Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 9:58 PM

I rarely draw the same character twice..
..but I like this guy a lot <3 lol

err.. I think.. I can draw here... ...right?
Or.. this could be a.... third.... *struggle*
T___T

(Edited on February 27, 2010, 10:02 pm)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:29 PM

very nice!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 11:39 PM

umm well yeaa, like 6 people said you were in and now im eggsadurating

Anne Dyari @ Monday, March 1st 2010, 4:48 PM

xD I'm pretty sure you're in.

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:34 PM

akf;ngjlfgn Gosh this is awesome! everything you draw looks so cool >3<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:38 PM

ahdjklfhjksdfhjlh/typesmash
Mecha-character is so amazing <3

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 7:49 PM

my dad thought i should try something different and his friend wanted me to draw his bike, i don't know bikes though

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:33 PM

Ah this looks really nice!

Man...I want a motorcycle so badly.

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 11:07 AM

just a scribble

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Gecko @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:12 AM

w.i.p

Seidal @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 12:16 AM

Wait.. is that.. Jolteon?
Or something.. much cooler?

Gecko @ Sunday, February 28th 2010, 6:45 AM

It's Jolteon

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:31 PM

Oh man that's some great shading!

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 4:25 PM

just an outline made I'll finish up later?

Seidal @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 8:04 PM

A fighter in heels. NICE XDDD
This looks cool so far!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:24 PM

heck yea, what other kinda warrior is there? i dunno i was just messing around when i started this

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 10:47 AM

some really bad stuff happened last night and i really don't want to delet this picture but i don't feel like i can finish this picture

Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 4:09 PM

Hey it's all good. Things happen, and you can always come back to this when you're up for it, right? Actually, I find that big events in my life end up adding more character to my art. I'll be supporting you!

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:40 PM

You make the coolest clothing designs!

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Seidal @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:51 AM

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
It's done..and just in time for midterms LOL!
And I didn't go over the 500kb limit XDDDD

As usual... crits, comments, and redlines are warmly welcomed.

1st tryout
http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/429.png

(Edited on February 25, 2010, 5:57 pm)

(Edited by Anne Dyari)
Bumped for Completeness ^^

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 12:19 AM

Oh gosh this is going to be amazing!!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 17th 2010, 7:46 AM

great poses~! Can't wait to see it done!

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:27 AM

AHHH I'm getting so pumped to see the final outcome of this!!! It keeps looking more and more amazing everytime you update it <333

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 9:09 PM

much more work's been done of this since i last saw it, the armour is really somethin' COOL!

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 9:19 PM

done? Okay, so this is what I personally think. the colours are quite nice and work together well. I think that the girl neds more of a curve to her back, she looks a little unnaturally stiff. something I noticed in both tryout is that you highlight one specifc area with black pen, while much more effective in this one then the last I might go for a colour/shade that is less dark as nopt to distract from the rest of the picture. i like the plants, they really liven up the scene. the amour is my favourite put, it has the most detail and is obviously in your comfort zone. you're one of those artist who actually does manga/anime/whatever really well, most people see anime/manga as big-headed kids but you kept the proportions good

and now i will shut up >IN<

Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:56 AM

The faded look is very appealing, and the metal, I really enjoy how it's put together to form the human body. Beautiful folds, I say in ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 12:32 PM

AAAAAAHHHH GET IN HERE YOU!! This is awesome, the clkthing folds are @_@ ...IN. IN.
If I wanted to be nit-picky I could point out some things, but I don't feel at liberty to crit this (and I'm also on the Wii right now...), so I'm'a leave that to others

Gecko @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 3:15 PM

I say in. Fo' sure~

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 9:40 PM

I say get in here NOW

Seidal @ Saturday, February 27th 2010, 4:14 PM

Ho---my goodnez--
Thank you everyone for your comments! I will definitely take everything that was said into account!

@Kyuubi: Nit-pick all you want!!! I need an ARTISTIC DETOX SESSION! lol

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, March 6th 2010, 10:30 PM

OH WOW this turned out AMAZING! I love the soft colors you used it really gives off a majestic feeling. The folds in the clothing and the little details here and there really make this image POP! I do notice a few color bleeds in a few places though, but they don?t take away from the piece at all, so no worries. And the background fits so perfectly with the foreground! All in all this is a gorgeous piece and I?m happy to see you?re in!

Love the little droplets of water too and the break of light in the clouds! Guess it just rained ;]

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 5:48 PM

So i'm kinda pissed off/freaked out right now gaaaaaaaaaaaaaar not a fun feeling

Seidal @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 11:34 PM

If you want to let it all out in writing, you can shoot me an o-mail ^__^

chainedfox @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 10:29 AM

this is cool, i love the colors

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, February 26th 2010, 9:39 PM

Thanks guys

@Seidal: Naw it was resolved during 3rd hour

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 7:51 PM

Random doodle of my character Luis

Hes one of my oldest characters

Also i want his shirt >:(

(Edited on February 24, 2010, 7:54 pm)

Seidal @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 11:32 PM

:O
...I want his shirt too >__<

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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:10 AM

chainedfox says hi~!!

Sadly she's having a bit of trouble getting on Weazie so she might not be around for awhile...Hopefully she'll be back soon though <3

Arf @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 8:34 AM

what are the problems she's having?

--one issue that weazie has had is saying that the password is wrong, or you're a pending member.. that's when you just type your username and DON'T enter your password, and it should let you log in. If that's not it, then I have rambled on in this comment about nothing ^^;

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 9:18 AM

Yeah I'm not to sure about the details but I do know that she mentioned awhile back about a virus poping up form the site or something like that > >

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UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 9:23 PM

just doodlin'. if anyone wants to colour...how do I public-ify this? anyways I'm super peeved cuz, I've had 7english teacher in 3weeks (no joke), my geo teacher doesn't know the pacific from the atlantic (literally), and our new principle is a former stripper and current idiot

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 9:26 PM

i guess maybe this oekaki doesn't do public-ing it's kind of a sketcher-type activity I guess

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:24 AM

Oh fudge this looks like so much fun to color too ;^;

And whoa sounds like quite the school! I bet its at least more interesting than mine =3=

Arf @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 8:36 AM

this is an old-fashioned oekaki without the 'public' thingy..

but if someone wanted to color it, they could save the picture and the upload it

(if you need uploading access, just ask an administrator)

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 3:59 PM

okay sorry didn't mean to make that sound rude. Yeah, it didn't used to be like this it's all the principle's fault, we used to be the number one school in the EQAO examinations for both 9th and 10th grades, we had trust and repect with the staff and now it is a for lack of a better, hell hole

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 9:48 PM

Haha omg yeah like we have a new vice principle at our school now and he runs pretty much everything! And now the school is packed with more rules and regulations than I can keep up with! =A=

Seidal @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 11:28 PM

HOooOly that is one crazy school environment...

Ummm, I guess another way to let someone color is to log into your account..? But that's risky... and requires oodles of trust.

I love your character designs <3

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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 4:36 PM

New persona :3 Although I have horrible hair, which is dark brown, not black

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 6:25 AM

CUUUUTE
Those cloths are so cool!! And dude...I want that balloon >3<

Seidal @ Thursday, February 25th 2010, 11:27 PM

that's a really sweet style you have there

I especially like the way you drew and colored her pants.

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Gecko @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 3:22 AM

Zoro = loveplz

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:33 AM

I like that color green >D

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:37 PM

Zoro!!!!!!!!! He's my favorite One Piece character X3

Gecko @ Wednesday, February 24th 2010, 3:10 AM

He's my husband/fave character :3

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, February 21st 2010, 12:10 AM

I've never been good at pixeling pigs DX

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Sunday, February 21st 2010, 12:36 PM

cuuuutie!

YOU SPEAK LIES~

(Edited on February 21, 2010, 12:36 pm)

Star @ Monday, February 22nd 2010, 9:25 PM

ff what lies
THIS IS WIN IS IT NOT

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:14 AM

Whoa so much detail! I love it!! Oh gosh the gradients are so good and ahhhh man I'm so envious of your pixel skillzzzzz <3333

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 5:34 PM

SORRY I TOOK SO LONG TO REPLY TO THIS HNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG
I wouldn't think you have a lot of opportunities to pixel pigs, lol
This is so cool, your pixels win<3333 THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:36 PM

It's KYUUB~
HUH? You draw piggies just FINE O__o

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, February 20th 2010, 11:51 PM

Sorry it took me song to do these guys. School has been busy and my mom decided to put another picture on my computer even though it barely has enought memory to do stuff

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:15 AM

Oh man nice angle! And once again, your sooo good with gradients!!!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 11:36 PM

Wow such cool shading *__*

chainedfox @ Friday, March 26th 2010, 10:39 AM

aww, this is so cool

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Anne Dyari @ Friday, February 19th 2010, 1:03 AM

maybe will finish later, it's a free sketch after all XD

... I'm procrastinating 10 page term paper.

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Friday, February 19th 2010, 7:48 PM

i like this. I have a thing for yellow eyes and the opisite colours are just so pretty!

Star @ Saturday, February 20th 2010, 6:32 PM

your use of tools is amazing ;A;

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:18 AM

Yeah for procrastination! Ah oh my this is gorgeous!! The shades and textures and lovely and the facial structure is so perfect!

Seidal @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 10:48 PM

*STARE*
You depict the movement of the hair so well
O__O

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