Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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ShiPainter

Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 8:37 AM

My tryout #2
Alef, my icon character <33

please crit and comment!

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:37 pm)

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:52 pm)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:43 PM

Good luck ~ <33
I saw it D< sew me jk
fineesh sooonnnn

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 4:41 PM

omg this is so great i want to see it finished

Etch-a-Sketch @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 2:56 PM

WOAH.
Mannnn I so wish I could say in but I still need to try out ;; <3
this looks FANTASTIC. I love the background, color choices, and shading. THE SHADING IS AMAZING. ily.~<333

Tor @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 12:53 PM

i love how you shaded it, and that facee

you have a nice style

all i can think of saying is that the arm pose looks slightly uncomfortable (i actually tried to do it and hurt myself, but that may just be me). And some of the lines, mainly in the curtain, could do with being more tapered as they look oddd.

I say in.
goodluck.

Hoshii @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 3:16 PM

Yea the arm is still a bit weird ): it just looks awkward but i love how you did the skin and the shading on the curtains C: <3 Very pretty ~

WTFINPLZ

You're definately intermediate *A* <33

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:10 PM

uh uh how many more votes should I wait for? DDD:

Hoshii @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 2:17 PM

idk prob a few more because i dont think 2 is enough to be a unanimous vote but im not the boss n_N

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 5:03 PM

Mmkay, crits:

Some areas, especially the curtains, probably could have been filled in a little cleaner. Notice that the curtain in the top right has purple edges. Next time I'd probably take the tool, make it 1 pixel and carefully color in on the edges :3
Also there's a bit of coloring outside the lines in a few areas.

Despite those two problems, I think your coloring style is -amazing-. I LOVE the face here, it's oh-so-awesome <33 Great shading too.

So I will say IN because I think the small errors can be corrected over a short amount of time.

Mizuchu @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 4:54 AM

ok so far is 3(lol?) In votes and 0 outs, anymore people want to crit? I love learning, so please do...I will wait till Wednesday maybeh to finish counting votes? DD:

ShiPainter

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:20 AM

Ok so These people are Cloud (the wolf) and Blake (...the human D<)
Tryout #1 A kind of "Italy" theme maybe...T^T I should start on the next one now xDD

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:28 AM

Blake looks like he's staring off in to the distance and Cloud's front arm is still a bit to small but this is amazing, bebe ~ ; w ; <33 ilu

Glad you kept showing me your progress ~ Cloud and Blake are so cute together fhjkwe roflwtf ;__; <33

Good luck !

Kyogre @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:50 AM

My gosh I love the hair and the shirt! GL!

Etch-a-Sketch @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 3:09 AM

uhhhh hmmm I think I'm allowed to comment on intermediate?
I cant believe this is finally open ;u; I shall try out when you is done~<3
HE SHIRT IS AWESOME. JUST BTW.
MUCHO LUCK...O..S. *phail'd*

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:20 AM

aw, this is adorable. :3

the backround does confuse me though, im not quite sure what it is to be truthful.

the torso also looks a little off.

but yeah those are my only crits for now, good luck! c:

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 11:05 AM

Thank you everyone for all the comments!
<333

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