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[149] Artist: Kii-chan | Title: No Title | Time: 24m 49s
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Kii-chan @ Wednesday, December 3rd 2008, 8:52 PM
my tryout.
s.s.

Murderous @ Sunday, December 28th 2008, 10:24 PM
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Good luck <3


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Groggy @ Monday, December 29th 2008, 1:36 PM
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 Don't mind Giz. That was seriously uncalled for.

Good luck with your tryout. :D It looks really cute so far. I adore the eyes and hair already.

? Space It ? @ Thursday, January 1st 2009, 12:12 PM
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 This looks adorable so far! Good luck! :3


[143] Artist: FajiTails | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 2h 29m
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FajiTails @ Tuesday, November 11th 2008, 2:38 PM
My second tryout which is not done.


[142] Artist: FajiTails | Title: tryout #1 | Time: 2h 42m
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FajiTails @ Monday, November 10th 2008, 4:36 PM
Done. I probably won't make it but worth a shot. Crits pretty plz ^^

(Edited on November 11, 2008, 2:46 am)

fishkabob @ Friday, November 14th 2008, 12:29 PM
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 its soooooo unactive here so I'm commenting. this is really cute.

im not accepted but i could do a redline if you want.

i hope some accepted people will comment soon. this is just stupid! come on guys make this place more active gosh darn it!

Zero @ Wednesday, November 26th 2008, 2:49 PM
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 There are A LOT of colour bleeds. Try cleaning them up a bit n__n
I shading is very soft, and is placed well in most places (except the tail, that part it gets confusing). The character is simply adorable! However, I'm not sure if background counts, because it does not interact with the character very well. I also think you could make your lines a little smoother, especially in the arm area. You can do this by using the bezier tool (not mandatory if you can draw good lines) and tapering. Tapering is when you erase the ends of the lines to sharpen them to a point. It makes the lines look much neater.

This is adorable, good luck on your second tryout!

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FajiTails @ Wednesday, January 7th 2009, 3:29 PM
Its my squirrel charrie. And i saw your other comments Lovley. Do you like being indcredibly rude? If you can't say anything nice keep your mouth shut.


[136] Artist: Khadyah | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 1h 42m
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Khadyah @ Monday, November 3rd 2008, 4:16 PM
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 I'm actually PROUD of this one! 8D

The clouds and the sky came out a little... messy, but I love the grass and the path. This was my first time using textures to shade and I think it came out kinda successful. Though I think I could have used a finer texture.

I'm seriously going all out on these tryouts. Just like the one before, this is my first time doing this pose, first time doing a background like this, and a first time trying out more detailed anatomy.

Now for downsides...

The sun came out undesirable and frankly Toboggan(the name of this character) doesn't really look like a fox, but just like a dog .3. . I'm not good at drawing differences between wolves, foxes, and dogs. Or any kind of canine D|

POODLEPEE @ Wednesday, November 5th 2008, 12:42 AM
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 You should be proud.
This came out very nicely.

Sorry for the absence of comments.
WOA isn't very popular yet.

ANYWAYS; crits C:
I do like the pose you have, but te body seems like it goes kinda skinny in the back. Watch your view.
Next, the shading is very simple. I don't see much wrong with it besides the awkward tone-look. When using tones, you need to switch the tone to make it fade into the base color.
Your lines are nice, but they need to be tapered! Come onnnnn tapering is fun C:
Also, the background looks a little rushed.

Overall the picture is adorable.
I would say practice for 6 more weeks though.
I don't think your quite there yet, but with a little practice, you'll surely make it!

Khadyah @ Thursday, November 6th 2008, 4:03 PM
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 O: ok... :3 Another 6 weeks it is


[135] Artist: ShaoShao | Title: Between the good and bad is where you'll find me | Time: 2h 50m
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ShaoShao @ Tuesday, October 28th 2008, 8:07 PM
Old character I recently found again while cleaning out ancient folders.

Points for anyone who completes the lyrics. Without google.

Edit:lolrepetitivelanguagemakesmepedantic

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Ichigo @ Sunday, November 2nd 2008, 6:51 PM
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 I personally think this is amazing and you are extremely good at making fur seem really soft. Maybe a little more darkness in some areas so it doesn't blend in with the background and maybe around the eyes too so it doesn't look plastered on. Good job with the head/face!

ShaoShao @ Tuesday, November 4th 2008, 1:09 PM
Thanks. Yeah, I've got to work on doing the background on the same layer too to stop that from happening - stop having it as an afterthought.

Eyes are always a bit of a mystery to me in lineless - it doesn't matter what I try they still look like googly eyes. Next time I'll try highlighting til much further in so the indentation is closer to the ball.

I'm surprised you didn't get on me about the tail, shoulder, paws, neck, stray leg, and random dark patches where I didn't cover the base right. They're quite a mess. ^^;;

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Tree @ Thursday, November 20th 2008, 3:42 PM
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 repetitive language makes me all fussy too ):
this is so pretty shao oh my gosh
the way you do fur with watercolours mmm.

Zero @ Wednesday, November 26th 2008, 2:51 PM
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 Holy snap you should be in advanced. If you are, please slap me.

Edit: okay you are. Wow I fail.

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issi_007 @ Tuesday, December 30th 2008, 1:09 PM
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this is amazing
I want this archived.

Ah, that smile is so pretty <3


[132] Artist: manic-sonic | Title: tryout #1 | Time: 1h 23m
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manic-sonic @ Tuesday, October 7th 2008, 3:02 PM
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 my first tryout here, i used to draw on a different oekaki, but things got a bit hard there. i joined this oekaki for my friend, and they said that i should tryout for here, soo i did :)

i hope you like it!

POODLEPEE @ Monday, October 13th 2008, 10:53 AM
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 GAH;
thats awesome C:
The intermediate oekaki is not very active yet :/
Your always welcome to the beginner or advanced anytime C:

CRITSSSS:
The shadin' looks pretty accurate, but it looks like it was rushed or done sloppy. Make sure your shading is crisp (unless style varies) because shadin' makes a pic. Your lineart looks really nice w/ the tapering and stuff, but when u get too close to a line with those water colors (that you used for shading) it blurs the pic and makes it look messy. I really like your background. It's simple & dosent take away from the pic.

I look forward to seeing your next tryout.
Goodluck C:

manic-sonic @ Monday, October 13th 2008, 12:49 PM
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 omg the first person to comment on this, and its the OWNER ;; im so happy now X3

yeah, who knows why i used watercolours, i NEVER use them. solids are a bazillion times easier.

and thanks :D

Moo @ Monday, October 13th 2008, 6:15 PM
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 PP pretty much got all of the crits~
Good luck to you C:

ShaoShao @ Monday, October 27th 2008, 7:41 AM
This has been bugging me for a while now. The shading is VERY off considering where you've put the sun. The sun is your light source, and while its light would bounce off other things and onto the subject, generally that light is only on one side of the subject and leaves the rest in shadow.

I suggest considering that before drawing a sun in next time - a sky scene doesn't necessarily need it to be complete and you avoid a lot of trouble by just saying 'the light source is higher up'. Also, having it in yellow can cause some confusion between realistic and more stylised/cartoony themes - realistically a yellow sun would give out yellow light.

I'd say that's more on advanced level though, a lot of people don't experiment so much with shading until quite far on in their development. It's worth thinking about anyway, the longer you know of something the more time you have to try incorporating it gradually.


[128] Artist: ShaoShao | Title: Hurf | Time: 2h 37m
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ShaoShao @ Saturday, September 27th 2008, 4:24 PM
There's no saving those back legs, lol.

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Cop out background is cop out.

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POODLEPEE @ Monday, October 13th 2008, 10:54 AM
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 Nice shading & interesting design.
It looks so mystic...
:O


[127] Artist: Jumbalaya | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 1h 32m
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Jumbalaya @ Friday, September 26th 2008, 12:44 AM
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 i'm pretty sure the timer is lying to you.. don't listen to it's liesssss...

well, s.s.
this shall be my second tryout C:

I cant rly do much.. I'm having friend issues.. :c but i think that's all over.. and i'm quite sure she hates me now. but i'm glad all the fighting is over.

finally getting around to finishing this..
I changed wut it was tho 'cos my last picture was ugly.. now it's way better 'cos I'm referencing from a real photo Cx
i love opossums :D

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lay-down-low @ Monday, October 20th 2008, 12:23 AM
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 lol this reminds me of my fav comics, there is Mizz.Possum with her three kids (i forget their names lol)
well, good luck!


[125] Artist: ShaoShao | Title: Hell | Time: 1h 57m
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ShaoShao @ Sunday, September 21st 2008, 12:18 PM
Will finish when I'm not so easily distracted.

Edit: Haha, check out all the immediate errors I didn't have time to fix.

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POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, September 23rd 2008, 10:40 AM
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 GOOD LUCK C:
Looking fiIIIIIIiiiine C;

Ichigo @ Friday, September 26th 2008, 12:01 AM
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 Oh god. *faint* So awesome.

Hazuza @ Saturday, October 4th 2008, 11:50 PM
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 HEIIIIII DD8

Tree @ Thursday, November 20th 2008, 3:43 PM
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 um junko i don't think shao's trying out she's accepted at woa
this is so awesome, i love the electricity.. stuff.


[122] Artist: Daisoku | Title: Tryout 3 - Eevee | Time: 4h 39m
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Daisoku @ Friday, September 19th 2008, 5:17 PM
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 All done! Finally!

Comments and crits,plzu.

And don't ask me why the mountains are like that. This IS pokemon world...
And the Sky DOES have shading. ^^'

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POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, September 23rd 2008, 10:40 AM
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 Nice shading so far.


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Moo @ Friday, September 26th 2008, 10:10 PM
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 I'm saying out, sorry :CC

Your shading is lovely on the eevee, the stump, and the mountains.Though I don't see why the sky should be shaded the way it is. During the day, the sky is normally the same shade of blue. If there's ever a different shade of blue in the middle of the day, it would either be because the sun is making the blue around it look brighter, or it gets brighter as it gets towards the horizon. Kind of like this:
http://homepage.mac.com/credmond/iblog/C1876264345/E1926659294/Media/RainierFromHiway.jpg
http://www.mindscapesonline.com/catalog/images/24sun_and_sky.jpg
Of course, there's sunrise and sunset, but they normally look like this:
http://www.freefoto.com/images/45/11/45_11_10---Sunrise_web.jpg
http://www.crh.noaa.gov/images/sgf/wxphotos/sunsets/sunset.jpg
Ok, on to anatomy and stuff... A pokemon isn't really the best thing to draw in a tryout, because their anatomy is very stylized. Plus, you made it harder by hiding most of the body with the tail. I'll redline, because I'm no good with critting anatomy.
(or at least I think so gdgs)
http://op.weazie.com/Chill_Pill_Oekaki/pictures/170.png
The back shouldn't arch as much as you drew it, and the legs shouldn't really curled up as much either. (the back legs lol)
the front legs are to stiff looking. Plus, there's no paws. The eyes shoudn't be that big, and the face has no structure to it. the nise should be sticking out more than it is, ans the shading shouldn't do what it's doing on the face.
My advice to you right now, would be to look at pictures of real foxes or dogs (or whatever else yo want to draw) and try to draw it like it is in the picture. if the legs bend a certain way when in a certain position, then try to incorporate that into your drawings C:
Good luck~

ps, sorry if my crits seem harsh vgdfgd I'm no good at them, and I gotta get used to the intermediate board |D


[121] Artist: Murderous | Title: There's going to be more. | Time: 53m 37s
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Murderous @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 10:32 AM
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 lol doodling <3

jeez, this oekaki is like dead :<

people need to draw here more.

Ichigo @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 7:43 PM
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 Cool awesomness. I love its tail and the real dark back legs. And the tone shading is really nice. :3

POODLEPEE @ Tuesday, September 23rd 2008, 10:41 AM
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 Fabulous style
And I adore this pose.


[120] Artist: Sun | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 1h 54m
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Sun @ Sunday, September 14th 2008, 7:23 PM
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 And now I'm done. D:

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Ichigo @ Sunday, September 14th 2008, 10:20 PM
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 Your pokemanss are so adorable! Its mouth = priceless. The eyes are so pretty! It's amazing how you do them.

Sun @ Sunday, September 14th 2008, 10:25 PM
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 Awww thanks. :D

Hoshii @ Monday, September 15th 2008, 1:20 AM
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 Ugh i love the eyes and the grass <33
AMAZINGGGG 8D;;

Sun @ Monday, September 15th 2008, 1:41 AM
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 Thanks :D <3

Murderous @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 9:12 AM
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 Gahh your skills make me jealous ;.;

I can't find anything to crit on 0.0
seriously.

Oh nevermind |D

Maybe i could crit on some shading.

cause Im just confused with the anatomy, plus its pokemon so its not my strong point.

Well, your simply amazing. But maybe the collar and that elbow fin should have some darker areas from being behind something (head and leg) hm. I think thats it |D I just got up so I can't honestly think at the moment.

anyway still, this is very lovely, the shading is just really neat, i love the legs and posture.



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Tree @ Saturday, September 20th 2008, 4:17 PM
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 oh this is so pretty

i say 'in' in advance ooooh rebel.


[118] Artist: maniac | Title: Your Mom's a | Time: 3h 2m
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maniac @ Sunday, September 7th 2008, 9:39 AM
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 Yeah This was going to be a tryout, but I didn't have the inspiration to finish it so :(

Can anyone make this image transparent for me?

Plus I couldn't think of a background

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Sorry bout that

(Edited on September 7, 2008, 10:02 am)

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 http://www.iaza.com/work/080913C/989780794122-iaza.gif ?-- Transparented. c:

Murderous @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 9:24 AM
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 Aw :< you should finish.

Its very cute.


[117] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 30m
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Ichigo @ Saturday, September 6th 2008, 5:37 PM
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 Wow. Totally spam. Delete if needed.

Moo @ Saturday, September 6th 2008, 9:52 PM
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 I JUST LAUGHED

SO HARD


OH MY GAWD<333
;u;

Summer @ Sunday, September 7th 2008, 7:11 PM
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 Y'know, they say that under Chuck Norris's beard, there's no chin... just another fist.

I giggled at this. C:

Arf @ Tuesday, September 9th 2008, 3:27 PM
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 kljsfklsdajgdl

d;slgk
Where did you think this awesome crap up?!!
those expressions are killing me..
oh and thanks for making me LOL in the library... and get stared at... ^^;;

Murderous @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 9:24 AM
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 dkfjsnfdksfn

<3333


lol wow

Tree @ Saturday, September 20th 2008, 4:18 PM
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 ffffffffdjsghdgk
this > anything


[116] Artist: Daisoku | Title: Tryout 2 - Shizuka ni tada mimamotteiru | Time: 2h 39m
Pic #96

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Daisoku @ Wednesday, September 3rd 2008, 3:59 PM
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 He's...in a wierd fieldy grassy place..?
Tryout 2 - Shizuka ni tada mimamotteiruuuuu :D

(Edited on September 16, 2008, 3:28 pm)

Arf @ Friday, September 5th 2008, 2:14 PM
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 finish soon!!~

Voodoo @ Wednesday, September 10th 2008, 5:29 PM
Draw him walking through water, man!
Or in a swamp or something.

But goodluck!

Murderous @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 9:29 AM
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 I'm sorry but I'm going to have to say out.

The background is a bit plain, and the legs look to...'bent'? and he doesn't exactly have a neck, I can redline cause i don't have paint or anything, anyway, he should be a slight bit longer because he needs a ribcage etc.

And i think the shadings alright, but just needs some work.

Look at some dog pictures I guess, look at how they are, there legs, how long they are, try and catch those small helping tips you can find. Like paws, belly, neck, head, muzzle, etc. and do the same with backgrounds, try and find a good perspective within it.

Daisoku @ Wednesday, September 17th 2008, 3:16 PM
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 Ohwell,I don't mind. I'll just have to wait a while 'till i'm a teen,then I MIGHT gain a little bit of skillz. ^^ Then I MIGHT try again. :/

Actually,I see what you meen with the legs,though I only see it in the front...

(Edited on September 19, 2008, 3:57 pm)



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