Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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sov @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 8:23 PM

Safety save of tryout two C:

would this still count as a tryout if i didnt put the rest of her body on this?

plusook @ Saturday, August 30th 2008, 12:06 AM

hmm... I think you're allowed to submit something like this instead of a fullbody w/ a background, and just let the votes change as they may or may not- but I'm not positive, so I would ask an admin first. :>

This looks great, btw!

Voodoo @ Saturday, August 30th 2008, 9:26 AM

This is fantastic, darling. Yeah you have to do a full body but since you already did in your first tryout and this is at least half of one we'll let it slide this time. Maybe try adding the abdomen/upper half of legs? Finish soon, whateva you dooo 8D

Arf @ Thursday, September 11th 2008, 9:16 PM

,msdhnd FINISH<3
it's amazzing so far! I love the hands~

Mara @ Thursday, September 11th 2008, 10:04 PM

Ah this is really pretty
it makes me think of a picture I saw in a tutorial somewhere but I can't remember where

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sov @ Thursday, August 28th 2008, 9:37 PM

Sorry, this isnt my best TuT~~

but it will have to do <3

sov @ Thursday, August 28th 2008, 9:39 PM

ps this didnt take close to that long. i had to go get my hair cut, styled and highlighted. and get some bubble tea yumm.

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 4:54 PM

This is great, love it, love it.
I can't crit on the anatomy because I suck at peopleeee...All I can say is the arms are a bit short, especially that rigt one. Overall love the composition of this, it's a very delightful piece. There's not much shading but I think that it makes the picture look good how it is. I say in c:

Char @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 5:09 PM

Ooh, I liek this! (: The little monster thingies around her are so adorable! <3 pinwheel, aweee.

Crittage. Okay. I'm cool with human anatomy. Really, everything is great on the girl... Except the hands and arms. The arms are much too short, and the hands are very small! D:

I don't know if the small hands are part of your "style", but judging from the rest of the body style, I don't think so. So... make 'em bigger! :>

As for the arms... As a helpful tip for future human drawings, the elbow will rest at the top of the hips, and the hands will rest around mid-thigh. I can redline if you'd like. :]

Also, shadiiing. I can see you did some, but it's very light, and hard to see. Maybe try some darker shades? And some lighting? :> Also, The background would have shading too!

All in all, a great tryout pic! (: I'm sure you get into WOI no problem! <3

(Edited on August 29, 2008, 5:09 pm)

sov @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 5:29 PM

EWWWW now that i look at it it looks like... demented. ew. ew. i have to fix that. ew.

haha jk im not gonna fix it. wheeee.

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Char @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 5:59 PM

I'm not sure if you're allowed to go back and fix stuff after we've critted anyways :B

GL!

plusook @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 10:47 PM

Aww, this is super-cute and a great tryout.

I'll agree that the hands and arms are a bit small, though; as for other crits- the clothing folds look a little random. But, clothes are a tough thing to do, and it doesn't detract from the image.

I'll be lookin' forward to tryout #2~

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