Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Seidal @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 6:23 AM

i can't believe... I'm drawing my own gaia avatar... lol

(Edited on August 17, 2010, 6:24 am)

Tree @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 1:23 PM

but this is badass! you could use it to advertise commissions and get some gold!!! YOU'LL BE RICH!! i would commission you if i had any u___u

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 8:16 PM

Your art is AMAZING! If i had a gaia account i would buy a commission from you.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:09 PM

Aughghughg those liness <3

MarsIsAmazingg @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 12:58 AM

Gosh, look at those eyes! They're so pretty.

I also love the way you did the shirt. I for some reason have a lot of trouble making those look good. :[

Seidal @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 2:55 PM

d'aww y'all are too nice XP
Just PM me and I'll draw something for you <3 -- most likely headshot tho lol
Though.. I am like a turtle climbing slippery slopes uphill when it comes to drawing speed lol.

(Edited on August 19, 2010, 3:00 pm)

Seidal @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 7:55 PM

@ Mars: Fashion magazines and websites for men have helped me out a lot XD

Star @ Saturday, August 21st 2010, 5:46 PM

omg id so buy commission if i wasnt banned bawwwwww

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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 10:55 AM

Hey guys! I haven't drawn here in forever!

(Edited on August 12, 2010, 10:56 am)

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 3:18 PM

WB ^^

Very cool, liking the dynamic lighting ^^

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 13th 2010, 12:25 PM

Thank you

Tree @ Saturday, August 14th 2010, 10:40 PM

i love the dynamic shading in this!

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:14 AM

awesomenesssssss thats what it is!

Seidal @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 7:52 PM

that black shading is so rad
I love it

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:11 PM

Agreed w/ Seidal thick black shading is wicked cool. C: Very niceee

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 20th 2010, 6:17 PM

Thank you guys

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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 10:10 PM

feel like sketching ;p

Adulted for mild blood~

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 11:07 PM

Nice anatomy!

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 30th 2010, 12:48 PM

Thank you eue

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:17 PM

that.. is.. s-weeeeet.
Is it Slithers? That snarled look as it's biting is really nice

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:15 PM

Augh this is way too cool <3

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Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 2:01 AM

WIP still but its almost done

(Edited on August 21, 2010, 4:40 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 3:21 PM

Can't wait to see this finished! ^^

Seidal @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 5:11 PM

Good luck!! XD

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:13 AM

hey man, finish soon (:
looking good & goodluck!
uhh and is that a high priest i see? c:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:11 PM

Finish soon, and good luck! <3

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crack the sky @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 5:43 PM

I wanted to test my skills so I guess this was the best way?

Idk. SS. I'll finish it later. Maybe.
Btw, animals are not my strong suit, in fact, I suck at them. The dog was just a filler, so if anyone would critique it or do a redline I would really appreciate it.

So many mistakes. orz D:
Not sure if I'm supposed to do a second tryout later, but I'll see how this turns out first if I decide to finish it.
Also, sry for the, like, impossible scarf blowing. XDDD
DDDD: School.

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 7:12 PM

Looking good so far ^^

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 13th 2010, 12:25 PM

Looks awesome so far!

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:14 AM

hi man this is cool
i wanna see this done
soon yeys
anyways, goodluck~~~

MarsIsAmazingg @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 3:25 PM

Oh my. <3

You must finish this. It'd take awhile but I can tell it's toootally worth it. (;

Seidal @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 7:52 PM

AUGHHHH AWESOMENESS
plz finish soooooooooon T__T

Khadyah @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 9:28 PM

Ahhh it's looking good so far c: wanna see it finishhh~

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:09 PM

This is looking peretty spiffy already! Excited to see the final product, good luck! ;D

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Seidal @ Saturday, July 17th 2010, 12:36 AM

....omg...
muscle man wut?!
anatomy help plz... >__<
--
Looking through the actual Gray's Anatomy book. How did this guy do this? O___O;
I'll be finishing this up in photoshop

(Edited on July 22, 2010, 6:48 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:02 PM

I wouldn't know what to crit but
this is sexy 8D

Tree @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 6:21 PM

OYOY SEXY!!!!!! this is great, but his right arm looks a lot thinner than the left, and too curvy, as if his bones are bending... that's all i can see that's off at the moment. this is so great though THOSE ABS woww

Seidal @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 5:21 PM

@cubey: Haha I'm glad that he's attractive? lol All those abercrombie ads for refs must have warped my mind. XD

@Tree: ohhh thanks for catching that! I appreciate all of your help <3 really really

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:31 AM

This is SO HAWT on a number of levels!!!

Yay for green @u@

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 4:42 PM

you're welcome, glad i could help! i love the crotch area as well dklgjsl i rly hope you finish this

MarsIsAmazingg @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 3:17 PM

Omgsh. -Nosebleed-
This is amazing, my dear. The detail in those pants are to die for.

If you want a crit the only thing I can say is use one of those photoshop tools and center him. He ish leaning to his right. Then we have perfection. c:
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Of course, that may be what you were going for. -Feels intrusive now.--

(Edited on August 16, 2010, 3:19 pm)

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 7:44 PM

aww thanks so much XD
I have the finished version here if you're interested in seeing it:
http://seidal.deviantart.com/#/d2wn79k

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Reflection-Shadow @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 4:20 PM

Uploaded by Anne Dyari because of byte limit

Anne Dyari @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 4:40 PM

Cool use of textures on this, though you might want to round out the pillar she's sitting on so that it's more circular, try drawing the background in first so you know what's behind the character?
Also, refferences are your best friend, they'll help you figure out what goes where, and definately help when perspective is involved ^^
refference pictures like this
http://comps.fotosearch.com/comp/IMR/IMR242/girl-kneeling_~IE065-010.jpg

Quick redline
http://i30.tinypic.com/33l2wec.png

The only thing I really though was off was the knees were too small, good luck on your next tryout! ^^

Reflection-Shadow @ Saturday, July 31st 2010, 9:28 PM

I though it was only one tryout that was tequired as of now? .-. Sorry, just a lil confused

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, August 1st 2010, 2:58 PM

Lol, they changed it on me! xDDD

I say borderline in, I do love the use of the textures, just it seems like there could be more depth, like the shadows on the skirt parts, the highlights and shadows roughly follow the lines, but could be better defined with more work.

Reflection-Shadow @ Monday, August 2nd 2010, 1:14 AM

thank you for the help~ do you know any good website for reference pictures? ^^ google / yahoo / -insert website here- images always fail me ._.;;

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 2nd 2010, 1:31 AM

I always use google, but friends and a camera are always very convenient!

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:15 PM

Right away, I really like the coloring that you used in this, especially the details for the stockings, pillar, etc along with the textures of the dress. I'm assuming you're going for the 3/4 profile view.. and if you are, I would make the eye on our right a bit smaller. The shading isn't too convincing, so I would recommend some real-life study like sketching draping / piled up cloth or people.

If you could also post a link to your gallery that also show other oekaki images, I'll probably be able to vote if it's in or not.

At this point, I'm going to say borderline.

(Edited on August 3, 2010, 4:17 pm)

Fl?ss @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:16 PM

http://www.posemaniacs.com <--- super good pose source

also, be sure to check out their 30 second drawing tool! it's awesome when learning to draw humans

Reflection-Shadow @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 9:44 PM

thanks you for the advice ^-^ would it be alright if i just went ahead and drew another tryout picture here? o.o;; i don't have any decent oekaki work recently made >.>"

Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 11:15 PM

I'd say go ahead and do a second tryout, I really think we should change tryouts back to 2, since it gives the artist time to correct things they hadn't thought about first.

Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 1:00 AM

ah okay!

i just i hope i don't get the byte limit error again =_=

Seidal @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 2:01 PM

nahh I get byte limit overloads all the time. just go all out and have fun with it :3

@Anne: Maybe the 2nd tryout can turn into an optional 2nd Chance if their 1st tryout doesn't doesn't cut it?

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 3:20 PM

@Seidal: Ah, that's true, I just realized they did the same thing at the advanced board. xD just is going to take me alittle getting used to.

Tree @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 6:38 AM

it's probably best to check on the rules with moo, she'll know what to do! this is cute.

Tree @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 6:38 AM

i'm a poet and i didn't even know it

Reflection-Shadow @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 12:51 AM

xDD tree, thank you~

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Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 9:18 PM

DESUUUUUUUU!
This is fanart of Cubey (Kyuubi)'s Desu Monster.

Fully equipped with the Desu Eyerashes, the Desu Sound FX (which say 'desu' XD), the Desu Blash, the Desu Smire, the Desu Fluits, the Desu Raitoning and the Desu Supel Tlansfolmations.

OMFG wut have I dun.. 6___9
It's starting to look more like a love child between Cell, The Hulk, a braces commercial and Desu Monster.

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 4:02 am)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:52 AM

holy freaking crap I'm laughing so hard right now durjfgmbnfmfnbmc,gmkdjmdyh
xDDDDDDDDD
this is quite possibly the most desu thing I've ever seen holy craaaaaap thank you
I think I love you, Seidal u__u

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 7:27 AM

I mean WHAT THE HECK it's just so beautiful u___u
"It's starting to look more like a love child between Cell, the Hulk, a braces commercial and Desu Monster" hfdjdmskshfgid xD

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 10:31 AM

this..... this is actually brilliant.......

soulwithin465 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 10:10 AM

I wish I had your skillzzz!!!!....and those sexy eyelashes OuO

Seidal @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:59 PM

@Cubey: Yay I'm so happy you like it! XD lol
I KNOW I LOVE YOU WAHAHAHAAHA!

(Edited on August 17, 2010, 5:05 am)

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Moo @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 12:16 PM

Hello WOI!

Yesterday at WOA I noticed that the rules page is MUCH too long. I thought it was only there but it seems it's at ALL the oekakis here! So I'll be adjusting the rules, and when I finish I'll tell you and you guys tell me if I should add/get rid of anything.

I know I don't ever show my face here, so I might not do too great with the rules but that's why I want all your opinions on it! If there's anything you don't like once I'm finished and it's reasonable, I will go and edit it to make it more fitting for this oekaki.
ALSO at WOA I changed the tryout rules.
This may not be permanent but we changed it to only one tryout, along with a link to a deviantart/sheezyart gallery.

I will be changing the tryout rules to the same thing as WOA. They will be kept that way unless the majority of you object to it and want the old tryout process back.
But this way it will be made easier for both the tryouters and the members voting in or out.
ALSOOO I will be making it so that it's required to post a link to an example of artwork when registering. There have been SO many spambots registering that it gets very difficult to tell what is a real member and what is a spambot when they don't post a link to an example of artwork.
BUT if you have a friend joining who doesn't draw, but just wants to comment or something, have them post SOMETHING that will let me and the other admins know they aren't a spambot.

I think that's all I wanted to say.. haha

ALRIGHTY FOLKS~ THE RULES PAGE IS COMPLETE~ Please tell me what you think of it c:

(Uploaded by Moo)

Seidal @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 12:55 PM

I'm cool with it!! XD Thanks so much Moo!!! Oh.. but a question tho... there are some cool people that have started their second tryout. Should they finish it or just post an art link???

Moo @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 3:05 PM

Their choice! If they wanna finish then they can, but it should be perfectly fine if they want to just post a link instead c:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, July 21st 2010, 11:09 PM

/late to the party/ Thanks, Moo! 8D Definitely better than the BIG MENACING BLOCK OF TEXT we had before

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:39 AM

Simple and sweet, I like it~
And I LOVE the new tryout rules~~
I think it will be more tempting for others to tryout if they only have to complete one image (since they take so much time and care). And I like the idea of submiting a link of their gallery. It will give us an idea of what that person usually draws and will show a bit more about themselves.
Thanks for the update <333

Moo @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 1:58 PM

Yeah that's exactly what I was thinking! I'm the type that gives up on tryouts if it's more than one picture (much like what I did at sro not too long ago when I went to retryout BD;;;)
So I figured.. hey, why not?

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halfdoomed @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 5:34 PM

not finishing ~~cause i'm lazy~~ cause i don't have to

(Edited on July 23, 2010, 7:01 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 10:11 PM

^^ Looking really cool so far! Can't wait to see this finished! The background looks so cool!

Khadyah @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 12:29 PM

Wow this is looking really awesome so far can't wait t see it finisheddd 8DD

Tree @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 3:15 PM

i like this SO MUCH so far. it's good to see you neatening this up a bit. you're great with solids!

Star @ Wednesday, July 7th 2010, 1:31 PM

this is
going to
turn out
super duper awesome
i jusst know it

edit] fixing some typos

(Edited on July 7, 2010, 1:31 pm)

Seidal @ Monday, July 12th 2010, 8:57 PM

O__O
holy mutha...

Fallout @ Friday, July 16th 2010, 1:50 PM

u lazy
i need to stop making you join oekakis you poor thing you
why u draw so nice

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:08 PM

this looks pretty freakin rad

Moo @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 3:15 PM

Hello! There's been a recent change to the rules so that only one tryout is required. If you want to finish this one, go right ahead, but at this point the only requirement is for you to post a link to your deviantart gallery. (Or any other gallery you may have, or even a few links to some recent works of yours)

Good luck to you! <3

halfdoomed @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 7:00 PM

haha wow one tryout ... really... well screw this im not finishing it >:I
deviantart(s): http://halfdoomed.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://shippedgoldstandard.deviantart.com/gallery

Seidal @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 9:54 PM

INNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

Fallout @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 5:19 PM

in ~~because im biased~~

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 5:22 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 10:09 AM

Fudge! Get in here!!!!!

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 12:25 AM

dfhjfkg Hi. Remember me?
So I guess I could use excuses for not being here, my computer broke, internet died, refused to work on oekaki, (all of which happened) but really, I kinda... abandoned this place. Now I feel awkward coming back yayyyy
Anyways I've forgotten how to oekaki.
idk deviant id or something

Seidal @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 12:56 AM

CUBEY! XDDDDD
I misshed you sho very mucho T__T
lol is the right eyes twitching? its subtlety is nice ;3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:02 PM

SEIDALLLLL /hugs/ >w< ahhhh I've missed you! glad to see I'm not forgotten.
adahfjksfhd don't compliment this it's not even..... halfway decent.. xD

Seidal @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 11:15 AM

;A;
Why not!? I wouldn't have even thought of adding eyelid to dot eyes XD
But it's good to see you back X3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, July 21st 2010, 11:10 PM

hahaha sure x3
/feels loved/ 83

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:33 AM

I've missed you ;^;

Happy to see you're back though~~
And omg sorry about all your troubles!!! My gosh if that happend to me I would just DIE >A<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:11 PM

Aaah I've missed you too soul <3 yeah it's been a pain but I'm gonna try to be active here again! I miss everyone ;n;

Arf @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 3:15 PM

<33 MY DARLING <3
i still need to do a 2nd tryout here x_x too bad i've lost confidence in my ability to draw on kaki D:
and this is much better than what i could draw, thank you. i don't even bother to shade my drawings anymore lol

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? Space It ? @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:42 PM

xD Figured I'd try out again over here~ Since it's been a while and I'm pretty sure I've improved by a ton.

Safety save since I need to get up and do something else. xDDDD

Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:51 PM

Good luuuccckkk!!! XDDD
'Tori no Shi' nice... 頑張れ～！

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 8:44 pm)

Oh then that would be 歌

Tho "Bird's Poem" is cool too hehe

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 9:21 pm)

? Space It ? @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 8:52 PM

xD
It's supposed to be 'Tori no Uta' (Bird's Song), so I guess I must've copied something wrong~
Oh well. Wouldn't be the first time. xDDDD;

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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 10:47 PM

Timer lies vehemently because I can't oekaki

desu moster being desu because he is that awesome

Seidal @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 1:28 AM

omg, the shading on the teeth is awesome, and the way you colored that tongue is great XD

WUT, you can oekaki just fine Cubey!!!

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:44 AM

I find the sunset colors in his mouth to be quite inspirational, as the trickling sound of his bloody tears sooth my soul~~

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 4:41 PM

o______o

Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 5:49 PM

I remember the first desu monster and desu monster baby you drew a while back with the fruits on their heads... can you bring them back!? T___T plezzzzzzzzz oh plezzzzzz!

oh maybe I'll ddraw the fanarts.. XD

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 5:50 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:10 PM

thank you, everyone u_____u
@Seidal- absolutely! I will draw him at next opportunity! and he would absolutely love a fanart, just make sure you capture his inner kawaii desu-ness

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Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, July 21st 2010, 9:44 PM

wip.
In oregon, and without tablet so playing on touchpad, maybe will finish when I get home to Cali and my tablet xD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, July 21st 2010, 11:11 PM

WHAT THE HECK how, how do you draw so well with a touchpad?
scratch that, how do you draw so well PERIOD. Your art's gorgeous, girl

Seidal @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 12:36 AM

o mai gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?
this is so pretty, I love the lips especially

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:40 AM

I'm with Cubey on the touchpad thing oAo
This is beautiful <333
Great color choice!!

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soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 2nd 2010, 9:00 AM

I don't know if you guys remember her but I made some fanart for chainedfox~
She's inspired me to try use watercolors in oekaki again so I thought it would be nice to draw her new dragon character Zuvan. You should check him out >u<
http://chainedfox.deviantart.com/art/Zuvan-169518505

Anne Dyari @ Friday, July 2nd 2010, 5:04 PM

Very pretty ^^

Yeah, we haven't seen her around much lately :C

Star @ Wednesday, July 7th 2010, 1:30 PM

i kind of remember her
this is
amazing ok

Seidal @ Monday, July 12th 2010, 8:58 PM

so pretty--- XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:08 PM

I love how you do art woman >w>
aww I 'member chainedfox! This place's so inactive lately... :c

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:30 AM

Kyuubi-Kitsune: *sniff* You're back from the dead~!!!!!
OuO

Haha and hasn't it always been this way?? XD
Man I'm just not into oekaki as much as I used to be...so sad ;A;

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