Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 4:36 PM

New persona :3 Although I have horrible hair, which is dark brown, not black

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:25 AM

CUUUUTE
Those cloths are so cool!! And dude...I want that balloon >3<

Seidal @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 11:27 PM

that's a really sweet style you have there

I especially like the way you drew and colored her pants.

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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:10 AM

chainedfox says hi~!!

Sadly she's having a bit of trouble getting on Weazie so she might not be around for awhile...Hopefully she'll be back soon though <3

Arf @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 8:34 AM

what are the problems she's having?

--one issue that weazie has had is saying that the password is wrong, or you're a pending member.. that's when you just type your username and DON'T enter your password, and it should let you log in. If that's not it, then I have rambled on in this comment about nothing ^^;

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 9:18 AM

Yeah I'm not to sure about the details but I do know that she mentioned awhile back about a virus poping up form the site or something like that > >

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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 3:22 AM

Zoro = loveplz

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:33 AM

I like that color green >D

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:37 PM

Zoro!!!!!!!!! He's my favorite One Piece character X3

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 3:10 AM

He's my husband/fave character :3

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, February 21st 2010, 12:10 AM

I've never been good at pixeling pigs DX

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 21st 2010, 12:36 PM

cuuuutie!

YOU SPEAK LIES~

(Edited on February 21, 2010, 12:36 pm)

Star @ Monday, February 22nd 2010, 9:25 PM

ff what lies
THIS IS WIN IS IT NOT

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:14 AM

Whoa so much detail! I love it!! Oh gosh the gradients are so good and ahhhh man I'm so envious of your pixel skillzzzzz <3333

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 5:34 PM

SORRY I TOOK SO LONG TO REPLY TO THIS HNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG
I wouldn't think you have a lot of opportunities to pixel pigs, lol
This is so cool, your pixels win<3333 THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:36 PM

It's KYUUB~
HUH? You draw piggies just FINE O__o

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Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 19th 2010, 1:03 AM

maybe will finish later, it's a free sketch after all XD

... I'm procrastinating 10 page term paper.

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 19th 2010, 7:48 PM

i like this. I have a thing for yellow eyes and the opisite colours are just so pretty!

Star @ Saturday, February 20th 2010, 6:32 PM

your use of tools is amazing ;A;

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:18 AM

Yeah for procrastination! Ah oh my this is gorgeous!! The shades and textures and lovely and the facial structure is so perfect!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 10:48 PM

*STARE*
You depict the movement of the hair so well
O__O

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 6:02 PM

okay I gotta go make dinner but I'll come back and finish real soon!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 7:50 PM

OH yea! I am likin' the way this is comin out! For once I am very proud!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 9:36 PM

O wow this is coming along really nicely

I love the way you're coloring this <3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 9:56 PM

SHE's done! I'll probably add a background tomorrow but it's ten'o'clock here in Ottawa so yea

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 12:21 AM

Awesome pose!!
I love the antomy and the shading style~!
Also nice choice of colors <333

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 7:48 AM

thank-ya I am very proud of how this turned out though I want to fix that darn foot

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 7:52 AM

Now her foot's done :), silly girl forgettin to have a heel

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 8:17 PM

i'm just tryin out a random backdrop but i think it's too cheap-lookin for the pic, i'll come back and change it later on

Star @ Thursday, February 18th 2010, 6:09 PM

certainly this is amazing
i already see improvement compared to your tryouts~

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 10:47 PM

I agree with Star. You really have improved a lot in such a short time!!

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.Psychopath. @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 12:01 AM

Happy birthday Gecko <3
have a good one!

sorry, i didnt know if your fursona was furry or not.. so i drew it furry anyways XD

Gecko @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 4:16 AM

Oh my, thank you ;A; <3
This is too cute!

<33

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 5:53 PM

your style is so cute!

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:15 PM

oh oh Happy belated birthday Gecko!
Ahaha this is so adorable and warm and fuzzy looking =w=

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:20 AM

Hehe this is adorable <3
I like the shading style too~

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tigerchic643 @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 4:39 PM

i need a red line please cause i suck at people and zack wants me to draw illidan. Dx

Star @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 6:52 PM

i rly would redline
but
im not good with
like mythical creatures and all. but
anywho lemme get to the point.
this is awesomeeeee. and i cant wait to see it finished ;A;!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 7:27 PM

I suck at redllines but. I think the eyes need to be further apart and his shoulders higher

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 1:53 AM

I can't draw guys for sh!t sorry....But, if I have the character right, this image may be of use~> http://www.freakygaming.com/gallery/fan_art/dota_allstars/illidan.jpg

I think you should make him a bit more muscular and I agree with the eye comment. The left eye should be a bit farther away. Well, good luck to you! I wish I could be of more use D=

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 9:40 PM

I like the concept of this character and LOVE the way you drew the horns XDDD. I can't redline....
but I can give you the link to my favorite site for anatomy and dynamic poses you can rotate:
http://www.posemaniacs.com/index.php?paged=2

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Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 1:38 AM

Trying out b/c the crits here are amazing
Started in November
Finally finished
My eyes feel funny
Comments and Crits are graciously appreciated.
Adulted for blood

(Uploaded by Seidal)

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 4:02 AM

This is beyond amazing!!
I LOVE the ghost/aura/smoke coming off of him! It give such an eerie feel~ And the face in the shadow is just so creepy and cool! Great job with the water and rocks too! The textures look great!
But I do have a few critiques.
While the overall result of this looks nice there are a few distractions, such as the distinct black outline around the face and the mixture of smooth and pixel edges. I don?t mind the black outlines for the face; however, the rest of the subject matter is lineless which gives the subject a bit of an unfinished look. Also some of the edges are smooth while others are pixilated making it seem a bit sloppy. Concerning anatomy, I feel that the upper right arm is a bit big. But I love the pose and the way the left foot is bent.
Sorry if this isn?t making any sense I?m pretty dead right now XP
Overall this is a wonderful tryout! I just think you should work on touching up in a few areas by following through with similar looks throughout the piece. Pixels don?t really go too well with airbrush and pen tools. But hey prove me wrong!
Well, good luck!! And sorry if this makes no sense =3=

Awesome blood too X]

<3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 10:30 AM

excellent use of textures inmy opinion but I must agree on the blacklines and no lines thing. To me it's not so much that it looks unfinished but rather that it looks as though you suddenly desided to change mediums or styles. It's still very well done, andd it's obvious there's quite a bit of effort in this. I'd say your deffinately on the right track for intermediate. Oh! and I love the smokey-skull-thingers

Star @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 2:29 PM

its really nice and yeah i do agree with them on it.
it does look quite unfinished but yeah.
anywho goodluck.
the blood looks great and i love the aura!~~

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:57 PM

Thanks so much! These comments are really really helpful <3 Yeah, I'm having kind of a style... crisis??? LOL I can't seem to make up my mind sometimes...

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 9:51 PM

Ah yeah I know what you mean about the style thing XD I'm kinda having one right now >A<
But I'm sure you'll figure it out ;]

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 12:11 AM

yea pretty sure we've all been there LOL. I like the black lines that've started in this picture, personally I'd go with that and outline the character but it's your picture and your choice, right?

i like how you outlined the arm in this

http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/291.png

sorry i was serching your user to see if you'd done/started anyother try-outs

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Seidal @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 8:11 PM

T___T Thanks so much for your warm support soulwithin... *SNIFF*

Ahaha do I have a stalker??? Naw, I'm just messing with you Unknown. Thank you so much for going so far as to check tho- It means a lot <333

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 16th 2010, 1:54 AM

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 10:46 AM

well i tried

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 10:48 AM

it was suppose to be this
http://www.partypants.co.uk/fancy-dress-site-images/child-scooby-doo-costume.jpg

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 1:26 PM

^^ So just remember to integrate refferences into your pictures, if anything, they're great practice.

Watching your animation for this one though, freehanding the proportions is fun and I do it alot when I'm lazy, but you'll occasionally end up with something not quite right. Remember to work out the proportions first, then add things over the body.
http://www.realcolorwheel.com/human.htm here's a good proportion site

chainedfox @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 7:06 PM

omagod, i had that costume when i was little XD

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 10:46 PM

lol! aren't they the cutest though! Have you ever seen the unicorn equivalent? awwe they're so sweet

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:39 AM

This is epic win!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 11:09 AM

aw~thanks!

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:14 PM

Cute attack.
It's too cute.
It hurts. X__X lol

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Monday, February 15th 2010, 7:29 PM

then imagin how I felt drawing it! LOL the cuteness it buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurned

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 12:54 PM

not done. will be very very soon!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 2:24 PM

and now she's done. you might need to use the "refresh" button

Star @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 2:29 PM

its realllllly pretty :D!!
i love your lines. i wish mine were as pretty as that ;A;

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 5:53 PM

aww thanks! =)

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:09 PM

I like your lines a lot too--
and the concept of a fox with a unicorn is very original and creative

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 9:55 PM

Oh gosh I love the style of this!!!!! The face and fur are wonderful! And nice choice of colors, the orange really sticks out for me <3

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 6:17 PM

could i have a redline before i put this to good?

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:37 AM

http://i305.photobucket.com/albums/nn219/soulwithin465/Redline2.png

It?s not perfect but I tried >A<
Overall I feel the layout is balanced quite nicely; however, the direction she?s facing seems a bit awkward. I?m guessing she?s looking at the moon? The moon is in the background not the foreground so if she is looking at the moon her face should be looking away from us. You should be able to see more of her back rather than just the side and you might want to raise her butt up a bit to make it appear like she?s sitting on the branch rather than pasted on it. The legs are nicely done though and I enjoy the landscape! Hope to see this finished some time! And hope this helps a bit >u<

<3

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 10:33 AM

yea your pose makes more sense. in mine it looks as though she's staring in two dirrections

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 10:37 AM

your pose makes much sense but I failed at it! and i'm really starting to hate this picture!

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:13 PM

Poses facing away from the viewer are so challenging >___<
I really like the concept of the picture thoughhhh >w<

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 9:54 PM

Yeah its a pretty tough angle! But it looks like your on the right track =]

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 6:51 AM

Just felt like drawing some Pokemon~

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 1:13 PM

cute

chainedfox @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 7:07 PM

i like their expression

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:40 AM

Oh gosh yessss Pokeman!!!
I love the shine in their eyes *u*

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:14 PM

I reaaaaaaally like the way you colored and shaded these <3333

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 9:57 PM

I love really obscure animals

This is an aardwolf.
http://media-2.web.britannica.com/eb-media/82/5282-004-7493ECC1.jpg <-- I want this for a pet. Or a character. Idk.

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 2:58 AM

Whoa I've never heard of an aardwolf before! They look so cool!!

And lovely drawing by the way~ The shading is so nice <3

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:12 PM

Agreed. Very adorable. Yeah, that would make a cool character-- Those eyes are to die for

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Gecko @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 5:18 PM

Oh. My. God.
This is what you get when you have a bored Bubbi sitting on her laptop.
A wierd... thing.
I'm really proud of the tree though, I just wanted to pratcice bg's :>

Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 8:05 PM

That is an amazing shading technique, it's so smooth!

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 3:42 AM

T-that background...oh my...its...so pretty ;u;

By the way the shading style you used is pretty sweet~

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