Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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suzu @ Saturday, December 18th 2010, 10:00 PM

to be colored!

sorry for huge upload.. does anyone know how to tone it down?
edit:
fixed it!
(Uploaded by suzu)

(Edited on December 18, 2010, 10:01 pm)

(Edited on December 18, 2010, 10:01 pm)

xlGrimBecky @ Sunday, December 19th 2010, 9:03 PM

Oh my man D: This is so pretty; I can't wait to see the coloured version.

Seidal @ Friday, December 31st 2010, 2:19 AM

such a cute character design!! /love

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suzu @ Saturday, December 11th 2010, 12:15 PM

(i figured if i cant draw here i should at least scan and color here?)

kinda sad right now, one of those really nice artists i looked up to when i was little started drugs and isnt /nice/ anymore ;;

(Edited on December 11, 2010, 12:15 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, December 11th 2010, 5:25 PM

Whoot, yeah, coloring here is always fun ^^

Aww... that's terrible. T.T

Seidal @ Saturday, December 11th 2010, 6:23 PM

heck yeah for scanning and coloring! XD
aww.. that bites about the artist you looked up to

I hope that they'll recover soon too...

Ichigo @ Monday, December 13th 2010, 10:03 AM

): Yeah I hate when idols fall.

Very cute pic btw! I enjoy her rosey cheeks and nose!

Tree @ Friday, December 24th 2010, 5:48 PM

it sucks when someone you look up to isn't all that. unfortunately you just have to live with the disappointment and find a new idol....

you have an adorable style!

suzu @ Saturday, January 1st 2011, 10:57 AM

your right c:
thank you guys a lot

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suzu @ Thursday, December 9th 2010, 9:10 PM

ahhh im sorry you guys my laptop crashed! ;n;
there wont be any art from me until i can fix it up and get my tablet back on it!
so sorry lovey dears ;; <3

(oh wow! sorry for huge upload)

(Edited on December 9, 2010, 9:12 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, December 11th 2010, 12:06 AM

Ah... that's no good! Hope you get it back up and running soon, we need this place active x.x

Seidal @ Saturday, December 11th 2010, 6:20 PM

ooh I love her kind of rag-doll look <33
Yikes! I hope things get fixed up soon!!!

Ichigo @ Monday, December 13th 2010, 10:04 AM

Ugh I can't see the picture while commenting but one the board I just ADORED the face. Just...ah! Love it. I like that it's all black and white. I think it's great that way.

Keep it coming!

suzu @ Monday, December 13th 2010, 5:04 PM

hmm yeah i differnent picture comes up when i go to comment too
thank you you guys c:

Tree @ Monday, January 17th 2011, 12:01 PM

this is too cute!

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suzu @ Tuesday, November 2nd 2010, 9:19 PM

no just.. no

Ichigo @ Tuesday, November 2nd 2010, 10:04 PM

Yes....YESSSSSSSSSSS o-o

Seidal @ Wednesday, November 3rd 2010, 1:14 AM

ahmahgad this looks so cool! YESSU!

suzu @ Wednesday, November 3rd 2010, 3:09 PM

waha~ thanks :>

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suzu @ Tuesday, November 2nd 2010, 2:17 PM

got back into neopets /shot

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Seidal @ Wednesday, November 3rd 2010, 1:14 AM

lol it's all good. ....I think mine are starving OTL

suzu @ Wednesday, November 3rd 2010, 3:08 PM

haha ahhh yess mine too of course

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suzu @ Tuesday, October 5th 2010, 7:50 PM

im just gonna guess that im in
heres a crappy doodle of noodle from gorillaz
to bad it looks nothing like her

eeewww fullveiw

(Edited on October 5, 2010, 8:16 pm)

Seidal @ Wednesday, October 6th 2010, 8:42 PM

Hehe nice~
Yeah, you're pretty much innnnnnnn XD
I usually don't like the color pink... but this is making me think about changing my mind... lol

Tree @ Saturday, October 9th 2010, 6:37 PM

yaaaay gorillaz!! i had a huge gorillaz phase not too long ago
noodle looks adorable here

suzu @ Sunday, October 10th 2010, 12:54 PM

whaaa yess i used to be totally obsessed now im just a regular fan xD
but i guess that's hard to say given the fact my icon is noodle and i just drew her

Star @ Wednesday, October 13th 2010, 9:51 PM

this is
so
luvly tho
i love your shading ffdgsdfgs
its pretttu

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suzu @ Tuesday, September 28th 2010, 6:35 PM

ok ok done!~
im suzu, aka mads
this is my first tryout on a oekaki board
i usually just stay at the beginner levels
but this time i decided to see if i could get in
a higher level

hope you like my picture lovies~ U 3 U

(Edited on September 28, 2010, 7:29 pm)

xlGrimBecky @ Tuesday, September 28th 2010, 11:34 PM

Welcome to WO Intermediate.
Anyways, lesse here.
Uhmm...Ugh I don't know what to critique ;-; The pose looks prettyful and the lighting on everything's done fine, along with the shading.
I'm gonna say in :I

Khadyah @ Friday, October 1st 2010, 4:29 PM

Welcome to WO c: Hrmmm lessee 'ere...

I really like the coloring c: the shading looks nice (especially the hair -drool-)

The background is a little... lacking. I mean it fits in the picture but it's just very simple. I would have like to seen a little more.

The pose looks good and I like the proportions c:

I'm not sure what kind of technique you used for your shading, but it seems to have caught the lineart in some places and that looks a little sloppy to me :c

Also the.. brown whatever she's sitting on, is undeniably lopsided e-e It's probably not a big deal but it bugs me a little for some reason.

But overall I think you have good skills and I like your simplistic style so I would saaay... mm.... In. Yeaaah. I would say you're intermediate enough.

Really the only thing lacking is the background :T

Star @ Saturday, October 2nd 2010, 2:56 AM

yeeeeeeah infosho
i luv ur style fgfdg
its pretty
the only thing that bothers me is the left leg
but yeeeeeah
so in
IN

Seidal @ Wednesday, October 6th 2010, 8:25 PM

yay welcome~!

I really like that catfish looking pink fish on the left. I think the coloring and shading is done quite well that it looks 3D @w@

I also appreciate the highlights on the subject's skin, especially around her torso since it makes that area really pop and seem more realistic.

I would have liked to see some shading in terms of the shadow cast by the subject onto the object she's sitting on and shadow on the purple fish from her foot too...

Nonetheless, the simple style is charming and easy on the eyes.

INNNNNN INNNNNNN

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