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Rye @ Sunday, September 18th 2011, 8:16 PM

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Rye @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 12:03 PM

This is my fursona Rye
she's a thylacine/jackal/coyote/tiger thing
I've had her since 2007 (jan)
I draw her anthro sometimes, and sometimes quadruped
I also have an elaborate story / comic / movie / ??? in the works and it centers around her.

I didn't feel like drawing arms today.

Anyway HI I'm Rye and this is also Rye but you can call me Rye. Or whatever. I've also gone by Crow, so you can call me that too. Crow is my alternate "fursona" idk, she's more like a main character rather than a fursona now. I wanted a new fursona a while back and put Rye aside and started with Crow, but now I'm back with Rye since like, last year sometime.

Yes she has a badass shark hoodie that shoots radioactive lazers from its eyes.
be jealous.

So yeah I assume since I got like 5 "ins" on my tryout, that means I've been accepted.

if you want you can add me on msn
LordRye@live.com

SoRo @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 6:26 PM

i like that you added sum thylacine in there they are my favorite
forever

Kunaike @ Monday, September 6th 2010, 11:51 AM

Love your sona!! @w@
oh man and this hoodie looks so cool

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Rye @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 12:47 AM

I haven't tried out for an oekaki in a very long time, so I'm a little rusty. :]

But I thought it would be fun, so I gave it a shot.

http://dollarsign.deviantart.com/

I prefer SAI but I enjoy the oekaki community very much. <3

Timer is fairly accurate, I've been working on and off while watching movies.

No reference used, drawn from memory of the horses @ the ranch I work at

(Edited on August 28, 2010, 1:23 pm)

Detective Wolf @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 12:39 PM

this is awesome
i'm not too great at horses so i'm kind of ??? with them in general, but i'll vote in nonetheless

Jazzy @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 1:11 PM

Ah I love this (:

I'll just do some quick crits because I'm lazy haha:

-This looks very...stiff? Idk maybe try and make it flow more if that makes sense.
-It also looks rubbery? Especially the legs and the way you shaded it. I don't know if it's your style but try and make more angles (that doesn't make sense haha) and try not to make everything so curvy.
-The main and tail really confuse me. The main is just..there. Even though the horse is galloping, and I'd look up some pictures on google for the tail! It looks more like a dog's tail. Remeber that their tails are basically just hair attatched to a small ..bone thing.
-I think the background could be a bit more defined, too? Maybe add darker shadows where the fence is and where the horses hooves are.

You'll have no problem in getting in, though! You've got some great art ; U ;
Good luck

Rye @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 1:19 PM

Ah, Thanks for the crits!

As for the mane/tail thing, the reason the mane is down is because he/she is just starting to lift up into the canter, and the tail is up because it's a young horse and they tend to be more spirited with their tail.
I'm not sure how it looks like a dog tail, but I'll still work on making it more believable as a horse tail none the less.

OTL And the shading I will for sure work on as well because honestly this is my first time shading a horse. I've been drawing them all summer, however.

:)))
Thanks again.

(Edited on August 28, 2010, 1:26 pm)

Jazzy @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 1:25 PM

Oh I see haha.

Also here's a picture for the tail: http://www.choiceshirts.com/images/A1/02/A10293B-lg.jpg
Hopefully that shows what I mean xD

Also are we voting on the first try out now? D:
If we are I say IN C:

(Edited on August 28, 2010, 1:56 pm)

Rye @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 1:27 PM

Oh yes, that makes sense. I guess I need more stringy bits instead of what I have there.

Tree @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 1:36 PM

well hey theeerree i know you from HHQ sort of
this is awesome and i love horses and
well i say in

CowboyAstronaut @ Saturday, August 28th 2010, 2:22 PM

Aside from the things already said, the subject is nicely drawn. :'D I like its pose and the face a bunch! My only crits are that the background could indeed be further refined. (But I'm one to talk, backgrounds are something I still have to work a bit harder on) And the shading on the horse could be cleaned up just a tad. Otherwise, great job on the picture!

Horses can be pretty tough to draw (at least they are for me lol), and you pulled it off just fine!

Get in here~

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