Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 8:30 PM

HEY GUYS, REMEMBER ME? I'M THAT OBNOXIOUS 14-YEAR-OLD WHO KEEPS DISAPPEARING FROM HERE.
I've just been finding if difficult to stay active at 4 different places, haha. I LOVE YOU GUYS, I'M GONNA TRY TO COME BACK HERE.

In the meantime, have a pen pressure Totodile doodle. -chucks-

Seidal @ Thursday, March 11th 2010, 10:23 PM

O mai you're quite the busy lady XD
The little 'freckles' look so cute

Gecko @ Friday, March 12th 2010, 12:37 PM

Gaah I wish I had pen pressure, mine stopped for no apparent reason and won't come back :c

I love Totodile hehe <3

Arf @ Monday, March 15th 2010, 10:24 AM

hey, remember me?! I'm that weirdo person, who's supposedly married to you, but who never seems to draw online anymore D':

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, March 16th 2010, 7:37 PM

Thanks everyone. xD
NO, I DO NOT REMEMBER YOU, ARF. I DO NOT KNOW WHO YOU ARE. AT ALL. YOU CREEPY STALKER, YOU.
SERIOUSLY, DRAW, THOUGH. I WANT YOU TO. I MISS YOU. 8<

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 9:57 PM

I love really obscure animals

This is an aardwolf.
http://media-2.web.britannica.com/eb-media/82/5282-004-7493ECC1.jpg <-- I want this for a pet. Or a character. Idk.

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 2:58 AM

Whoa I've never heard of an aardwolf before! They look so cool!!

And lovely drawing by the way~ The shading is so nice <3

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:12 PM

Agreed. Very adorable. Yeah, that would make a cool character-- Those eyes are to die for

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:37 PM

Early and lazy Valentine's Day picture C:
I was working on a better picture but when I hit undo shi deleted the whole thing D:

chainedfox @ Tuesday, February 9th 2010, 2:36 PM

love potions! i like the colors here, and the shading
love potions make me think of harry potter XD

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, February 10th 2010, 4:49 AM

Ew I hate when shi messes thigs up like that D=

And sweet V-Day picture! I really like the shading. It's so lovely~

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, February 12th 2010, 12:30 PM

thanks you guys C:

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, February 8th 2010, 8:11 PM

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, February 2nd 2010, 7:03 PM

Timer lies. Playing around w/ pen pressure~

(Edited on February 3, 2010, 9:07 am)

chainedfox @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 3:20 PM

this is so cute, i lllike his crinkle - cute face

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 8:25 AM

Pen presure is so fun~!
And oh gosh I just want to hug this little pup!!! Ahh and I love his name OuO

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 2:32 PM

haha this is adorable Cx

i have recently discovered the joys of pen pressure myself

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 5:10 PM

For the theme (I believe it's talking about Chinese zodiac animals, right?)
I was born in teh year '95 C:

lol this looks like a dog xD

(Edited on January 31, 2010, 6:23 pm)

chainedfox @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 10:05 PM

this is really cute, i luv his nose and foofy ness

i should draw my zodiac animal, im the rat!~

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Saturday, January 30th 2010, 11:45 PM

This is so adorable

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 5:00 AM

awww this is adorable!
I like the little pieces of hair here and there~ oooh I just wana huggle him!!

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:50 AM

woof woof.. ima doggg born in year of '94 8D lol XD

awwwehhh this is sooo cuteee. i wanna hug itttt XD

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 7:06 PM

Ew. This is gross.
So my tablet came in on the 13th but I haven't really had any time to use it. My little sister's been using it a lot more, haha :C
Erg, the way Soul colors her pictures looked fun, decided to try. But... I didn't try very hard, obviously xD
timer lies, my dog was distracting me, I had to pee, etc. C:

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 21st 2010, 7:56 PM

waaa this is so cuteeeeeeeeee
I love his little feet and furry tail!! I just wana snuggle with him >3<

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:57 AM

awww Cx
i love squirrels, therefore i love this <3

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, January 11th 2010, 8:29 PM

WHOA I come here and Voodoo's made it all ~*~pretty~*~ @w@
I've no patience for oekaki-ing as of late lol
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dlkjgfghdfjklsgjkhdklhg I'm very addicted to this game and drawing the characters~ this is the first like picture picture I've done in awhile C: Leaning forward Layton FAIL I'm terrible with humans
I want the second gaaaammmme. D: Actually I want the third game to come out in America cuz then the second game will be less expensive lol~
lol my sig gets cut off every time I upload stuff. Whateverrrr, nobody's gonna steal this lol

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soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, January 12th 2010, 2:15 AM

I keep hearing about this game but I have yet to actually play it *fail*

And I'm in LOVE with this! The color and shading is so great! I especially like the mix of yellows, greens, and browns in the trees. Also the lineart is so smooth~ Ahhhh so cool draw more pleaseeeee<3333

Star @ Tuesday, January 12th 2010, 8:11 PM

OMG I LOVE PROF. LAYTON

IT IS SO ADDICTING. THE SECOND GAME IS SO GOOD OMG.

;n;

this is cuteeeeee

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 6:06 PM

[EDIT] ffffffff lol he has one wonderful hairstyle xD
Oh I miiiiggght be getting a tablet!! It's for this contest (don't feel like going into detail about it) and um, not to sound all high on myself but, uh, I've seen the other entries and... haha I'm pretty sure I'll win...
And I also just learned there's a hotkey for the undo button.. >_< would've been helpful 3 years ago lol
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BLAAAAAAAAAAH
Timer lies..... artblock's no fun :C

(Edited on December 15, 2009, 6:18 pm)

Arf @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 6:58 PM

tell me about it! I'm having art blockage trouble too!
I need to get back into my computer life too lol-- real life just gets boring xP i have one class this semester that is sucking away my life!! D: but i enjoy it D:
(BTW, THIS LION IS EPIC SO FAR<333)

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:25 AM

wha this is cute cute cute!! And I love the shading so far~ Those eyes are so pretty!

chainedfox @ Wednesday, December 16th 2009, 3:22 PM

this is awsome, i love ur style
its so cute

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, December 5th 2009, 12:24 PM

urg, an avatar
nothing special... I've sorta had artblock for a while now...

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, December 5th 2009, 9:43 PM

Aw, so cute xP

Arf @ Tuesday, December 8th 2009, 2:40 PM

yeah same here, kyuubi.. i've even been having a commenting block.. er, if that's possible! D:

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, December 9th 2009, 7:30 AM

Aw gosh your icons are so cute <3

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, November 25th 2009, 11:13 PM

umm idk if im accepted or not...

Toasteh @ Wednesday, November 25th 2009, 11:25 PM

Yep! Welcome to WOI! cB

chainedfox @ Wednesday, November 25th 2009, 11:42 PM

i would say your accepted! welcome

this is really cute, i like the fur and colors

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, November 26th 2009, 12:41 AM

Yep yep you are~!

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, November 26th 2009, 12:43 AM

And oh gosh this is adorable!!!
I love the shading >3<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, November 27th 2009, 12:18 PM

ahaha thanks guys x3

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, November 13th 2009, 11:49 PM

Getting a start on my second tryout.

I'm watching Slumdog Millionaire! 8D
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Meh, finished now
Only halfway pleased w/ how this turned out

oh well

Tryout 1: http://oekaki.weazie.com/intermediate/pictures/275.png

Comment & crit plz (also, a redline on this or my first tryout pic would be nice if needed)

(Edited on November 13, 2009, 4:52 pm)

issi_007 @ Friday, November 13th 2009, 5:14 PM

Redline: http://i199.photobucket.com/albums/aa299/issi007/redlinekyuubi-kitsune.png

This is a very beautiful tryout! I love the details here, and how you did the grass!
You seem to have a fairly good grasp at shading and use of oekaki tools, and the concept of this is really nice <33

So onto crits: the tree trunk looks very thick and the texture doesn't seem very tree-like. I wish you'd gone over the details with a smaller brush, just like you did on the canid (and you did an awesome job on fur, I must say) so the grass, tree texture and the leaves of the treetops would be more defined.

The stars claim my attention at once because of their strong contrast towards the dark sky. Just a tip: try not to distract the viewer subconciously off the main object (in this case, the canid, I presume) with very strong contrasts (sky colour versus stars, or the moon).

The anatomy looks fairly good; You seem to have a good grasp upon proportions, but be careful with the size of the torso compared with the neck! Canids usually have a lot of fur on their neck, so be careful with making the neck a lot slimmer than the size of the torso, unless the canid is short-haired.

But overall, an amazing tryout, and I can see that you spent A LOT of time on this, without looking at the timer.

I say in. c:
~~And an admin should delete previous comments.~~

And I hope this helped c:

(Edited on November 13, 2009, 5:33 pm)

(Edited on November 14, 2009, 7:00 am)

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, November 14th 2009, 7:06 AM

The fact that you put so much time and effort into each tryout is wonderful! And it really shows!

You obviously know what your doing with the oekaki tools. And your shading in both tryouts is great! I think you could have done a bit more with the tree though..more detail and more defined shading. But overall the subjct matters blend well with eachother and I like the depth that you've put into the background.

I vote IN =]

Toasteh @ Saturday, November 14th 2009, 7:33 PM

I think all the crits have been covered, so I say in as well.

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, November 14th 2009, 11:22 PM

Oh gosh I also must say that your icon is so cute >w<

chainedfox @ Sunday, November 15th 2009, 2:31 PM

this is very well done, the antomys a little off, but thats okay, the background is simply delicious, i like the stream
well done
i vote IN also

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, November 19th 2009, 4:50 PM

<3 <33 <333 <33 <3
thanks so much you guys ;___;
uh so I don't know how many more "in"s I'll need but um thanks<3

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, November 19th 2009, 11:18 PM

I think you have enough~
I don't think anyone is gona vote out and not many people are here...so you can probably just come on in and draw your heart out~!

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, October 28th 2009, 7:13 PM

Dooonnnnnnnnne
I probably could've done more but I'm getting really tired of this.. >_<
Crit away plz!!

(Edited on October 28, 2009, 4:50 pm)

chainedfox @ Thursday, October 29th 2009, 3:48 PM

not sure if im actuauly in but, this is very good,the shading seems to match and all, the antomy seems a little off, but im not good at drawing humans so i will leave those crits to someone else

Taz @ Thursday, November 5th 2009, 4:59 PM

oh wow, the amount of detail you put into this is incredible. its a very cute idea as well n_n i also do not have much knowledge on human anatomy so i won't critique you there. i love the softness on most of this, but some edges seem a little sharp. for example, on thumbelina's arm and on top of the thread. perhaps you couldve softened those lines up a little to help the rest of the picture flow with the softness of the background. i think you're doing great though, good luck!

Puppy @ Friday, November 6th 2009, 10:16 PM

It's nicely textured and shaded, but the anatomy is a bit off. Some of the lines are jagged, and, well, the tomato pin cushion is a bit funny looking. If you're aiming for the top of the pin look, maybe look at some pictures, or if you have one in real life, look at it? The baskets nice, too, and the shadings nearly perfect. I do say the clothing is a bit funny looking though, around the shoulders and that right knee. It's nice, though. Good luck.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, November 7th 2009, 12:37 PM

Thanks for the comments, guys @w@ they're really appreciated.
chainedfox: hehe I'm not the greatest at human anatomy either, but I wanted to give it a try.
Taz: I definatly agree with what you said about the jaggedy lines. I think at some point I just grew bored of this picture and... got lazy

but I'll try harder next time! (maybe xD)
Puppy: yeah, as i said before, I'm not the greatest when it comes to human anatomy. As for what you said about the pin cushion, my mom has one, and I tend to push the pins all the way in so you can only see the top...haha :D. I agree about the clothing too, and I'm usually good about how clothing looks... *fail* lol

Thanks so much for critiquing you guys!!

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