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[669] Artist: POLYGONS;; | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 4h 57m
Pic #610

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POLYGONS;; @ Saturday, July 3rd 2010, 5:52 PM
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 Ummm SS!

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, July 4th 2010, 5:13 PM
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 Looking great so far! Finish soon!

Star @ Wednesday, July 7th 2010, 1:32 PM
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 fffff i like
this ok
yay finish soon

Tree @ Thursday, July 8th 2010, 2:36 PM
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 OH THE DRAMA!!!!!!!! i like this so far

Seidal @ Monday, July 12th 2010, 8:58 PM
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 ooh I love those eye lashes <3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:06 PM
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 DANG
this is pretty sweet


[276] Artist: POLYGONS;; | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 55m 53s
Pic #238

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POLYGONS;; @ Tuesday, May 26th 2009, 11:35 PM
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 SS :)

Toasteh @ Wednesday, May 27th 2009, 1:33 PM
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 sdfjlsdkf finish soon or I'll throw out all the dog-friendly cigarettes ; ;

Random @ Thursday, May 28th 2009, 4:11 PM
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 your lineart is so nice ;//;


[217] Artist: POLYGONS;; | Title: Tryout 1 | Time: 2h 4m
Pic #190

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POLYGONS;; @ Sunday, March 15th 2009, 12:32 AM
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 EDIT
Done. It's crap, I know.


(Edited on March 18, 2009, 10:21 pm)

Random @ Sunday, March 15th 2009, 2:25 PM
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 ohgosh I love the lineart

Toasteh @ Sunday, March 15th 2009, 4:47 PM
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 ^iawtc

Konekochan16 @ Tuesday, March 17th 2009, 10:21 PM
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 IMA LOVING THOSE PANTSUZ :D

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, March 19th 2009, 9:46 AM
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 It's not crap, the colors are very vibrant!

My only crits are that there is no highlights, other shadows on her hair, though it is quite cool looking, and her legs look a tad short. Maybe try zooming out and making sure everything is the right proportion in the sketch?

Last crit, and it's not that big, maybe add more weight to her, like, have the bed sinking around her alittle, most mattresses have alittle give to them, and maybe shadow those folds to give them a more weighted effect.

Other than that, Love the hair, the sleeve, the jeans, and I want to own those headphones XD

tigerchic643 @ Thursday, March 19th 2009, 6:36 PM
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 jdflgkdjfdfgmd this is sssooo cute.
i like ur shading and lines.

cant wait for ur second XD.

POLYGONS;; @ Monday, March 23rd 2009, 9:58 PM
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 May I please get some more crits?
I really don't think there's only the two minor things that Anne mentioned...



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