Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:30 AM

This was fun~ |3

Haha I should of been doing homework. ._.; Oh well.

So... Uh..... :333?

And crits on either? :x

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:17 am)

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 2:48 AM

Hurrhurr <333

Detective Wolf @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:10 AM

innnn

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:17 AM

ilu2. ouo

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:25 am)

Ichigo @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:03 AM

This is awesome! Nice cave scene. For crits I think dark shadows on your charrie somewhere would be nice and maybe more definition of the inside and gooves of the cave. The glowy things could have more definition and the mushroom looks like it's just floating there...lol.
But you did the scenery amazing! I love the sharp pointy things jutting out. They're neato. The small background outside the cave - love it. O3o

Anne Dyari @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:21 PM

The far back leg looks alittle far to the side, but other than that, good job! I say In.

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 1:08 PM

Thanks guys ^^

Yeah, I seem to put the back leg too far out a lot X-x I need to practice on that xD;

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Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 5:01 PM

wakey wakey eggs and bakey.

edit: guten morgen is German.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 10:19 pm)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:22 PM

Guten Morgen <3
NO WAIT
IT'S
NOT
MORNING
!!

Loveless @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:34 PM

but..
I'm already fully awake :>

those eyes are GORGEOUS

Thudd @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:09 PM

aww this is so cute ^^
Hey Toasteh, what language is that from?
Because in nederlands (most people know it as dutch) you say good morning "Goede morgen

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:49 PM

If I remember right
It's German

I had to take it in third grade, although I didn't learn much of anything. :I

Thudd @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 12:49 AM

okey >.>
Dutch is very much like German :B

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 11:27 AM

So I've heard. |D

Arf @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 2:23 PM

lol, Toasteh, I learned some german in 4th grade.. I don't remember crap tho... Guten Tag 8D
These eyes are fabulous<33

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 10:32 PM

Guten tag...was that "good evening" or "good afternoon??"
I
REALLY WANT TO LEARN
GERMAN NOW @_@

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:05 AM

Hahaha.....you made me lol xD..."Guten tag" means "Good afternoon"...I think....well..literally it's "Good day" xD....But I don't know,I don't learn German xD
Anyways,those eyes are adorableeee~~!I could stare at them all day...*w*

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 7:18 PM

OHHHH UPENDI YOU AND YOUR EUROPEAN-NESS. <333

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Hazuza @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 12:52 AM

THAT. TOOK TOO LONG. I spent so long on the BG but it still looks terrible xDD; (Edit; I should edit rain in o-o
... but I'm lazyyyy >: )

Mm... Trying to get in so I can help make this place active >:O Help my effort by... commenting.... or drawing someth.... And yeah ^^;

No idea when I'll get to the next tryout ><

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 5:25 am)

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 11:52 AM

Looks good so far, I like how the background is incorporated with the character, and the strong highlights on her are great!

Can't wait to see your nezt tryout ^^

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 5:49 PM

aww this is so beautiful~

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ShaoShao @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 5:28 PM

Done.

I've been a member of the advanced since like, September 2007, guys. Dx Why is it every time I draw here even admins think I'm trying out when I say nothing of the sort?

Anyway, this was a request for a fur called Niyoh. Tis his tricky chimera (I kept thinking dragon and getting it wrong :{).

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 8:18 am)

Daisoku @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 1:57 PM

OHGOSH SORRY. >.<'

Epic winnage though.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 11:06 am)

Kyogre @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 11:03 PM

Awesome design! Goodluck~

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:57 AM

skjdfklsdjfsdfj
<333

Voodoo @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 1:04 PM

Lolol who's been saying that? I guess it's cos people don't see you much..??

But this is pretty cool. I love the vibrant colours and the face, it's especially well done (: Nice combo of solids and watercolour, too.

Hazuza @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 11:23 PM

idk ouo it seems the only time people post is to tryout usually O_o

and most find the fullbody+background thing a pain, so they assume you did it only because you had to. ouo

That's how it went in my mind anyway.

--

Ahhhh, I like that wing~ And your shading...

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Daisoku @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 4:11 PM

I hope I can re-tryout now..

Anyways, the infamous scene in Sonic the Hedgehog OVI (The movie) where Sonic and Metal bang heads, and Sonic says: "You might know everything I'm going to do, but that's not going to help you, since I know everything you're going to do! STRAAANGE, ISN'T IT!?"
It's sorta frozen in time...
ANYWAYS.

It was completely done in watercolours.
Exept the sketch and the lines which I erased.
Other than those, it was done in watercolour.

Comments and crits plzu? :3

(Edited on January 11, 2009, 4:15 pm)

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 7:28 PM

You should be able to retryout. :>

Errr I can't crit, nor am I the person to ask when it comes to Sonic. :I
Sorry.

Daisoku @ Monday, January 12th 2009, 12:10 PM

It's ok. :3

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K0ji @ Wednesday, January 7th 2009, 4:41 PM

Not done D: anyway this is one of my many ways of colouring my pics.

Toasteh @ Saturday, January 10th 2009, 12:32 PM

Finish soon!

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FajiTails @ Monday, November 10th 2008, 4:36 PM

Done. I probably won't make it but worth a shot. Crits pretty plz ^^

(Edited on November 11, 2008, 2:46 am)

fishkabob @ Friday, November 14th 2008, 12:29 PM

its soooooo unactive here so I'm commenting. this is really cute.

im not accepted but i could do a redline if you want.

i hope some accepted people will comment soon. this is just stupid! come on guys make this place more active gosh darn it!

Zero @ Wednesday, November 26th 2008, 2:49 PM

There are A LOT of colour bleeds. Try cleaning them up a bit n__n
I shading is very soft, and is placed well in most places (except the tail, that part it gets confusing). The character is simply adorable! However, I'm not sure if background counts, because it does not interact with the character very well. I also think you could make your lines a little smoother, especially in the arm area. You can do this by using the bezier tool (not mandatory if you can draw good lines) and tapering. Tapering is when you erase the ends of the lines to sharpen them to a point. It makes the lines look much neater.

This is adorable, good luck on your second tryout!