Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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ShiPainter

Pav @ Wednesday, January 6th 2010, 9:28 PM

tryout 2!
wow this bacground took a while xD

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, January 3rd 2010, 8:15 PM

I like how everything is darkened from it being night, though I would've liked to see a more stroking lightsource, since everything is toned down.
I also like the details in the store, and would've liked to see more gradients rather than just two or three. Overall, cool concept.
The level for intermediate is confusing to me, but I say in. ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, January 6th 2010, 7:19 AM

Intermediate level is a bit confusing for me too but.... I'd say in.
For some reason the perspective is really bugging me... it looks like the stores are sloping up? idk, could be me. um and the items in the store also look really flat?
but yeah, I really like the amount of detail you put into this ^^

soulwithin465 @ Thursday, January 7th 2010, 5:26 AM

In~

Pav @ Thursday, January 7th 2010, 6:50 PM

how many votes do i have to get?

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, January 7th 2010, 9:55 PM

I think 3 is enough in this case, no one is opposing. ^^ Welcome to WOI!

PaintBBS

Pav @ Wednesday, January 6th 2010, 9:25 PM

tryout 1
um
idk what to say?

(Edited on January 2, 2010, 2:47 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 2nd 2010, 3:55 PM

Ahahaha this is cute

I'm no good with solids so I don't have a whole lot of crits bout how you colored it.. only I would've liked to see some more intense shading, particularly on the shirt, but I really like your shading so uh yeah :P. Also, the paws. The one strumming is paw-like, while the one fingering is human hand-like... they should both look the same. The mic looks very flat; mics are cylindrical, so the end of it and the stand it's sitting on should curve a little. Where the stand is sitting on the bottom part of the stand is off... um kinda hard to explain but depending on the angle it'll be in the middle of it.. um... yes....
Uh I'll leave the anatomy/rest of the crits to someone more knowledgeable than me.

Pav @ Saturday, January 2nd 2010, 4:01 PM

the fingers on the paw like one were supposed to be bending xD
obviously im not very good at that D:!

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