

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:05 PM
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 hahah that makes sense
i could do somefanart for this guy
defintaly worthy of it except ill do it on wob sense im not excepted yet

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:14 PM
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 Really?
Woah. Thanks<3
I feel special lol.

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:21 PM
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 :D
lol

Taz @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 8:26 AM
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 sheebs.
heh.
such a cute name. ^^

i love this designn.
its like...a giant pikachu mixed with a black lab or something. :]

Zero @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 1:17 PM
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 anatomys @w@

I love the paws

Laurz @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 10:54 AM
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 Haha I agree Taz xD
Pikawolf!

Thanks Zero<3


[55] Artist: Kyogre | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 1h 32m
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Kyogre @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:36 PM
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 EDIT: Done! :D

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 1:04 am)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM
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 Good luck ! >w< This looks amazing so far !!! <333

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM
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 fhewkj love the background btw ; u ;

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 12:18 am)

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:23 AM
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 Nice, good Luck!
I'm trying out too~!

Zest @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 1:06 AM
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 This looks -so- awesome <33

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:18 AM
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 hey, this is really awesome! ^^

your watercolors are great. and the pose was a good choice too, the picture flows very nicely.


[53] Artist: mango | Title: tryout 1 | Time: 4h 6m
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mango @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 10:01 PM
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 O DANG I CANT FINISH CUZ THE PICS GOOOONNEEEEE DDDDD: NO FAIIIIIIIIRRRRRR ):

um safety save
my fingers hurt and my tablet pen is being weird so ill finish tomorrow maby? or tonight...idk
yeah

if you really want to see it then just watch the animation :D

(Edited on June 30, 2008, 10:03 pm)

ew i so do not want to shade herrrr

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 5:25 pm)

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 7:59 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 10:51 PM
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 Bawww this is cute ;___; <33333
Good luck!!

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:50 PM
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 Woah.
This is definetly awesome so far,
you could have done this at WOA x)

Best of luck<3

Do you have a Da btw?

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:24 AM
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 ......I hate you xD
<333

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:16 AM
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 this is looking great so far! ^^
and yes...i agree with Laurz. this could also be done at WOA. :3

Star @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 2:22 PM
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 FINISH PLZ
i wunt to seeeee itttt alllll <3333

Arf @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 10:55 PM
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 flkgdshglsk YOU HAD BETTER GET ACCEPTED MAN. <3333 ilyourart

Zero @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 1:18 PM
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 oh my good god this is gorgeous

Arya @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 6:42 PM
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 This is so gorgeous *o*

What do you use for internet? Firefox or Internet Explorer?

If when you retouch it's a blank canvas, and you're using Firefox, load WOI in Internet Explorer, if you have it, and retouch. It should load up.


[50] Artist: Random | Title: No Title | Time: 21m 51s
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Random @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:44 PM
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 I would asume that the people who are accepted at WOA are accepted here. |3
Ignore this picture.

Zest @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:51 PM
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 But I can't ignore it...such amazing perspective ;O;

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:16 PM
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 That we are Random, that we are (:

Hehe. I'm getting the evil eye.

It's Chesse's fault x)


[48] Artist: Mara | Title: Subeta commish WIP | Time: 1h 55m
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Mara @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 4:40 PM
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 Safety Save :3
Subeta commish
Someone really liked the Skitty picture and asked for something similar

(Edited on June 29, 2008, 4:42 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 12:40 PM
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 Mara <33 *3*
I love this fhjkew ~!

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:14 PM
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 Your coloring ;-;

ily<3



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