Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Niji @ Saturday, May 16th 2009, 8:20 PM

Someone bought a design from me and one of the options after buying a design is to get a reference sheet from me for it!

This is a possum with lemur markings named FURBALL. He was fun until the continuity he was part of died, then he was boring. :'L I still love his design! Hopefully his new owner will take care of him.~

Random @ Sunday, May 17th 2009, 12:14 AM

Woah, I really love its expression. x3

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Rupe @ Saturday, May 16th 2009, 1:13 PM

"Hold on Rae..Please don't leave me.."

Uh.. Scene from a roleplay. c:
Tryout one

Niji @ Saturday, May 16th 2009, 7:52 PM

Try researching muscle structure a little bit for tryout two! It can make your tryout look far more interesting.

Also the front paw closest to us shouldn't be turned towards as as much -- paws do turn inward as a dog is walking but that much. x3 On that same vein, the other paw should be turned in a little! Also, generally unless the animal is in full sprint, it will have at least one foot on the ground. It looks like he's trotting here.

Laaaastly unless it's one of the floppy-faced dogs I think the mouth is a little too low. Or if it is a floppy-faced dog then you wouldn't see the upper teeth, just the lower. x3

I like how you put movement in the image though, most tryouts I've seen on various oekaki is just the character sitting or standing there!

Rupe @ Saturday, May 16th 2009, 8:38 PM

Thank you very much <3

Oh and The face thing is kinda my style sorry D:

Konekochan16 @ Sunday, May 17th 2009, 10:15 PM

This looks good with the tones! I love that shadow beneath him and his colors

But, your anatomy is a little off and I provided a simple redline for you

http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/271/18335824.png

Hope it helps!

Rupe @ Monday, May 18th 2009, 4:08 PM

Thank you so much ;u;
you made it beautiful oUo

Toasteh @ Monday, May 18th 2009, 6:59 PM

I don't completely agree with the redline, so I'll see if I can go into further detail when I have the time to do one myself...even though it probably won't be so great AHAH -cough-

Anyway, anatomy aside you're having trouble shading. Tones are a GREAT way to shade, but they, like anything else, take a while to master. It would've been just fine using tones alone for the breath, so the outline isn't really necessary, but that's just my personal preference so I'll uh...move on.
The way you shaded the subject is rather sloppy, and it's hard to tell where the light source is. As previously suggested, please try and study muscle structure for your next tryout. It should help you with shading.

ERRGH OKAY I HAVE TO GET OFF NOW BUT I'LL TRY TO CONTINUE WHEN I GET BACK. PS, GOOD LUCK! <333

Loveless @ Sunday, May 24th 2009, 10:23 PM

Mmmmmm I know youuuu

Hai thar.

This is so nice, I love the tones c:

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Niji @ Friday, May 15th 2009, 2:37 AM

He doesn't really have a name, I just refer to him as walnut for conventionality's sake.

Anyway! A little dragon dude I've drawn everywhere for a long while. He's kinda my mascot or something. If I ever start watermarking my shit, he'd be the watermark. XD

I'll be continuing commissions after this assuming the oekaki stops being a jerk to me when I try to upload stuff. D:<

(Edited on May 15, 2009, 5:33 am)

Anne Dyari @ Friday, May 15th 2009, 11:45 AM

Awwww XP he's adorable!

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Loveless @ Sunday, May 3rd 2009, 10:02 PM

argh not turning out.

My head it like slime today so maybe i'll try again tomorrow.

POODLEPEE @ Friday, May 8th 2009, 11:05 AM

Eh.
Your pixels kick major ass.

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Niji @ Saturday, May 2nd 2009, 2:25 AM

Hated how previous commission was turning out so I'm redoing it, with permission from the payer.

Her next request is ICE CREAM. om nom. Just in time for summer, too!

Ichigo @ Tuesday, May 5th 2009, 5:16 PM

Really awesome! I love your shading andlineart those paws are amazing and I love the tones on the tail. The one on the right curled up is sooooo adorable. ^^

POODLEPEE @ Friday, May 8th 2009, 11:06 AM

Your shading is honestly beyond amazing.
I'm requesting a tutorial from you.

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Loveless @ Saturday, May 2nd 2009, 1:35 AM

I wanted to draw him.

here you go kaya face.

this be for yo

I swear, my ass is numb and my eyes are liquid ;__;

(Edited on May 2, 2009, 1:43 am)

POODLEPEE @ Friday, May 8th 2009, 11:07 AM

I really like how much detail you put into the fur.
I also admire your unique poses.
That paw is like da sex too.

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Loveless @ Wednesday, April 29th 2009, 8:01 PM

new icon

Toasteh @ Wednesday, April 29th 2009, 9:05 PM

FFF SIRESSSS <3
She's one of my favorites slfdj <333

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Ichigo @ Friday, April 24th 2009, 6:30 PM

theme
:DD Love this.

Toasteh @ Friday, April 24th 2009, 10:41 PM

Fff the theme hasn't been changed in a while. |D
CHI-CHI MAKES A GANGSTA GANGSTA

(Edited by Anne Dyari)
I will change theme on Sunday, not many people are active here, so I've been thinking this place could change every other week until it becomes more active.

Anne Dyari @ Friday, April 24th 2009, 10:47 PM

Epic win XD

Love the bandana and the baggyarse pants XP

Khadyah @ Sunday, April 26th 2009, 9:52 AM

Um I'm not accepted in Intermediate but I hope I can comment because I just HAD to comment on this ^-^;

This is the best thing ever ;o;

(Edited by Ichigo)

Of course you can comment! Ty very much. ^^

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Niji @ Thursday, April 23rd 2009, 2:10 PM

8 dollar commission for Jasken! This one's gonna be fun. He's kind of from a post apocalyptic / steampunk era and I -love- drawing that kinda thing.

DONE!

(Edited on April 27, 2009, 12:29 am)

Ichigo @ Thursday, April 23rd 2009, 6:42 PM

Amazing lineart.

I like the head in the bottom right.

Toasteh @ Thursday, April 23rd 2009, 8:20 PM

laskdjf :'D

Random @ Monday, April 27th 2009, 5:00 PM

you are a god

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Niji @ Tuesday, April 21st 2009, 12:06 AM

Art traaaaade.

Done.

there isn't much I like about this one Dx but ahh well, they like it.

(Edited on April 22, 2009, 8:14 pm)

Random @ Tuesday, April 21st 2009, 4:38 PM

this looks really cool so far
nrghhfgjkh i love your lineart it's so smooth~

Toasteh @ Wednesday, April 22nd 2009, 5:21 PM

Holy cow man.
Just.
Holy cow, you have one of the coolest styles ever. <3

Fl?ss @ Thursday, April 23rd 2009, 10:34 AM

What is there NOT to like in this?
I at least think it looks amazing o3o your shading/coloring is superb as always, I love how that cloth and those steel bars look... and I like the backrgound to it too... I can't see why you dislike it yourself D:

Toasteh @ Thursday, April 23rd 2009, 11:20 AM

AND YES CLEVER CENSORSHIP

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Niji @ Thursday, April 16th 2009, 2:51 PM

OKAY so this would be a tryout but apparently people accepted into the advance oekaki are also accepted here, woo!

anyway pantsless niji?! taking a bath

EDIT:: EE ARCHIVE thanks, you guys! :3

(Edited on April 19, 2009, 10:38 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, April 16th 2009, 5:56 PM

Nah, if you're accepted at WOA, then you're accepted here XPs

edit: btw, this is AMAZING.

edit2: I agree, I think this should be archived too.

edit3: I'm archiving this >: D

(Edited on April 19, 2009, 10:03 pm)

Toasteh @ Thursday, April 16th 2009, 6:10 PM

Yep.

Loveless @ Saturday, April 18th 2009, 11:01 AM

your style is so unique. I love it.

Toasteh @ Saturday, April 18th 2009, 3:53 PM

Augh yes.
Edward approves.

Niji @ Saturday, April 18th 2009, 10:13 PM

Toasteh;; I'm having a hard time deciding if that's good or not LOL

Random @ Sunday, April 19th 2009, 9:10 PM

um wow i think this should be archived. seriously look at that perspective and detail um wow.
i'm lovin' this character of yours, interesting colors~ i also like the little bunny and the other person in the background too. this is gorgeous..

Toasteh @ Sunday, April 19th 2009, 10:37 PM

DANG Anne got to the archive first. >:

Niji @ Sunday, April 19th 2009, 10:38 PM

everything comes before edward!

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Anne Dyari @ Monday, April 13th 2009, 9:09 PM

gaia sketch commish.

Hey guys! We need to be more active here T.T

Toasteh @ Monday, April 13th 2009, 9:39 PM

It's okay, sparkly Edward will bring in the ladies. n____N~~<3 -sparkleshinnne-

POLYGONS;; @ Monday, April 13th 2009, 10:47 PM

Oh EDWARDDDD D: <333
*blindedbysparkulz*
*faints*

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Loon @ Friday, April 10th 2009, 12:00 AM

tryout one, not done yet [obviously hah]

(Edited on April 10, 2009, 12:18 am)

Toasteh @ Friday, April 10th 2009, 11:26 AM

Finish soon!

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Tikitakk @ Wednesday, April 8th 2009, 10:28 PM

All I had time to do right now was the sketch >.>

My first Tryout, SAFETY SAVE =O

Toasteh @ Thursday, April 9th 2009, 7:30 PM

FINISH SOON THIS IS REALLY COOL

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Splatter @ Wednesday, April 8th 2009, 12:19 AM

This is my first tryout here. I had a background but it said " Excess data! exeeds over 50000 bytes" so I had to erase it but I will do one tomorrow or when ever I have time.

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, April 8th 2009, 9:34 AM

Can't wait to see this with a bg ^^

Loveless @ Wednesday, April 8th 2009, 11:20 AM

Dude, you are amazinggg

you are totally going to get in :>

I seriously love the pose.

Toasteh @ Wednesday, April 8th 2009, 4:45 PM

OOH FINISH SOON THIS IS COOL. <3

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