Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 3:22 AM

Zoro = loveplz

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:33 AM

I like that color green >D

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:37 PM

Zoro!!!!!!!!! He's my favorite One Piece character X3

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 3:10 AM

He's my husband/fave character :3

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 6:51 AM

Just felt like drawing some Pokemon~

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 1:13 PM

cute

chainedfox @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 7:07 PM

i like their expression

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:40 AM

Oh gosh yessss Pokeman!!!
I love the shine in their eyes *u*

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:14 PM

I reaaaaaaally like the way you colored and shaded these <3333

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Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 5:18 PM

Oh. My. God.
This is what you get when you have a bored Bubbi sitting on her laptop.
A wierd... thing.
I'm really proud of the tree though, I just wanted to pratcice bg's :>

Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 8:05 PM

That is an amazing shading technique, it's so smooth!

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:42 AM

T-that background...oh my...its...so pretty ;u;

By the way the shading style you used is pretty sweet~

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Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 11:43 AM

It's my 14th Birthday today :3 Yaay

chainedfox @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 11:48 AM

thats great, im turning 14 in march
omg,
i gotta draw u a b-day pic!

i like the shading on this

Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:03 PM

Thank you, but you don't have to! It makes me feel spoiled xD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:19 PM

Awww, Happy Birthday, hon!

I won't promise any giftart but I'll try to get around to doing some C:

Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:22 PM

Thank you c:
You don't have to draw me anything at all! I don't mind x)

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:41 AM

HAPPY LATE BIRTHDAY!

I always miss these things >A<

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Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 3:19 AM

Just a quick doodle of Chuu before school starts.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:19 PM

Oh gosh this is so cute <33

Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:26 PM

Thank you c:

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Gecko @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 12:12 PM

Birthday Present for my friend :3

Ichigo @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 1:06 PM

D'aaaaaaaw! it's adorable! I love the body. :3

Gecko @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 1:08 PM

Thank you

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:30 PM

Aww Rae's gonna love this <333 I really, really love your shading C:

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Gecko @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 3:28 AM

EDIT:
Done, I started at school, and couldn't finish, and I have my internet back so I've finished it now :3

(Edited on February 11, 2010, 11:30 am)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 7:50 AM

cute, you ARE improving quite nicely

chainedfox @ Thursday, February 11th 2010, 8:11 PM

i agree

i do like the design on this

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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 3:19 AM

At school again.
Had another argument with my mum last night, she's taken the internet away from me at home

I'm going to my dads tonight though, and he's got internet there c:

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 6:45 PM

LOL loop-hole? cute drawing

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:48 AM

I like how you have the thick black line here and there~

And its good your dad has internet! I want to see you draw more >3<

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Gecko @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:22 AM

Right, I was drawing something awesome yesterday, and as I went to send it in, my internet cut out, so I asked my mum ro reset it. She didn't. She told me to apologize because her partner called /me/ ugly

So I didn't save the picture.
And now they're not feeding me, I went to make a sandwich and they took the stuff off of me, so I didn't eat anything yesterday. I'm still hungry now, and probably won't get to eat for a while.

Btw, this was drawn with a school mouse

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:30 AM

Th-this was drawn with a mouse????? MY GAWD so gooooooooood!!!!

And I'm sorry =[ You should eat somethinggggg <3333

chainedfox @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 3:27 PM

i like the shading, and those eyes

wats wrong with drawing with a mouse? i always draw with one
i wonder wat using a tablets like

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:42 PM

Aaa I like the shading on this :3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 6:47 PM

good for you, standing up for yourself, this is cute, and no food? who does she think she is huh?

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Gecko @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:06 AM

Ref sheet for Ticket c:

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:57 AM

Man you have such a sweet style~!
I love how you draw legs!!

Gecko @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 11:39 AM

Haha thank you

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:25 PM

i like the nice smooth lines

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:44 PM

I love your style <333 I like the name Ticket, too C:

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 6:06 PM

Ref sheet for Dixon~

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:56 AM

I like the color choices OuO

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:27 PM

yes i like the colours C:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:45 PM

Oooh I'm liking the pattern on the fur ;3

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 10:31 AM

Timer lies~ I got accepted here, I might as well draw something worthwhile "/

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 1:43 PM

haha wow, I like how clean this is C:

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 7:56 AM

Ah gosh I love this character of yours <333

Man I have such a weakness for dragon realated stuff~

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:28 PM

neat shading

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Gecko @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 1:09 PM

Timer lies, I was eating dinner then had to look after my baby sister and brother for 10 minutes

Sooo, I guess I'm accepted in then?

-happydance-

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 3:04 AM

Yep you are in =D
And whoa I like this a lot! The use of lines for the shading has a pretty sweet effect!

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:29 PM

ooh the textures look cool C:

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Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:06 PM

I am SO proud of this, and I have no idea why D:

Tryout 2~
:>

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 1:57 PM

FFFFFFFFF I've alays failed a criting stuff XD. So I'm just gonna skip ahead to the part where I say In.

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 2:02 PM

I've never written a crit ever, so I guess I know how you feel? D; Thanks though

How many do I need to get before I'm officially accepted here?

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:12 PM

Haha, I'm not exactly in the mood to critique, but I'll take a shot at it~
I would've liked to see something more on the outside of the cave- it's just grass and sky, y'know? To me, it just makes the perspective feel... off... I can't explain myself at the moment so hopefully someone else will be able to later xD The lighting is a bit funky, too, like I'm seeing the way the shadows are being cast and... it just feels like the sun would have to be in our sight for it to work.. but, uh, idk. The cave is nice, but it still seems like you were lazy doing it

The anatomy of the leopard looks off, but I don't have the time to talk about it ...er... sorry xD
But this is overall a great tryout, I love the composition, and I say.. in!

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:14 PM

Thank you

<3
Eh, I was going to put in a sun somewhere, but I seriously fail at them and it would ruin it completely Dx

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 5:22 PM

In, love the composition of this, and the lighting really gives depth to the picture.
Yes, the blue sky and grass may be abit overdone, BUT, I think it puts an interesting perspective on it xP

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 8:23 AM

Oh my, this is a great improvement! I really feel you took the critiques given to you before to heart <3
The shading is much more dramatic and gives the image itself more character and depth. Also I enjoy the various details you?ve added to the cave. Rather than just leaving it as a plain old cave you added plants and rocks here and there which gives the eye more to look at. However, I do notice a few missteps. While the shading is nice overall it seems kind of blotchy in some places, specifically around the cave walls. Also the highlight shouldn?t be quite so thick. And to add to what Kyuubi had mentioned, I do feel you could have done something a bit more interesting with outside of the cave. Why?s the subject looking outside? What kind of environment does s/he live in? What feelings does the subject have? What?s the story behind this? Thinking about these things and then applying the answer to them visually can really increase the interest of a piece. While blue sky and green grass with the occasional cloud is accepted it?s quite clich?. Why not set up scenery that involves a change in seasons like fall or winter? Or draw a point of interest that the subject is focused on like an old rotting tree or a flock of birds. You can also depict the subject?s emotions through the colors you use. Add some shades of blues and violets here and there to express a calm and tranquil feeling. Or change the weather to a chaotic thunderstorm. These are all just suggestions! Overall this is a decent tryout and a wonderful improvement! And you should be proud of this! All in all I vote IN~

=]

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:30 PM

well, you're already in (lol late comment XD)
but i really like the lighting in this

and the background looks awesome!
welcome to WOI

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Gecko @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 2:57 PM

First tryout, not really much to say :I

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 4:32 PM

Herro! I'm Kyuubi, welcome, and I'm glad you're trying out!

I think you have a pretty decent chance of getting in.

My main beef with this is the shading- you've only shaded with one or two colors, and I don't see any highlights. Shading really puts together a picture, giving it definition and DEPTH. Depth is what I really like to see in a tryout picture C: I quickly did a shading/highlighting redline~ http://www.iaza.com/work/100131C/tttt51526.png - I'm also not sure if the sketchy shading was the best style to use, but, erm, I dunno. I DO think there could be major improvement on the tree & leaves, they should have more texture to them, y'know? The scribbly lines aren't giving the tree texture, it's just making it look.. half-donkey-ed

haha. But seriously, it doesn't look all that good

I'm no expert with solids, though, so I'm just gonna use tigerchic's picture as an example http://oekaki.weazie.com/pictures/1149.png See how (awesomely<3) she did the fur? Something like that could've been done to the tree/leaves.
Only other thing I'm having a problem with is the front legs: I mean, it's a dragon char, so the anatomy isn't set in stone, but unless the branch is really thick, the front legs should be more like this- er... maybe--http://www.iaza.com/work/100131C/tttttz60291.PNG
This is nice, though, and I can't wait to see your next tryout!

Gecko @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 4:56 PM

Oh wai thank you :3 I see what you mean with the texture on the leaves, and the shading, thanks for the links

Next time, I'll do something with more shading and an actual awesome background xD

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 10:46 PM

Oh gosh this is adorable! And those eyes!! EEEK too cute >u<

But yeah Kyuubi has pretty much said everything I would?ve so uhh as far as crits go that haven?t been stated?I don?t really know what to say?

I do love that you did this lineless though! It?s pretty tough to do! Well good luck >w< And I kinda did a redline~>

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn219/soulwithin465/redline.png

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:55 AM

yea i think Kyuubi and Soulwithin have pretty much summed things up.
I believe that with this little of shading, it looks a bit flat. and we want this baby to POP! haha
i do like those clouds tho C:

anyways, whatever Kyuubi and Soul said, i agree

good luck on your second tryout!

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