Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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halfdoomed @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 5:34 PM

not finishing ~~cause i'm lazy~~ cause i don't have to

(Edited on July 23, 2010, 7:01 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 10:11 PM

^^ Looking really cool so far! Can't wait to see this finished! The background looks so cool!

Khadyah @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 12:29 PM

Wow this is looking really awesome so far can't wait t see it finisheddd 8DD

Tree @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 3:15 PM

i like this SO MUCH so far. it's good to see you neatening this up a bit. you're great with solids!

Star @ Wednesday, July 7th 2010, 1:31 PM

this is
going to
turn out
super duper awesome
i jusst know it

edit] fixing some typos

(Edited on July 7, 2010, 1:31 pm)

Seidal @ Monday, July 12th 2010, 8:57 PM

O__O
holy mutha...

Fallout @ Friday, July 16th 2010, 1:50 PM

u lazy
i need to stop making you join oekakis you poor thing you
why u draw so nice

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:08 PM

this looks pretty freakin rad

Moo @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 3:15 PM

Hello! There's been a recent change to the rules so that only one tryout is required. If you want to finish this one, go right ahead, but at this point the only requirement is for you to post a link to your deviantart gallery. (Or any other gallery you may have, or even a few links to some recent works of yours)

Good luck to you! <3

halfdoomed @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 7:00 PM

haha wow one tryout ... really... well screw this im not finishing it >:I
deviantart(s): http://halfdoomed.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://shippedgoldstandard.deviantart.com/gallery

Seidal @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 9:54 PM

INNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

Fallout @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 5:19 PM

in ~~because im biased~~

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 5:22 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 10:09 AM

Fudge! Get in here!!!!!

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halfdoomed @ Tuesday, June 8th 2010, 10:37 PM

gotta finish this tomorrow! it's really late u_u

well um yeah. hi. idk some of you might know me/recognize my stupid avatar
oh and the time lies i was IMing people and not working on this in general

WHOA OK this went over the file size limit after i was almost done shading the first guy yeah cool so i had to finish it in one sitting after that yay
here is the finished picture! http://iaza.com/work/100610C/tryout92498.png
yay for super bs'd backgrounds

(Edited on June 11, 2010, 10:30 pm)

Tree @ Wednesday, June 9th 2010, 11:50 AM

that is some hot hair!! and those shoes!!
can't wait to see this finished

Fallout @ Wednesday, June 9th 2010, 11:56 PM

omg this is great stop being amazing im serious ):

Seidal @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 10:25 PM

oh wow pretty sweet shading on the left guyXD
If you run out of bytes, just hit print screen, save the image as a .png file, and let one of the admins know. They'll upload it for you so you can work on it more... but your layers will be gone, so be careful!

Can't wait for your next try out~ Hopefully with a bg too~ <33

halfdoomed @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 10:30 PM

... oh the word "here" in my comment above was a link to the finished picture i guess you cant really tell though hah
thank you!

Seidal @ Friday, June 11th 2010, 11:19 PM

ohhhhh!!! sorry, my bad..
lol
I think my eyes..
are broken..

Tree @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 2:45 PM

well now this is done i guess it's safe to crit! the background could have a lot more detail but i won't dwell on that because they're not a big deal to me. you did the lighting very well! i really love that red. there are some colour bleeds that you could fix and your dynamic shading is great but pretty messy.
i'll redline later because i'm at a friend's house... the anatomy is what i think you need to work on the most but i can't explain without a redline fhfjdkshdgg
all in all i'm sure you'll have no trouble getting in.

Tree @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 6:13 PM

http://img709.imageshack.us/img709/4526/woabannercopy.png heeere's the redline. i did the best i could; sorry it's so terrible.

halfdoomed @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 6:28 PM

thank you so much for the redline! it's extremely helpful ; ;

Tree @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 6:31 PM

you're welcome! gl on your next tryout! :))

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 11:11 PM

ohh it turned out real nice!
lovely colours and shading!
good luck on your next tryout C:

Tree @ Tuesday, June 15th 2010, 2:33 PM

OH SHIT i just realised where i wrote 'head too small' i meant to write 'head too large'
i'm such a tard dkgjhdsl

Seidal @ Saturday, June 19th 2010, 1:54 AM

Ack! Sorry for my delay in critting!!!
Very sweet shading and bg. Those blue highlights make my day

So super kudos for those. My one point for improvement is to also 'shade' your lineart or in other words, have it in the same style as your coloring. The lines look a touch too harsh for me... I've gone through the same thing in my old tryouts too haha and it's the same advice that I got. :3

Good luck!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see your next one!!!!!! XD

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