Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, December 19th 2009, 6:17 PM

I'm pretty sure i'm accepted here

(Edited on December 19, 2009, 6:18 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, December 20th 2009, 7:12 AM

This is one wicked cool icon!

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, December 20th 2009, 5:25 PM

Yeah, you're in xP Cute icon!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 22nd 2009, 6:54 PM

Yep, you're in
grrr, Im jealous of your pixeling skills >:D

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, December 26th 2009, 7:10 PM

Yhank you guys

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Khadyah @ Saturday, December 19th 2009, 3:33 PM

-sigh- Done <:3 I'm sorry that I'm bad at backgrounds, I haven't had much practice in them |D;

(Edited on December 20, 2009, 10:04 pm)

Toasteh @ Monday, December 21st 2009, 3:16 PM

Just a tip: if there's something you /know/ you aren't good at, it's a good idea to work on them before trying out here. What we're looking for (As far as I know) is a decent grip on anatomy, perspective, etc. but I think you could work on some things.
Speaking anatomically, the thing that stood out the most to me was the length difference of the arms. UMM. THERE ARE. OTHER THINGS. But I'm terrible at explaining things so I'll...do a basic redline.
I know you draw in a cartoon-y style, but it is important to have a solid foundation to work off of when you stylize something. I did think this was a cat at first glance though, so props there.
http://i50.tinypic.com/2uxz5sx.png
It's probs pretty bad, sorry!! I tried to keep your style in mind so...haha.
Well the torso was a bit long, so I shortened that...the legs (To me, anyway) didn't show much movement, assuming he's walking down the street. This might help you with that, or alternately you could take a trip to youtube haha...
Now the head is pretty huge...but that's okay, because in a style like this it doesn't stick out so much. In my redline...it totally does...but OKAY well this person pulled off the "Big head, small neck" stylization REALLY WELL, so that's kind of what I thought of: http://hellodingo.deviantart.com/art/kate-is-not-happy-about-this-146817933
When you draw an anthro like this, it's important to remember that it should be more animal than human; that's the appeal. So it would be helpful to study/sketch/whatever the skeletal and muscular structure of humans and whatever animal it's supposed to be.
...ehh just a tip, haha.

I'll leave the rest to someone else; I'm tired. Feel free to let me know if something is up with my redline.
As per the background, I'll put it bluntly. PLEASE work on perspective! It will save your life, I'm telling you.

UHH I don't know how to vote right now but I may...say something later, I kind of need to mull it over.
And good luck!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 22nd 2009, 6:30 PM

Toast covered a lot and I really don't feel like going over much...
here's something quick about the perspective of this... http://www.iaza.com/work/091223C/khad_delete74302.png
idk if the road is curving or something but it's easier to keep it straight
And Toasteh corrected this in her redline, but I'm gonna say it just in case you don't catch it: the way the torso is turned... it seems like it would be kinda unnatural and uncomfortable to be walking while in that position... maybe it's just me...
aaaannnd the b/g... looks kinda like a dodge/burn overload.. xD uh, so... yeah...
um but I think you're improving! I also don't really know what to vote but I'm thinking third? If you can incorporate more of what the crits that were given said your tryouts lacked in... then hopefully..!

[EDIT] Arrrg y'know I don't think I did the perspective thing right AT ALL hnnngggg so forget it
it shouldn't be completely parallel but kinda turn into the vanishing point... uh yeah... but the perspective on this isn't really extreme so idk. I'M TERRIBLE AT CRITIQUEING

(Edited on December 22, 2009, 8:10 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Friday, December 25th 2009, 12:34 PM

Your anatomy is definately improving, and I like the shading on the fur/skin.
The main things I'm having a hard time with is the strong texture over white of the street and background. When using texture(which I'm bad at too), try using the main color underneath, and when adding texture, change the hue to slightly off, so the texture is more smooth and blends in.
Also, I want dramatic lighting! -bad at that too- Throw in the lighting to match the time of day, strong during the early morning and evening. Lighting will tie the character and the background together.
I want to see a third... you're really close.

issi_007 @ Saturday, December 26th 2009, 1:12 PM

I've been sick all week, so I'm sorry if I sound a little harsh and mean. Ughhh sorry <33

I say third.

Try to stay away from pillow shading. It makes the image flat. Look up a tutorial on shading, as it'll show you a few concepts which I can in no way describe.

I do love how clean this is. However, you need to work on perspective. Even though the sidewalk is curved, it does not change the principles of perspective.

I love the colours you've used, though.

ffff aww those cheeks are adorable. ;o;

okay that's it.
Once again, sorry if I sound harsh. <33

Khadyah @ Saturday, December 26th 2009, 1:38 PM

Okay, third it is, thank you guys for the critiques, hopefully I'll do better on my third ^^

And I see that some of you guys are afraid of being to harsh but seriously, I can take it and I see all the points you guys are getting at so I'll try to work on my perspective A LOT (I kinda suck at it yes)

Now I gotta brain storm at what to draw |D; TIME TO GO TO SLEEP >:D

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Khadyah @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 4:26 PM

All donesies c: Crit away

I realize that my anatomy is probably off quite a bit because I have trouble with using real pictures as references :T I tried to do it a little but still... it probably didn't help that much.

Well anyway enjoy~

(Edited on December 18, 2009, 9:09 pm)

Arf @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:27 PM

bawww you beat me at getting your first tryout finished!! D: lol x3

good luck<3!

Khadyah @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:38 PM

Yeaaah well Arfie, that's because I, unlike you, don't have any life whatsoever c: I'm an incredibly unhealthy, malnutritioned, lazy, procrastinating, internet addicted young woman with a rash.

:3 And that's the difference between me and you. I finished this in one day solely because I spend to much time on the interwebs.

Thank you ^^

(Edited on December 18, 2009, 9:38 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:44 PM

Ahaha I agree with what you said to Arf... and I'm the same as you xD lol
Ok, I'm on my Wii right now so um, I'm not gonna crit quite yet... will get to it soon though...

Arf @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:47 PM

;__; i miss it when i was like you guys!!
luckily my Christmas break officially begins now that today is over!!

so i can waste my life on the cpu!! i want to finish and stop procrastinating!!

Khadyah @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:55 PM

@ Kyuubi-Kitsune: ...I didn't know you had a rash .-.

@ Arf: Yay for life wasting

-highfive-

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:57 PM

Arf, no. Just, no. Getting caught up in cpu world is the worst thing you can do (though I would like you to finish your tryout too).
Arrrg I'm homeschooled and my mom's not giving us Christmas break till Christmas eve T^T luckily I don't have co-op classes, but still... I hate school

@khadyah lol itchy dry skin=perpetual rash

(Edited on December 18, 2009, 9:58 pm)

Khadyah @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 9:59 PM

I'm home schooled too c: I think my mom is giving us a break because my older brother is getting a break in collage but I not 100% sure >3> But weekend is here

Yushness

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 10:03 PM

Yay home schooled buddies!! -high fives-
My bro's got break from college too, I think... I think he has finals early this week and then he's free C:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 11:37 PM

ok I'm on the computer now and can get to the critiques...
please note that I'm tired right now and am probably making zero sense...
Firstly, I love your style of shading/highlighting. The textures look lovely <3
The legs are.. off. The way a cat's leg bends is... Well, cat's stand on their toes, you see. When drawing full body of an animal, it helps for me to picture a person standing on their fingers and toes. here, I drew something crappy up: http://www.iaza.com/work/091219C/later116620.PNG
The same applies with the front legs; they're standing on their fingers: http://www.iaza.com/work/091219C/later233639.PNG
Ok, um, I'm not so confident in my anatomy so I could be wrong... anyway, I'll zoom through some crits...
The shading, although nice, seems to be misplaced in a couple areas. I can't really tell which angle the light source (the sun, I think xD) is coming from... I'm guessing around the top-left of the picture?? if so, it might be more like this? http://www.iaza.com/work/091219C/later390206.PNG
Also, the eyes... kinda bug me.. they're just... black... you couldt've added highlights or color or something? The background is nice, but a liiiiittle flat too...
um it's bedtime now so i g2g
but good luck on you next tryout!

(Edited on December 19, 2009, 8:07 am)

Khadyah @ Saturday, December 19th 2009, 12:03 PM

Okay I understand where you're getting at ^^;

And the thing about the eyes... he doesn't have 'em |D; I thought about adding something but I don't know how to shade a hole >->;

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, December 19th 2009, 5:58 PM

xD oh, ok. yeah idk how you'd shade that either.
Btw, you've improved so much from your previous tryouts <3

Toasteh @ Monday, December 21st 2009, 2:40 PM

Definitely an improvement from your past tryouts! However anatomy is still something you need to grasp better. You may want to practice drawing or at least looking at skeletal and muscular structure when you draw. The body itself is a bit thin and (Please don't take this the wrong way) looks a bit like a clay sculpture...? The legs and head look like they were just...stuck on there and as for the tail, it's much too thick at the base. Everyone's heard this many times before, but the tail is an extension of the spine. If it helps, you could try (When you're sketching) defining the spine, and that might help...
WELL OKAY I DON'T WANT TO COVER ANATOMY ANYMORE someone else can jump in.
Now for the background: the perspective is off by quite a bit. Another cliche in a tryout comment--generally things that are farther away look smaller, and things that are closer look larger. What we have here is a case of "Copy+paste syndrome," which...means the subject looks like it was copy and pasted onto a background. If it helps, you might want to try pulling up some pictures of buildings, etc. and try sketching them out. That should help you get a better grip on perspective.

I'll leave anything else to whoever wants to jump in. I didn't cover much, so if anyone wants to go more in depth...?
Good luck!

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chainedfox @ Saturday, December 12th 2009, 11:07 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nsjGlKMcEQk&feature=channel

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, December 19th 2009, 6:06 PM

the animation in that music video was absolutely stunning <3

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Groggy @ Wednesday, March 11th 2009, 4:52 PM

Yeahh. I haven't really had a chance to sit down and oekaki. ;; I miss it.

And I haven't drawn on the intermediate board so I figured I would.

Anyway, felt like drawing a bat. Enjoy.

Referenced used: http://www.flickr.com/photos/66504007@N00/2104022820/

Random @ Wednesday, March 11th 2009, 8:00 PM

oh lawd this is beautiful
i love bats <3

Toasteh @ Wednesday, March 11th 2009, 10:14 PM

Bats are so cute baww qwq

Jackii @ Saturday, March 14th 2009, 11:33 PM

YOU SHOULD TRY AND FIND MORE TIME WOMAN I MISS YOU SO MUCHH ; ^;;;
this is so gorgeous gosh i love those raindrops and your lineless in general is beautiful. and and the little claws awwwww this is so cute i love your semi-realism it makes my day.

1Riotmaker7 @ Friday, December 18th 2009, 2:48 PM

He's awesome!!!

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chainedfox @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 9:35 PM

a digimon im working on

does anyone on here have there own fake digimon or pokeomn?

and does anyone have a spore account?

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:24 AM

Yeah I don't have my own but this is rather lovely~

I like the soft colors >3<

Arf @ Thursday, December 10th 2009, 8:57 AM

i used to have some made up pokemon... but they were poorly made on my part xD idk if i remember their designs...

chainedfox @ Thursday, December 10th 2009, 3:15 PM

thanx

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 15th 2009, 5:57 PM

haha I never really got into digimon. I mean, my memories of it are REALLY vague xD
But growing up I used to play with pokemon stuffed animals and this one cute digimon one.. i don't remember it's name but this was it-- http://www.iaza.com/work/091216C/delete65102.PNG

chainedfox @ Wednesday, December 16th 2009, 3:23 PM

oh! i remember that digimon, its gomamon
hes so cute

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 6:06 PM

[EDIT] ffffffff lol he has one wonderful hairstyle xD
Oh I miiiiggght be getting a tablet!! It's for this contest (don't feel like going into detail about it) and um, not to sound all high on myself but, uh, I've seen the other entries and... haha I'm pretty sure I'll win...
And I also just learned there's a hotkey for the undo button.. >_< would've been helpful 3 years ago lol
---
BLAAAAAAAAAAH
Timer lies..... artblock's no fun :C

(Edited on December 15, 2009, 6:18 pm)

Arf @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 6:58 PM

tell me about it! I'm having art blockage trouble too!
I need to get back into my computer life too lol-- real life just gets boring xP i have one class this semester that is sucking away my life!! D: but i enjoy it D:
(BTW, THIS LION IS EPIC SO FAR<333)

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:25 AM

wha this is cute cute cute!! And I love the shading so far~ Those eyes are so pretty!

chainedfox @ Wednesday, December 16th 2009, 3:22 PM

this is awsome, i love ur style
its so cute

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chainedfox @ Thursday, December 3rd 2009, 5:07 PM

Wip
i wanted to try something semi-realistic,clearly THAT didn't work
i will edit and color this later
ttyl

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, December 3rd 2009, 6:03 PM

I love how you draw muzzles~ They are so pretty!

Finish finish =D

chainedfox @ Friday, December 4th 2009, 3:14 PM

thanx

will do

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:31 AM

Fehfehfeh I love blueeee <333

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, December 5th 2009, 12:24 PM

urg, an avatar
nothing special... I've sorta had artblock for a while now...

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, December 5th 2009, 9:43 PM

Aw, so cute xP

Arf @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 2:40 PM

yeah same here, kyuubi.. i've even been having a commenting block.. er, if that's possible! D:

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:30 AM

Aw gosh your icons are so cute <3

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soulwithin465 @ Monday, December 7th 2009, 10:25 AM

Aww look at the cute little...dino bird thing...Yeah I have no clue what the heck this is supposed to be. All I know is its head is way too big and I shouldn't be aloud to use the pencil tool.

So how's life??

Anne Dyari @ Monday, December 7th 2009, 1:33 PM

It's so cute though xP and lines are really nice!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 1:05 PM

Whatever it is, it's adorable xD I love its wings <3

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soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 8:37 AM

Did you make your icon?

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 1:46 PM

OH GOSH YOU ARE SO AFKGSJGDHHSHHTGOGGBH AMAZING!! This is so beautiful... arrrrg why do you have to be so incredible??!!*sob* lol
yup I made my icon. idk im not good w/ pixels but i like animating things so.... ^w^ fffff my icons change frequently though (which reminds me I need to make an Xmas one lol)

Toasteh @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 4:48 PM

Yes! I really enjoy making pixelly stuff like this so most of my icons are made by me...
I always lose the patience for animations, though, (TINY CANVAS GGG) so I just...add as much detail as possible, whilst other iconers like myself make superspecialawesome animated pixelly icons...

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 2nd 2009, 6:01 AM

@ Kyuubi: Haha aww thank youuuu <3333
Ahh and yes I LOVE animated icons! But sadly I am not creative enough and don't have the energy to actually make one...(pixels aren't really my thing anyways). But oh gosh I'd really like to see more animated icons from you! The one you have right now is just so cute!

@ Toasteh: Yeah you icon is really cool! So much detail how do you do it!!! I always find the canvases too small which makes it so hard! I even find the canvas for this too small but it doesn't fit on my screen too well if I make it bigger.

(Edited on December 2, 2009, 6:08 am)

chainedfox @ Friday, December 4th 2009, 3:14 PM

awww,its calmon
so cute!!

even tho i don't have an icon here, i do on the DA,but i asked permission to use that from someone else

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soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 8:16 AM

doodle doodle~

Random fact: I love the color gray <3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 1:48 PM

To you, it's a doodle, to me, it's a FREAKING WORK OF ART auifh9fjyri8tjidshjygnhh ;_;

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, December 1st 2009, 7:21 PM

Gorgeous shading on this, wow! that hand is very nice too

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 2nd 2009, 6:04 AM

@ Kyuubi and Anne Dyari: Thank you! ;u;

(Edited on December 2, 2009, 6:08 am)

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Anne Dyari @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 10:36 PM

very hypocritical of me, but yeah! Let's try to make this board thrive! ^^

soulwithin465 @ Monday, November 30th 2009, 4:11 AM

Ah I love that scarfffffff <3

And yes I shall try to draw more~
As soon as hw and college apps are done >3<

Toasteh @ Monday, November 30th 2009, 5:03 PM

Well it looks like we're getting there...!!
This is probably the most active it's been here in a long time so...!!

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, November 30th 2009, 8:56 PM

Toast is right, this place has been super active as of late C:
I think we just need to work on "regular members" ... idk if you know what I mean...

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arceusgirl @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 2:24 AM

EDIT
its finished =D
does anyone have critiques on it??
first tryout :http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/241.png

(Edited on November 29, 2009, 12:21 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 4:31 AM

Sorry we can't critique tryouts until they are complete. But this is looking wonderful so far! Can't wait to see it done <3

Toasteh @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 12:42 PM

Yep, good luck!

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 11:15 PM

OH HEY I KNOW YOU!!! You draw on heavens gate

Good luck

arceusgirl @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 11:25 AM

@soulwithin465 and toasteh
thank you ^^
@ majestic cardboard box
yeah i also drawon heavensgate^^
you are named shinobiden3000 on that oekaki arent you?

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 2:31 PM

Yesss

tigerchic643 @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 3:09 PM

redline- http://iaza.com/work/091130C/tryout_redline92615.png

sorry..i say out.

Toasteh @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 3:21 PM

Well I'm not sure if I should vote out or third, but yes, I don't know if you're quite up to par yet. Your anatomy could use some work (I don't fully agree with the redline, but I won't go into it myself), and your shading is pretty sloppy (just...so you know...tones aren't always the best choice). The background is inconsistent with the subject matter, so it'd be less distracting had you used solids for it.

Other than that...well I'll leave the crits to someone else...annnd I think I'm going to say out. A few weeks of practice will be good for you.

Edit: lol those weren't crits, Julia.

(Edited on November 29, 2009, 5:16 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 4:10 PM

Sorry, hon, gonna have to say out. ):
Your anatomy, particularly on your first tryout, wasn't the best (but I won't go into detail about it) The background's pretty sloppy, remember a good b/g can MAKE the picture so uh... yeah lol. And um the highlights/shadows don't seem to be placed right, when considering the angle of the moon (unless the lighting is coming from the lightning in the background; even so, it isn't right). The moon is behind the canine, so most of the figure should be in the shadow, er...shaded.
Sorry, but keep practicing to get better!
And um, sorry for sounding so negative lol

(Edited on November 30, 2009, 8:46 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 10:11 PM

Going to have to say out aswell, try to line your shadow up to the character, rather than just putting a darker patch of color underneath, it makes the character look glued on.

You're anatomy greatly improved from your previous tryout, but still needs some work, try drawing out a basic bone structure.
I also say out, though I'd like to see you try here again ^^

soulwithin465 @ Monday, November 30th 2009, 4:09 AM

Wonderful improvement compared to you first! However, I think you should practice just a bit more. Study from photos and real life observation and maybe even practice drawing bone structures and studying how the body of an animal looks underneath all the skin and fur. I do love the body language you have portraying though! It really goes with the background and mood. But I think you still need to work on shading and anatomy so for now I'm going to have to vote out. But based on the improvement you've shown I would love love LOVE to see you tryout again in the near future!

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 11:12 PM

YAAAAAAAAAAY NUMBAH 2

ALSO

IF A FRIEND OR FAMILY MEMBER GIVES YOU A COMPUTER DON'T GO THROUGH THE FAVORITES JUST DON'T!!!!!11!!!

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, November 28th 2009, 11:27 PM

I say in, gorgeous cell-shading ^^

One thing I would've liked more is a more defined moon.

btw, his tail is epic ^^

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 2:30 PM

Yeah I kinda rushed through the moon lolz.

tigerchic643 @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 2:40 PM

i think this is great! my only concern is to put alittle more effort into ur background. but i say IN!

Toasteh @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 3:17 PM

The background is a little lacking, but still, in.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, November 29th 2009, 4:04 PM

I agree that the background could have used some work, however, your anatomy and cel-shading is pretty awesome <3 so I vote IN as well

soulwithin465 @ Monday, November 30th 2009, 3:58 AM

Okay let me first just say this?I LOVE THAT TAIL!
Alright now that that has been stated?.

~CRITS~
I really like your use of tonal values. You show a consistent use of lights and darks throughout both your pieces and that makes me very happy~ The shading in some areas does seem rather forced and flat to me though?But I?m not very good with cell-shading myself so I don?t feel that I would be able to give much advice on in. But moving on~ I feel the proportions and anatomy are rather decent. The head fits the body quite nicely and the torso and legs aren?t too short or too long. However, the hand seems rather off to me?I can?t really place what it is but something just doesn?t seem accurate. It might be because it?s cut off. But all in all the anatomy is good! Like others have already stated, I think you could have spent a bit more time on the background. The grass has some nice texture and tonal values but the size of the grass blades aren?t very consistent and the ground appears to just end. It doesn?t seem like the ground is going back but rather straight up which you know isn?t possible but to the eye looks that way. The jagged texture for the grass should get smaller and smaller as it goes back but you drew the grass that would be furthest away as larger which makes the perspective awkward. But I am glad to see you integrated the subject with the ground by having the grass raised around his feet and tail. I also enjoy the atmosphere of the sky. The clouds have some nice and deep grays in them along with some lighter tones. This really allows the clouds to POP! But I?m not too sure if the use of watercolors for the sky was the best choice. Also the stars seem rather rushed. But overall I can see that you put quite an amount of effort into both tryouts and I find both quite pleasing to look at~

So I vote IN~!

=]

Sorry if any of this didn't make sense >< My brain is kind of dead at the moment =3=

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