Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Spoo @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 3:52 AM

the oekaki i drawl at is down so i decided to drawl here.

i guess this is a WIP tryout?
i just needed a place to drawl
idk!?

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 8:02 PM

Holy crap, that's cute.
I love the face! ;o;

skullywolf @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:42 PM

HI SPOO
this is adorable bawww

i'm trying out at advanced here
/lame

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:55 PM

Adorable ;A;
Finish soon kk?

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issi_007 @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 4:01 PM

Ahaha, haven't tryed out anywhere since June XD
Ahaha.

Anyways, first tryout, not done. Background ideas? My mind is dead.
I was thinking of some backyard leading to a varied forest further back.
But yah, this will be somewhat lineless. x3

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 8:01 PM

Ohh, I'm lovin this so far. ;D

I like that backyard idea. xD

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 9:19 PM

Yep, yep.
Backyard idea is cool.

Now that you mentioned that I can't picture any background that would be better. xD

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Robot @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 9:46 PM

Kekeh.
Tryout numero uno is finally completed.
;^;
... whatever.

(Edited on August 27, 2008, 3:30 pm)

Ichigo @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 2:17 PM

You are such a great artist you know that? I superly love your shading.

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:34 PM

Bawh. ty so much. ;m;
Seriously, you're gonna give me a big head or something. xDD

Daisoku @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:46 PM

Damn,You are really good.
You should get accepted. NOW.

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 7:56 PM

Wow, you have really awesome skills.
I especially love the background, and those trees omg.

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Moo @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 2:03 AM

first time I've actually drawn here since this place opened.

SO HI<3

Tansy @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 4:34 PM

HI MOO -wavewave-
gosh this place kind of died
but I'm not even sure if I made it in
so whatevur D8

(Edited on August 12, 2008, 4:34 pm)

Ichigo @ Tuesday, August 12th 2008, 7:05 PM

HIHI.

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Jumbalaya @ Wednesday, July 30th 2008, 9:02 PM

okay I promise now that I'll stop changing my tryouts.. I really didn't like the other one so I deleted it..
I'm loving how this is turning out though 8D
I love using the watercolor tool now XD
This'll be a new charrie of mine.. Her name will be Era C:
but yea, this is a s.s.
I'm gonna go outside and take pictures of my sister riding her horse

oh and I got a new haircut yesterday C:

I'll finish this laterrrr

Edit:
Done!

I quite like how this turned out actually.. But I may do a bit of touching up though because I'm still not satisfied with the lineart on the dog D:
And, I couldn't really think of many background ideas.. so I just did that XD i hope it's okay though C:

oh and one more thing,
I'll be away from tomorrow(the 1st) to next Monday(the 4th) because I'm going up to see cousins, so I probably wont be able to start or finish my second tryout yet but I shall do that when I get back home C: But, goodbye anyways!
(Edited on July 31, 2008, 12:19 pm)

(Edited on July 31, 2008, 12:43 pm)

mango @ Saturday, August 2nd 2008, 4:40 PM

oh myyy that is one amazing picture
ugh so so pretty
goodluck i hope you get in
this is so pretty
i love the colorfullness
and the char is absolutly beautiful

Ichigo @ Monday, August 11th 2008, 5:37 PM

THIS IS PRETTY. IT IS FLIPPN ACCEPTED DESPITE THE COMMENTS.

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Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 9:41 AM

heh heh heh... crits/voteplease?
not exactly sure how this is going to turn out x)

POODLEPEE @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 12:49 AM

Innnnnnnnn.
Your shading is lovely.
I'm not an expert on human anatomy, so I can't really crit, but...
the feet/legskinda bother me a little.
I wanna say too simplistic almost?
I'm not sure though.
I also really liked the colors you used throughout the whole picture as well

Good luck and hopefully someone can crit you better than me
XDDD

Mizuchu @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 3:57 PM

This is really cool, I like the pose.
Though it is a little awkward...The waist line bugs me a little, and the legs are a little off. they should "flow" more, so to speak. The fingers are very strange, on the hand to the right especially, but i realize there aren't too many references for poses like that, and hell, I can't do something like that lol. I really like the clothing folds and the coloring.

I would say In, but I'm not sure if I'm in or not lol

Zest @ Sunday, July 6th 2008, 6:23 PM

I -love- the colors you used and the sky looks awesome <33

I'm not good with human anatomy, but the fingers look pretty strange to me...I think the head looks a bit small, but like I said, I suck at human anatomy, harhar.

The shading kind of bugs me and the person and trees don't seem to be casting a shadow?
I also think some of the grass would come over the blanket, if you know what I mean. The blanket would probably be kind of crumpled where the person's hands are.

I'm sorry but I say out D=...I think you have a lot of potential, though.

Hoshii @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 3:15 PM

I say... IN

because your shading is awesome <333
and you're intermediate (:

there are some crits but im too lazy right now XD

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 11:35 AM

3 ins + 1 out.
that's not overly unanimous.
so am I in?
thanks for the crits/votes!

Zest @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 7:49 PM

Being the only one to say "out" makes me feel even meaner Dx

Chelly @ Monday, July 28th 2008, 3:39 PM

I say out D;

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Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 8:04 AM

I was drawing something else but my computer lost all it's memory and it wouldn't send the other picture.. At least i got a screenshot

I'm too lazy to ask an admin or someone to upload it though
And im also too lazy to ask for upload access bawwww /lazy bum

(Edited on July 19, 2008, 8:19 am)

Ichigo @ Saturday, July 26th 2008, 9:32 PM

Eet is so cute! So is this. I like spots!

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Murderous @ Tuesday, July 15th 2008, 8:25 PM

Done

(Edited on July 16, 2008, 12:05 am)

Zest @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 12:17 AM

...
/touch

Hazuza @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 1:03 AM

... *hides behind ribcages* AHHH HALP IM IN JAIL ):

*KICK'D*

Hee. That aside, dude this is awesome |D and creepy. Awesomely creepy. Idk D: *gets kicked out*

Gizmonian @ Wednesday, July 16th 2008, 2:39 PM

God. Your art never fails to impress me and make me jelous.

I can't even shade that well, let alone, I can't even taper.

Detective Wolf @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:00 PM

duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddddeeeee
simply stunning

Tansy @ Thursday, July 17th 2008, 4:16 PM

ahhhh.
paws.
one word -
paws
<3

Random @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 3:42 AM

........ I love the quotes/phrases you put in your pictures ;;; you have the most beautiful lines and coloring <3

Murderous @ Friday, July 18th 2008, 12:54 PM

Bawww

thank you so much guys <333

Fluffy @ Thursday, July 24th 2008, 5:59 PM

Oh my god.
Can I have it's babies? O;

you are amazing.

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plusook @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 4:19 PM

my first thing on intermediate, so now i've drawn on all the boards! |D

Messin' around with checkerboard textures and colors and stuff while doodling Obini.

Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 10:46 PM

You use textures in an amazing way ;;;; <3

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Tansy @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 6:04 AM

Hello old beans.
I asked how many more votes I needed, and DW said wait a day or so for a change, so I did... and no change.
Tell me if I'm not good enough to be here though ;___;

This is a character I keep drawing.

Random @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 11:21 AM

I think you're good enough. And this guy is really cute. <3

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Ichigo @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 11:34 PM

Finished!

(Edited on July 11, 2008, 9:56 pm)

Tor @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 6:22 PM

WHY ARE YOU SO GODLY!!!!!!!!!!??????
... i mean... i didn't look. *coughs*

Touch @ Friday, July 11th 2008, 7:59 PM

mymy;
It's lovely .0.
I can't think of good words.

(Bearbeitet am July 11, 2008, 10:21 pm)

silverdust 123 @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 1:01 PM

oh i love it...

plusook @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 4:18 PM

oooh... this turned out really soft and pretty. Looks nice.

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Kyogre @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 12:23 AM

S.S.

Almost done!!

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 12:20 am)

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:53 AM

Goodluckkyy.

mango @ Saturday, July 12th 2008, 4:53 PM

mmm this is gonna be so great once you finish

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mango @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 6:44 PM

s.s.
um second tryout
i got permission to go straight to my second
sence my first got messed up
im not sure if its still there but you can still see it if you need it
ill finish later

daaaaang ive been really into the rainforest theme lately.....wierd
i used to not like them that much....lol

(Edited on July 8, 2008, 8:23 pm)

POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, July 8th 2008, 11:56 PM

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:52 AM

goodlock!!!!!

Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 1:03 PM

this looks so sweet!
Good Luck

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Laurz @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:18 AM

Rhiloooo!!

I cannot draw dragons ):

BLAHHHH.
(:

Tansy @ Wednesday, July 9th 2008, 1:03 PM

yes.
yes you can.
this is very sexy <3

Tor @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 9:51 AM

YES YOU BLOODY WELL CAN!!!!!

Kyogre @ Thursday, July 10th 2008, 12:05 PM

This is cute!

Yay dragons! <333

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mango @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 10:01 PM

O DANG I CANT FINISH CUZ THE PICS GOOOONNEEEEE DDDDD: NO FAIIIIIIIIRRRRRR ):

um safety save
my fingers hurt and my tablet pen is being weird so ill finish tomorrow maby? or tonight...idk
yeah

if you really want to see it then just watch the animation

(Edited on June 30, 2008, 10:03 pm)

ew i so do not want to shade herrrr

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 5:25 pm)

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 7:59 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 10:51 PM

Bawww this is cute ;___; <33333
Good luck!!

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:50 PM

Woah.
This is definetly awesome so far,
you could have done this at WOA x)

Best of luck<3

Do you have a Da btw?

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:24 AM

......I hate you xD
<333

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:16 AM

this is looking great so far! ^^
and yes...i agree with Laurz. this could also be done at WOA. :3

Star @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 2:22 PM

FINISH PLZ
i wunt to seeeee itttt alllll <3333

Arf @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 10:55 PM

flkgdshglsk YOU HAD BETTER GET ACCEPTED MAN. <3333 ilyourart

Zero @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 1:18 PM

oh my good god this is gorgeous

Arya @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 6:42 PM

This is so gorgeous *o*

What do you use for internet? Firefox or Internet Explorer?

If when you retouch it's a blank canvas, and you're using Firefox, load WOI in Internet Explorer, if you have it, and retouch. It should load up.

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