Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Thudd @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 2:08 PM

It's not that bad so far C:
well...
S.S please
because I have to dry my hair before I leave for my socials exam

Groggy @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 4:58 PM

No, it's absolutely not bad, so far. It looks really good actually.

I look forward to seeing this complete. C:

Good luck with your tryouts.

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 9:36 PM

Looks nice so far! Good luck!

Thudd @ Wednesday, January 28th 2009, 2:10 PM

you know what... it won't let me load this again.
i restarted my browser. my internet, and my computer but nothing is showing up. Can I restart my tryout please?

(Edited by Toasteh)
I don't think anyone would have any problems with that. :>
I did that sooo many times when I was retryingout for the advanced...although I wasn't having any shi problems. |D

Thudd @ Wednesday, January 28th 2009, 3:54 PM

thanks toasteh <3

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.Psychopath. @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 12:06 PM

edit: I'm done!
gahhhh.. this took forever D:
well anyways, crits plz c:

I shall start on my second one tomorrow.

(Edited on January 27, 2009, 11:30 pm)

Arf @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 1:59 PM

I don't think tryouts are allowed to be critiqued before they're finished ^^;;

Thudd @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 2:10 PM

yeah..... that what i though too...
but it is lovely so far C:

Toasteh @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 4:05 PM

Yep, no tryout critiques. :C

Tryout suggestions are probably okay though...
Liiike not telling someone to fix something, more like an idea for a clever background if they didn't know what to do.

Like if I were trying out and I didn't have any ideas for a bg, someone could say "BEING CARRIED AWAY BY FIREFLIES" or some other such nonsense.

Groggy @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 5:07 PM

This looks really adorable so far. I love the ears, and the eyes. The over all concept is nice.
This is going to be really nice when its finished. c:

.Psychopath. @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 7:29 PM

oh sorry, i didn't know D:
-runs off to finish-

Hazuza @ Thursday, January 29th 2009, 2:18 AM

idk what makes or breaks an archive but sure xD This is awesome~

.Psychopath. @ Thursday, January 29th 2009, 6:17 PM

wow you guys really think so? o.o

(Edited by Toasteh)
YES

.Psychopath. @ Friday, January 30th 2009, 1:24 AM

oh wow.. thank you so much for the archive 8D
<33

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Bixie-Bee @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 12:24 AM

supposed to be yawning... but... I hate the big yawn mouth that animals get when they yawn.. but this is my fennic (sp? lol, I just refer to him by his name), Tiru.
He has little bat wings too.
<_< I need a definite paw critique, I used to be able to draw them... but.. well, after not drawing them for a couple years, I lost it.

Hazuza @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 1:11 AM

In. In plz.

Crits: Well, they're only nitpicky things. Like how you do ear-tufts; they're kinda... big xD It looks a little awkward. The yawn looks a little weird too... I think the jaw should be stretched a little more, and the tongue kept all the way in.
idk how to crit your paws D8 They're cool already~ Uhm... Maybe the front ones, in this sort of pose, I think pawpads would be fully on the ground, but idk ouo The fur on the back leg that shows it's separate from the body probably wouldn't have to go up so high in the front. I dunno about paws in general, but I think someone here had a good tutorial for them.
I love your coloring :3 The... er... the spotty effect? (idk what to call it D8) Is really fun and looks nice xD I think it would be cool if you cleaned it up a little though. <strike>Archive worthy maybe? D8 But I dunno what archive worthy is anymore Dx</strike> around the tail, particularly.

SORRY IF I SOUND MEAN WHEN I PICK THINGS APART LIKE THAT >.< This is still incredible >:

Where are all you awesome people coming from all the sudden xDD

Ichigo @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 7:58 PM

This is so cute! I really like it. The lines are nice and even though it has a very large back leg it's furry and I LOVE it. The background it a little sloppy but I get the idea where it is.

In.

Toasteh @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 8:34 PM

IN WUT?
DON'T YOU NEED TWO TRYOUTS?? D:

Kazzers @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 8:58 PM

lol you guys are confuzzling me xD

I'm not accepted here yet (because I keep procrastinating from finishing my 2nd tryout) but good luck! This looks awesome!

Hazuza @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 10:42 PM

... Lol well yeah, but I doubt their second one will come out terrible enough to get them turned away xD

*shruug*

Anne Dyari @ Friday, January 23rd 2009, 12:03 AM

Very cute! Love the soft shading, can't wait to see your second tryout!

fusion @ Friday, January 23rd 2009, 4:18 PM

this is just amazing <3

Bixie-Bee @ Friday, January 23rd 2009, 8:52 PM

^^, lol, backgrounds were never mah strong points, but thank you all for the crits and complements... looking at that hind leg though, it is pretty high, lol, ^^;; I was so worried about making it a good effort that I didn't know where the lil'bumpkin's knee should have gone..

shoulda pulled out some anatomy books but I was in a groove. I'll try at a better background for the next one, I'm slowly realizing that a background is really another few layers in the picture lol... but... I'm so lazy.
but, I'll definitely work out my next one more.. I hope it'll come out nicer ^^;
<_< also... I kinda sorta.. hunted Mad out.. Mad's new too, I used to watch her stuff on an oekaki she used to be on. lol, it took some effort, but I found mad!

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 24th 2009, 12:17 AM

Ah, that's cool xD

I hope you two stay here a while :> You're both great artists ^^

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Kinomi @ Wednesday, January 21st 2009, 3:51 PM

Done. Its a numbat! Comments and crits plz.

(Edited on January 22, 2009, 12:16 pm)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 21st 2009, 6:27 PM

Something to say--FINISH SOON

Edit: OH IT'S DONE YAY
I can't crit though...-cry-

(Edited on January 22, 2009, 9:02 pm)

Kazzers @ Thursday, January 22nd 2009, 8:59 PM

Hey great work! Good luck on getting in! Love how you did the face

Anne Dyari @ Friday, January 23rd 2009, 12:01 AM

Oh, very nice job, one crit though is to try and not let the colors bleed, I see abit of blue and orange that got into the character from the BG.
Other than that, great job ^^

(Edited on January 23, 2009, 12:02 am)

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 24th 2009, 1:45 AM

EDIT; Zong I talk too much.
Not quite sure how to crit the anatomy, since it's pretty good and I have no clue what a numbat is :>;

But I have some things on the coloring. It seems kind of rushed and really sketchy, which in some cases is fine, but like... on the main body it looks kind of weird :c (<-- my way to describe anything lol) It also doesn't seem to have that definite of a light source, with shadows on all sides in certail areas (mainly the head) and no to little shading on the back stripes.

The background's... really messy. But a lot of people have trouble with backgrounds, so you get points for the effort xP
I think next time you could look up some refs for the background, since it looks new to you, and you could take more time on it. The background is a part of the image too, so you should put just as much effort into it as you did the subject

My main tips on the background... Well, more texture, and more shadows. The way you shaded the sand makes it look water-like because of where highlights are, but you should remember that the sun hits nearly every part. Spread out the shading more next time~ And continue the highlights all the way through. You could try making the subject's layer invisible and working on the background alone to keep you focused. I don't get why there's a dark outline around the subject in the BG either *-*; Shading on the mountains (WHICH ARE REALLY ANNOYING TO MAKE ><) and the tree+rock would of been nice, too.

The sky you got half down. The blue fades from light to dark as it gets higher~ You should try putting more detail in clouds if you put them. Clouds even have shadows if you look at them

Though... I dun think there are clouds often in a desert setting...

I still like your subject and your lines, but as you're here, try to improve on your coloring. Look up references if you need to, and be patient! Little things like coloring out of the lines or missing spots can make a big difference in the result.

Good luck on your second tryout, too

(Edited on January 24, 2009, 1:46 am)

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Mad @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 2:28 AM

aha stuffed toys? my fursona's stuffed? -lame-
I hate this picture it took way to long and looks crap ;_;
originally she was going to be falling but I couldn't get the background right so I made it so she had completed her fall and well, gone splat. c:
(og yes and please feel free to crit anatomy since I. Can't. Do. It.)
(Edited on January 20, 2009, 2:32 am)

(Edited on January 20, 2009, 2:53 am)

Hazuza @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 3:06 AM

You should be trying out for advanced >:

Both of your tryouts were amazing! Since your style is kinda sketchy, I dunno really how to crit it ^^;

On this one, I'd just say that the chest around its arm looks a little off, and its right hind leg looks attached funny, but I can't redline or anything because I suck worse *0*;

On your first tryout, the paws looked a bit flat, but you can pull it off imo ^^ The mid-set of paws look a little closer together than the other sets because of the shading and the left one is a bit forward... I think you coulda shaded a bit better on the tail

Still, you draw awesome... ly.... Nice concepts, nice sketchiness, and I adore how you color~
I say in. Innnnnnn. *^*

Mad @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 3:08 AM

thankyou so much and I shall certianly take those crits into account.c:

Advanced you say? whoa I've only been doing oekaki for like a month I don't think i'm good enough for advanced x.x

Toasteh @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 5:37 PM

WIN

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 6:10 PM

IN.

And yes, you should try for advanced. (still, if you could help draw here that'd be epic sweet)

Mad @ Wednesday, January 21st 2009, 2:44 AM

well you guys inspired me, I did go and tryout for advanced if you want to see xD

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Mad @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 9:48 PM

purple no?

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:10 PM

I love. That fur. O_O
ffffff and that tail.

Can't wait to see your next tryout ><

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:26 PM

VERY PURPLE <3

Edit: lol it matches the layout.

(Edited on January 20, 2009, 10:57 am)

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, January 20th 2009, 6:09 PM

Oooh, wonderful texture of the fur, loving this!

Can't wait to see your next tryout!

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Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:30 AM

This was fun~ |3

Haha I should of been doing homework. ._.; Oh well.

So... Uh..... :333?

And crits on either? :x

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:17 am)

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 2:48 AM

Hurrhurr <333

Detective Wolf @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:10 AM

innnn

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 4:17 AM

ilu2. ouo

(Edited on January 19, 2009, 4:25 am)

Ichigo @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 10:03 AM

This is awesome! Nice cave scene. For crits I think dark shadows on your charrie somewhere would be nice and maybe more definition of the inside and gooves of the cave. The glowy things could have more definition and the mushroom looks like it's just floating there...lol.
But you did the scenery amazing! I love the sharp pointy things jutting out. They're neato. The small background outside the cave - love it. O3o

Anne Dyari @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 12:21 PM

The far back leg looks alittle far to the side, but other than that, good job! I say In.

Hazuza @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 1:08 PM

Thanks guys ^^

Yeah, I seem to put the back leg too far out a lot X-x I need to practice on that xD;

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Hazuza @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 12:52 AM

THAT. TOOK TOO LONG. I spent so long on the BG but it still looks terrible xDD; (Edit; I should edit rain in o-o
... but I'm lazyyyy >: )

Mm... Trying to get in so I can help make this place active >:O Help my effort by... commenting.... or drawing someth.... And yeah ^^;

No idea when I'll get to the next tryout ><

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 5:25 am)

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 11:52 AM

Looks good so far, I like how the background is incorporated with the character, and the strong highlights on her are great!

Can't wait to see your nezt tryout ^^

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 5:49 PM

aww this is so beautiful~

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Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:05 AM

Sparkley Ket wants YOU to be active on WOI.

Thudd @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:33 AM

i might try out.
but I don't think i could make it in...

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:35 AM

Doesn't hurt to try XD

Thudd @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 1:59 AM

yeah your right C:

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:16 AM

jfgjkgfkj It's adorableee~~~<3
Those eyes are so lovely and shading is beautiful too =3..I want that shirt C:

Toasteh @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 11:51 AM

I need to tryout here. :I

Daisoku @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:22 PM

:3 I would, though I can't really do my 2nd tryout as I have absutely no ins/outs/borderline on my 1st.

Loveless @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 12:23 PM

I will try D:

love them eyes.

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 1:47 PM

You need ins/outs/borderlines on your first tryout? I thought it was just your second?

Voodoo @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 2:42 PM

MISSINGNO BACKGROUND OMFG

Yeahhhh I SHOULD draw here
and me and the other admins should get rid of the remainding troll comments -braces self-

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 11:18 PM

I'm pretty sure you can draw both regardless of the comments you get on the first o3o

fusion @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 2:19 PM

that shirt is so killer lol
I would try out, but I would never make it

Daisoku @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 3:02 PM

It's kinda a re-tryout...

But it's re-tryout 1.

I can't think of anything to draw for re-tryout 2 anyway. x.x

(Edited on January 18, 2009, 3:03 pm)

Toasteh @ Monday, January 19th 2009, 3:52 PM

Welll when you retryout you really need to draw BOTH.
The only time you get ins/outs/borderlines on an odd numbered tryout here is if you're requested to do a third tryout.
You know
for further analysis.

Hazuza @ Saturday, January 24th 2009, 1:57 AM

.... I wonder what an 'almost in' looks like for this board?

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Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 5:01 PM

wakey wakey eggs and bakey.

edit: guten morgen is German.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 10:19 pm)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:22 PM

Guten Morgen <3
NO WAIT
IT'S
NOT
MORNING
!!

Loveless @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 9:34 PM

but..
I'm already fully awake :>

those eyes are GORGEOUS

Thudd @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:09 PM

aww this is so cute ^^
Hey Toasteh, what language is that from?
Because in nederlands (most people know it as dutch) you say good morning "Goede morgen

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:49 PM

If I remember right
It's German

I had to take it in third grade, although I didn't learn much of anything. :I

Thudd @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 12:49 AM

okey >.>
Dutch is very much like German :B

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 11:27 AM

So I've heard. |D

Arf @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 2:23 PM

lol, Toasteh, I learned some german in 4th grade.. I don't remember crap tho... Guten Tag 8D
These eyes are fabulous<33

Toasteh @ Friday, January 16th 2009, 10:32 PM

Guten tag...was that "good evening" or "good afternoon??"
I
REALLY WANT TO LEARN
GERMAN NOW @_@

Upendi @ Saturday, January 17th 2009, 5:05 AM

Hahaha.....you made me lol xD..."Guten tag" means "Good afternoon"...I think....well..literally it's "Good day" xD....But I don't know,I don't learn German xD
Anyways,those eyes are adorableeee~~!I could stare at them all day...*w*

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 18th 2009, 7:18 PM

OHHHH UPENDI YOU AND YOUR EUROPEAN-NESS. <333

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ShaoShao @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 5:28 PM

Done.

I've been a member of the advanced since like, September 2007, guys. Dx Why is it every time I draw here even admins think I'm trying out when I say nothing of the sort?

Anyway, this was a request for a fur called Niyoh. Tis his tricky chimera (I kept thinking dragon and getting it wrong :{).

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 8:18 am)

Daisoku @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 1:57 PM

OHGOSH SORRY. >.<'

Epic winnage though.

(Edited on January 14, 2009, 11:06 am)

Kyogre @ Tuesday, January 13th 2009, 11:03 PM

Awesome design! Goodluck~

Toasteh @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 10:57 AM

skjdfklsdjfsdfj
<333

Voodoo @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 1:04 PM

Lolol who's been saying that? I guess it's cos people don't see you much..??

But this is pretty cool. I love the vibrant colours and the face, it's especially well done (: Nice combo of solids and watercolour, too.

Hazuza @ Wednesday, January 14th 2009, 11:23 PM

idk ouo it seems the only time people post is to tryout usually O_o

and most find the fullbody+background thing a pain, so they assume you did it only because you had to. ouo

That's how it went in my mind anyway.

--

Ahhhh, I like that wing~ And your shading...

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Daisoku @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 4:11 PM

I hope I can re-tryout now..

Anyways, the infamous scene in Sonic the Hedgehog OVI (The movie) where Sonic and Metal bang heads, and Sonic says: "You might know everything I'm going to do, but that's not going to help you, since I know everything you're going to do! STRAAANGE, ISN'T IT!?"
It's sorta frozen in time...
ANYWAYS.

It was completely done in watercolours.
Exept the sketch and the lines which I erased.
Other than those, it was done in watercolour.

Comments and crits plzu? :3

(Edited on January 11, 2009, 4:15 pm)

Toasteh @ Sunday, January 11th 2009, 7:28 PM

You should be able to retryout. :>

Errr I can't crit, nor am I the person to ask when it comes to Sonic. :I
Sorry.

Daisoku @ Monday, January 12th 2009, 12:10 PM

It's ok. :3

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K0ji @ Wednesday, January 7th 2009, 4:41 PM

Not done D: anyway this is one of my many ways of colouring my pics.

Toasteh @ Saturday, January 10th 2009, 12:32 PM

Finish soon!

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Angol Moa @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 3:20 AM

Look at the title.

SS, not finished yet.

Arf @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 2:59 PM

lol, I know this style anywhere, your disguise does not fool me n_n
good luck~ this site is kinda dead, so take your time.

Angol Moa @ Saturday, January 3rd 2009, 3:41 PM

xD I wasn't trying to, but I want to make a new account for some reason...

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? Space It ? @ Saturday, December 20th 2008, 1:30 AM

Finished. :3

Aw, poor Sillie-chan has to be away from her boyfriend. D:
She misses him.

Timer lies by only a few minutes.

(Edited on December 21, 2008, 11:27 am)

issi_007 @ Sunday, December 28th 2008, 2:05 PM

Giz, there doesn't say anywhere that tryouts have to be a specific size.
And as far as I can see, this is full body.

Good luck c:
<3

Groggy @ Monday, December 29th 2008, 1:35 PM

Giz, do you not know how to critique politely, or do you just like being horribly rude?

Goodluck on your other tryouts. I'm not accepted here, so I don't think I'm allowed to critique or anything. :c But good luck!

(Edited by Arf)
advanced members are automatically able to draw on teh intermediate board/and critique tryouts.

Kyogre @ Monday, December 29th 2008, 4:30 PM

I'm so jealous of everyone's human skills

I'm not accepted so I can't crit though, but good luck!
And Groggy, if you're accepted at WOA I think you should be accepted at WOI too...

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