Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, January 1st 2014, 1:25 AM

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Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 2:01 AM

WIP still but its almost done

(Edited on August 21, 2010, 4:40 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 3:21 PM

Can't wait to see this finished! ^^

Seidal @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 5:11 PM

Good luck!! XD

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:13 AM

hey man, finish soon (:
looking good & goodluck!
uhh and is that a high priest i see? c:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:11 PM

Finish soon, and good luck! <3

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Reflection-Shadow @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 4:20 PM

Uploaded by Anne Dyari because of byte limit

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 4:40 PM

Cool use of textures on this, though you might want to round out the pillar she's sitting on so that it's more circular, try drawing the background in first so you know what's behind the character?
Also, refferences are your best friend, they'll help you figure out what goes where, and definately help when perspective is involved ^^
refference pictures like this
http://comps.fotosearch.com/comp/IMR/IMR242/girl-kneeling_~IE065-010.jpg

Quick redline
http://i30.tinypic.com/33l2wec.png

The only thing I really though was off was the knees were too small, good luck on your next tryout! ^^

Reflection-Shadow @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 9:28 PM

I though it was only one tryout that was tequired as of now? .-. Sorry, just a lil confused

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, August 1st 2010, 2:58 PM

Lol, they changed it on me! xDDD

I say borderline in, I do love the use of the textures, just it seems like there could be more depth, like the shadows on the skirt parts, the highlights and shadows roughly follow the lines, but could be better defined with more work.

Reflection-Shadow @ Monday, August 2nd 2010, 1:14 AM

thank you for the help~ do you know any good website for reference pictures? ^^ google / yahoo / -insert website here- images always fail me ._.;;

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 2nd 2010, 1:31 AM

I always use google, but friends and a camera are always very convenient!

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:15 PM

Right away, I really like the coloring that you used in this, especially the details for the stockings, pillar, etc along with the textures of the dress. I'm assuming you're going for the 3/4 profile view.. and if you are, I would make the eye on our right a bit smaller. The shading isn't too convincing, so I would recommend some real-life study like sketching draping / piled up cloth or people.

If you could also post a link to your gallery that also show other oekaki images, I'll probably be able to vote if it's in or not.

At this point, I'm going to say borderline.

(Edited on August 3, 2010, 4:17 pm)

Fl?ss @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:16 PM

http://www.posemaniacs.com <--- super good pose source

also, be sure to check out their 30 second drawing tool! it's awesome when learning to draw humans

Reflection-Shadow @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 9:44 PM

thanks you for the advice ^-^ would it be alright if i just went ahead and drew another tryout picture here? o.o;; i don't have any decent oekaki work recently made >.>"

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 11:15 PM

I'd say go ahead and do a second tryout, I really think we should change tryouts back to 2, since it gives the artist time to correct things they hadn't thought about first.

Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 1:00 AM

ah okay!

i just i hope i don't get the byte limit error again =_=

Seidal @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 2:01 PM

nahh I get byte limit overloads all the time. just go all out and have fun with it :3

@Anne: Maybe the 2nd tryout can turn into an optional 2nd Chance if their 1st tryout doesn't doesn't cut it?

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 3:20 PM

@Seidal: Ah, that's true, I just realized they did the same thing at the advanced board. xD just is going to take me alittle getting used to.

Tree @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 6:38 AM

it's probably best to check on the rules with moo, she'll know what to do! this is cute.

Tree @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 6:38 AM

i'm a poet and i didn't even know it

Reflection-Shadow @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 12:51 AM

xDD tree, thank you~

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Reflection-Shadow @ Thursday, July 29th 2010, 11:02 PM

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