Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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ayaface @ Sunday, July 13th 2008, 9:10 PM

if im doing something wrong ill freak out fbshfbfs
ok anyways this is my first tryout
im scared

(Edited on July 13, 2008, 10:37 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 12:58 AM

Ahh don't be scared
We're really nice people!
xD
I won't try to be harsh or anything
Um
Here's a redline:
http://i6.photobucket.com/albums/y242/Moon_Wolf/redline-1.jpg
You have a good sense of human anatomy, but you need to now define it
In this picture the girl has a really small head compared to her body
and her body is very long and stiff
And her face is scrunched up also
all though you did a nice job on the coloring and shading
The last thing I will include is that the perspective is off in the background
Things don't add up and are akward
Though I DO have to admit THAT is amazing grass
fkaldf
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that's it for now
good luck on your next tryout!

ayaface @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 1:01 AM

yyyeah this is why i never really draw from references?
i never understand them well enough

Detective Wolf @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:27 AM

do you have a link to your ref that I could look at?

Star @ Monday, July 14th 2008, 2:01 PM

goodluck ayaayayayayayayaa

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