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[206] Artist: lenny | Title: Tryout two. | Time: 5h 18m
Pic #180

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lenny @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 10:43 PM
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 So uhm
im just gonna say this is finished because...i really just want it done and over with XD;
if i mess with this anymore im afraid im going to mess it up so.
Critic away :x

IN : x x x x x
OUT :
BorderLine :

(Edited on February 28, 2009, 5:56 pm)

(Edited on March 2, 2009, 1:40 pm)

(Edited on March 8, 2009, 8:27 am)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 10:55 PM
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 Auuugh finish sooooooon
You have such a cool style qwq

Bixie-Bee @ Thursday, February 26th 2009, 8:25 PM
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 lol, yay for lots of information!
but it looks awesome so far! I <3 your anatomy skills

lenny @ Thursday, February 26th 2009, 11:51 PM
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 th-thanks but i adore your coloring D:

Detective Wolf @ Friday, February 27th 2009, 1:24 AM
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 dfmskfms;
that little face cracked me up so bad fkslfjla

lenny @ Friday, February 27th 2009, 1:25 AM
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 i bet it did.

darkvine @ Friday, February 27th 2009, 10:21 PM
woah this is great looking
cant wait to see it finished :D

Loveless @ Saturday, February 28th 2009, 1:03 PM
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 mmmmmmm

I am loving those colors.

Damnit woman, your amazinggginggg

Daisoku @ Saturday, February 28th 2009, 1:24 PM
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 That is.
So cool.

I'm not in here but you should be. :)

Toasteh @ Saturday, February 28th 2009, 3:41 PM
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 I really wish you could've worked on this more. D:

ANYWAY, I VOTE IN

You meet the "Standards" pretty well...and I really don't have time to critique bawww D:

BUT ANYWAY GET'CHUR BOOTY IN HERE
AND GIMME A PCHAT LINK SO WE CAN PCHAT
AND DETECTIVIE CAN STALK US

Detective Wolf @ Sunday, March 1st 2009, 12:16 AM
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 yes in that face still cracks me up

lenny @ Sunday, March 1st 2009, 9:35 AM
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 lol@Detective;;

Moo @ Sunday, March 1st 2009, 9:18 PM
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 hey you
yeah you
inplz

Bixie-Bee @ Sunday, March 1st 2009, 11:23 PM
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 DANGG
you got a whole thing going here, it's not just a picture on a background it's a picture with a background, it's like, without the background the picture would loose some emotion.
this is CRAZY awesome, lol, I think after this, try out for advanced too, you'd get along there so well too!

lenny @ Monday, March 2nd 2009, 1:39 PM
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 DX <33 you guys are too nice;;;

Ichigo @ Friday, March 6th 2009, 7:54 PM
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 In. The detail is amazing. THAT FOOT. I love that foot. This pic really makes you wonder what happened.

Loveless @ Friday, March 6th 2009, 11:39 PM
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 oh btw~

in.

lenny @ Friday, March 6th 2009, 11:51 PM
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 @everyone above :X

THANK YOU.
YOU ARE DA BOMB.
:x you guys are so cool.


:x do i need more votes?

(Edited on March 6, 2009, 11:52 pm)

Toasteh @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 11:25 AM
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 I think this is enough |D;


[204] Artist: lenny | Title: Tryout1 | Time: 1h 40m
Pic #178

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lenny @ Tuesday, February 24th 2009, 11:02 PM
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 TIS FINISHED...
well as finished as it'll get anyway XD;;;
:333...ermmm
Yeah hi.

(Edited on February 25, 2009, 10:25 pm)

POLYGONS;; @ Tuesday, February 24th 2009, 11:21 PM
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 Really great perspective!
Good luck :3
<333

lenny @ Tuesday, February 24th 2009, 11:23 PM
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 th-thanks D: <33 you too :]

Toasteh @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 11:33 AM
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 Ahh yes good luck!
You probably shouldn've have many problems getting in, newer oekakis tend to have lower standards. C:
BUT NOT THAT IT SHOULD MATTER BECAUSE YOUR STYLE IS COOL. :D

tigerchic643 @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 4:14 PM
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 this is so amazing so far.
please finish soon. =]

lenny @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 4:15 PM
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 toast.. do you have another account somewhere?
maybe uhh, sron or something?

edit:
thanks @ both btw XD

(Edited on February 25, 2009, 4:15 pm)

(Edited by Toasteh)
I started drawing again at Sutaro Sketcher as Spartacus. C:
I probably won't be there very much though...
Oh yeah, and I lurk a little at SRON as Toasteh...I'll try to tryout soon. C:

lenny @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 6:01 PM
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 ah i see.
i dont go to sron anymore..haha;
i dont know why though im more of the pchat type of person.
but i guess i like it here better, its more calmer.

(Edited by Toasteh)
Yeah, I like it better here too. |D;
If this place becomes as chaotic as Sutaro I might consider leaving...but I probably won't...I'm a really nostalic person and I've been here for two years so...I have a sort of patriotism towards Weazie. C:
And I loooove pchat but I haven't in...a long time...


~
Dude me eitherrrr. we should totally do it together!
not now though = w= im SUPPOSED to be writing a paper;; ha..ha..ha...

(Edited on February 25, 2009, 6:38 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 7:53 PM
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 dude good luck!!
and I might have to stalk my way into a pchat that you guys have

lenny @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 7:54 PM
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 pshh you dont have to stalk i give you link you just tell me when ;D

Toasteh @ Wednesday, February 25th 2009, 10:54 PM
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 IT'S DONE CRIT TIME!

Hmmm well my human anatomy isn't that great. :I
WELL THEN!
The shading, especially on the grass, looks a bit rushed 'n sloppy, but hey, who am I to talk right? -shot-
Well I REALLY LIKE PERSPECTIVE. JUST SO YOU PEOPLE TRYING OUT KNOW, PERSPECTIVE IS A PRETTY BIG WIN IN MY BOOK, ESPECIALLY WHEN YOU CAN PULL IT OFF LIKE THIS.
It's just a bit off, and when drawing perspective please remember that shading gets darker the farther away the subject is from the light source, in this case I'm assuming the sun?
I see you paid attention to that just below the knees but the rest of the pants could be darker as well (UNLESS of course those pants are made of a very reflective material, but it looks to me like jeans).
The background perspective is just a weeee bit off. what we have going on here is a term referred to as 'tilted perspective'--obvious meaning. The tree almost appears to be falling down, the flower's perspecitve just a little bit off. AND WE'RE MISISNG SOMETHING HERE.
SHADOW!!
FIGURES CAST SHADOW!
UH-OH!
WE GOT A SEVERE CASE OF PETER PAN SYNDROME!
The tree leaves should also be casting a shadow, and because of the leaves it would probably cast a really splotchy-looking one.

OTHER THAN THAT YOU PULLED THIS OFF QUITE NICELY.
I won't crit on the anatomy, I'll leave that to the more knowledgeable of it, but YEAH.
LOOKING FORWARD TO THAT NEXT TRYOUT.

AND SEND ME A LINK TO A PCHAT 'CAUSE I WANNAAAAA D:
AND WE CAN HAS A DETECTIVIE STALKER

Detective Wolf @ Thursday, February 26th 2009, 10:12 PM
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 /stalk /stalk /stalk

(Edited by Toasteh)
STALKERRRRR IMA CALL DAH POHLEES

Detective Wolf @ Friday, February 27th 2009, 1:25 AM
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 e-police doesn't scare me! >:3



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