Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
Weekly Theme: Water! - Local Admins: Anne Dyari

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.Psychopath. @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 2:46 PM

ughh i cant draw D:
free lines if you wanna use.. just dont remove the copyright and give me credit for the lineart.

the anatomy on the legs are all wrong D:

i think ima go make myself a grilled cheese sandwich now. lol

Tree @ Saturday, June 12th 2010, 3:00 PM

of course you can draw!! quit dragging yourself down... if you couldn't draw you wouldn't be here!! chin up chuck!

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 10:26 PM

aw thanks <3

Seidal @ Saturday, June 19th 2010, 1:47 AM

i agree exactically with Tree <3

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.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, June 9th 2010, 8:11 PM

im sorry i cant draw anything better.. believe me, if i could, then i would.
im just super exhausted from school.
and you know what I noticed... everyone in my lunch group has a bf/gf or someone that they like/likes them.. and so then they go off with their lovers and im just the loner out of the bunch.. D:
then some ppl try and suggest me guys that i barely even know (one time it was actually rather hilarious tho, because the guys this girl was suggesting was like, guys who will NEVER get girlfriends.. im srs...) and im just thinking "but... i.. dont like them... i like.. someone else."
and arghhh its just too frustrating.
anyways, enough of that.
im sorry for not being active.. i've just been way too busy with school and lately ive been staying up really late every night so ive been reallllly tired. D:

anywayss.. i gotta go clean my fish tank. a disease broke out, killing three fish already, so i better save the last 4 while i can.. D:

Tree @ Thursday, June 10th 2010, 5:02 PM

ff i know what it's like being the loner!! thing is my friends are such losers they feel the need to brag about their boyfriends as well
but tbh it just makes me lol! just don't pay any attention to em, just do what i do and roll wit it and just be happy!
...that made no sense but i like this sketch

farren @ Thursday, June 10th 2010, 7:16 PM

Oh gosh you draw reptiles and dragons so well, i envy your superific talent

And sorry........

I apologize. I feel bad...

:
When you feel that way please tell me straight up alrighty? I need to know.. =(

.Psychopath. @ Monday, June 14th 2010, 11:09 PM

thanks <3

Farren> well, its not really you.. you have reasons that you leave, because you have school work to finish. it's just, everyone else seems sooo happy with their bf/gf.. and then im just like "uhhh... what do i do now?...."....

farren @ Tuesday, June 15th 2010, 1:42 AM

=(

Well Jess is single now... >3<

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, June 16th 2010, 8:24 PM

yea I know, but still... im just not happy.. im happy with you guys, but not completely happy..

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.Psychopath. @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 12:01 AM

Happy birthday Gecko <3
have a good one!

sorry, i didnt know if your fursona was furry or not.. so i drew it furry anyways XD

Gecko @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 4:16 AM

Oh my, thank you ;A; <3
This is too cute!

<33

UNKNOWN_ARTIST @ Saturday, February 13th 2010, 5:53 PM

your style is so cute!

Seidal @ Sunday, February 14th 2010, 8:15 PM

oh oh Happy belated birthday Gecko!
Ahaha this is so adorable and warm and fuzzy looking =w=

soulwithin465 @ Tuesday, February 23rd 2010, 1:20 AM

Hehe this is adorable <3
I like the shading style too~

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.Psychopath. @ Thursday, February 4th 2010, 10:59 PM

just a random drawing of Zee.. i think im definately gonna keep her as a furry dragon. except i dunno if i wanna keep her hair like that or like a horse mane like i had it tho.. haha she looks like a llama or some creature from Dr. Zeuss
this kinda helped a bit cos i'd been having a bad day.
now off to do homework D:

chainedfox @ Friday, February 5th 2010, 3:58 PM

she looks so cute, i love the soft colors

soulwithin465 @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 3:06 AM

Oh my what a pretty design! The choice of colors go really well together and I just adore the hair!

Hope you feel better soon =]

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, February 6th 2010, 1:44 PM

UUUUU this is really pretty <3 I really like her design <33

.Psychopath. @ Sunday, February 7th 2010, 3:28 PM

thanks guys <3

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.Psychopath. @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 3:52 PM

kinda for the theme..
i didnt do my chinese zodiac which is a dog (1994) cos i draw dogs alla time anyways XD
so i did my birthdate one, Aries. which is a ram.. thing..

chainedfox @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 5:12 PM

this is so loverly, and cute!
i'm an aries to, i think, i was born on the cusp so im an aries some years, and like a piceses other years
its very confusing for me

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 6:21 PM

Oh my gosh this is so cute <33 I love the fur, and the adorable face ;_;
I'm a Leo (I share a b-day w/ Obama lol) so maybe I'll draw a lion later

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Sunday, January 31st 2010, 10:38 PM

This pic makes my love of rams grow

FFFFFF I wanted to be Aries but i'm stuck with piceses >:(

soulwithin465 @ Monday, February 1st 2010, 4:58 AM

AHHH I love sheep with a burning passion of a thousand suns!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww so cute oh gosh!!! ;A;

.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, February 3rd 2010, 12:49 AM

bawww thanks guys <3

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.Psychopath. @ Sunday, January 10th 2010, 3:27 PM

done.. mehh.. im not really likin the background but it probly wont get any better than that XD
so, am i in or out?

oh and the background is suppose to look kind of abstract-ish.. so.. yea

(Edited on January 15, 2010, 8:31 pm)

(Edited on January 15, 2010, 8:32 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 10th 2010, 5:20 PM

Oh gosh oh gosh this is looking epic!!

chainedfox @ Monday, January 11th 2010, 6:07 PM

this is very good, i like the use of tesxtures

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 17th 2010, 1:12 AM

I vote innnn~!!

love the atmosphere~ so dark and creepy >w<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Monday, January 18th 2010, 8:09 AM

In.
I, er, can't really think of any crits, this is really cool C:

.Psychopath. @ Tuesday, January 19th 2010, 7:16 PM

so am i in? 8D

soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, January 20th 2010, 3:59 AM

I don't think anyone is gona say out and if someone does well they should voice they're opinion already! So yes~ WELCOME >w<

(Edited on January 20, 2010, 3:59 am)

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.Psychopath. @ Friday, January 8th 2010, 11:32 PM

tryout. since i never finished my last tryout.. and i believe that i have improved since then..
okay its a crocodile thats suppose to be falling into water. it looks like it's dancing so i added in a little bow tie XD
and yes i know, my backgrounds suckkkkk
but i like the colouring on the croc 8D
timer lies a bit cos i ate dinner.

anyways, any constructive critiques would be appreciated (yes i've already spotted a few things, like the fact that a crocodile's tail most likely cant bend that far. its just that i ran out of canvas space and i didnt wanna resize it and ruin the picture XD and i didnt really do much scaley-ness.. it was hard enough to colour lol )

oh and i referenced from this-
http://www.guzer.com/pictures/alligator_jumps.jpg
looks like its doin a bum drop there.. XD

now i gotta get inspiration for the next tryout XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, January 9th 2010, 10:20 AM

xD oh geez, the picture you referenced from made me laugh really hard
So first, I gotta say the pattern on the crocodile is just too cool <3
This picture feels very flat. Y'know that artist who makes paper cut-outs of animals? (I can't for the life of me remember his name) This reminds me of his stuff; you seemed to have focused on the patterns and not on the shading. While that style works well in some situations, I really wanna see more depth for your next tryout. Picking a lightsource and shading/highlighting in accordance to it is something you should try to do. I'm also having some trouble figuring out the background: is it water against the sky or water against water? Both ways would be a bit off perspective-wise. And I like the pattern in the water but... it's a bit boring?

idk, I'm tired and rambling.
Good luck on your next tryout!

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, January 9th 2010, 12:57 PM

I can tell you did take time and added gradients to the sky and texture tto the water, but, as stated above, a strong lightsource would dynamically improve this.

Though I do love your choice of composition xD Very cool! We like insteresting tryouts!
Goodluck on your next one!

.Psychopath. @ Saturday, January 9th 2010, 7:03 PM

thank-you very much for the input

yes i agree, my backgrounds are always bland and ugly. i try to make em look half decent buttttt.. i see this one didnt want to turn out XD
i will try adding much more depth next time XD
i've actually already semi got an ideaaa C:

soulwithin465 @ Sunday, January 10th 2010, 3:03 AM

I love you for using a ref! They really can be quite helpful~

I think you could have gone a bit more detailed and distinct with the textures of the scales but the tones and shades you used on the body are good enough that that?s not that big a problem. But yes I do feel a contrast in lights and darks would give this image a POP! I do like the idea you have going on here though. It?s always nice to see a variety of subject matters being used~ Well, good luck! Hope to see a second soon X]

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.Psychopath. @ Wednesday, January 28th 2009, 9:10 PM

s.s.
I decided to try a different animal other than a dog. in this case, an elk Cx
and Im also gonna try soft shading it..
anyways, i'll finish this later or w/e.. I'm getting bored of it D:

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, January 29th 2009, 12:44 AM

Looking great so far, can't wait to see this finished!

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.Psychopath. @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 12:06 PM

edit: I'm done!
gahhhh.. this took forever D:
well anyways, crits plz c:

I shall start on my second one tomorrow.

(Edited on January 27, 2009, 11:30 pm)

Arf @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 1:59 PM

I don't think tryouts are allowed to be critiqued before they're finished ^^;;

Thudd @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 2:10 PM

yeah..... that what i though too...
but it is lovely so far C:

Toasteh @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 4:05 PM

Yep, no tryout critiques. :C

Tryout suggestions are probably okay though...
Liiike not telling someone to fix something, more like an idea for a clever background if they didn't know what to do.

Like if I were trying out and I didn't have any ideas for a bg, someone could say "BEING CARRIED AWAY BY FIREFLIES" or some other such nonsense.

Groggy @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 5:07 PM

This looks really adorable so far. I love the ears, and the eyes. The over all concept is nice.
This is going to be really nice when its finished. c:

.Psychopath. @ Tuesday, January 27th 2009, 7:29 PM

oh sorry, i didn't know D:
-runs off to finish-

Hazuza @ Thursday, January 29th 2009, 2:18 AM

idk what makes or breaks an archive but sure xD This is awesome~

.Psychopath. @ Thursday, January 29th 2009, 6:17 PM

wow you guys really think so? o.o

(Edited by Toasteh)
YES

.Psychopath. @ Friday, January 30th 2009, 1:24 AM

oh wow.. thank you so much for the archive 8D
<33

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