Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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ShiPainter
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Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 4:33 PM

Ok.

Finally finished. :F

In or out? ;-;

(Edited on August 27, 2008, 7:43 pm)

Ichigo @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 5:18 PM

So not ugly! I love his fins. Especially his tail fin.

Ichigo @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 7:17 PM

Pssh you are so already in. I'm not sure if your done but maybe you should add more bg stuff like bubbles or something.
--
*spaz*
Win.

(Edited on August 27, 2008, 10:08 pm)

Tor @ Thursday, August 28th 2008, 4:47 PM

IN.
i love your lineart, shading, and style.

Arf @ Thursday, August 28th 2008, 9:37 PM

I'm still a member on the advanced-- so I'll go ahead and say in
You have awesomesauce shading and did nicely with the fins.
my only complaint is the bg. but from your first tryout I know you have good bg potential.

Voodoo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 5:00 PM

If you're already a member of advanced you don't need to try out for intermediate, but oh well. This is very cute; has a lot of personality. I'd suggest adding "ripply sun lines" (lol I fail) where the sun is shining through the water to give it a more aquatic feell. Also the bubbles look just like spheres; if you made them transparent they'd be more tangible.

For anatomy, the muzzle seems a bit awkwardly curved, and the webbing on the paws...it appears to be attached to the nails instead of the toes, is this how it's supposed to be? Also, the shadow by the eye makes the illusion that it's floating by its head so shading more around the cheekbone area would make it look more natural.

But you're in and, bravo!

plusook @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 10:49 PM

In, great shading job.

The inking is clean and smooth, the anatomy is good, and the poses are nice, too.

My only crit is the eye; It looks a bit bulgy to me (which may be intentional), but if you -weren't- going for that effect, shade above it and highlight below it instead of visa-versa.

Chelly @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 11:14 PM

http://i88.photobucket.com/albums/k195/chellyreffs/redlineyayy.jpg

redline for youuu! 8D;
the coloring is really pretty wow iwi

in

(Edited on August 29, 2008, 11:15 pm)

Moo @ Friday, August 29th 2008, 11:55 PM

I say in as well.

I'm not particularly positive about this oekaki's skill level yet, but I can tell you're within that range C:

Voodoo seems to have gotten all the crits. All I can really say is add a little definition to the brow. Congrats on getting in C:

Robot @ Saturday, August 30th 2008, 4:11 PM

tyty so much for crits and redline guys. :3
(Yes webbing is supposed to be connected to the claws)
Ahaha. Thank you.. now I see what is wrong with the eye. xDD

ShiPainter
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Robot @ Tuesday, August 26th 2008, 9:46 PM

Kekeh.
Tryout numero uno is finally completed.
;^;
... whatever.

(Edited on August 27, 2008, 3:30 pm)

Ichigo @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 2:17 PM

You are such a great artist you know that? I superly love your shading.

Robot @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:34 PM

Bawh. ty so much. ;m;
Seriously, you're gonna give me a big head or something. xDD

Daisoku @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 3:46 PM

Damn,You are really good.
You should get accepted. NOW.

Kunaike @ Wednesday, August 27th 2008, 7:56 PM

Wow, you have really awesome skills.
I especially love the background, and those trees omg.

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