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[724] Artist: Seidal | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 24m
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Seidal @ Thursday, September 23rd 2010, 10:33 PM
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trying group interaction
decided to delete my pic below... kinda getting on my nerves...? don't know why...... =____=

(Edited on September 23, 2010, 10:41 pm)

Tree @ Saturday, October 9th 2010, 5:04 PM
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i am so terrible at group interaction
this is awesome though


[721] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: what a mess totw | Time: 27m 13s
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Anne Dyari @ Friday, September 17th 2010, 8:56 PM
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Clothing will be added. I just haven't figured out what to put on her xP

Started in a paintchat.

(Uploaded by Anne Dyari)

City Lights @ Saturday, September 18th 2010, 10:43 PM
I love the way you color :O

Star @ Sunday, September 19th 2010, 8:17 PM
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im loving your style
still
just saying

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 6:01 PM
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Noice~!
the pose looks so natural X3

Tree @ Saturday, October 9th 2010, 5:03 PM
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STOP BEING AMAZING i know i comment on like all of your drawings and you probably think i'm a creeper but SERIOUSLY.


[720] Artist: City Lights | Title: Tryout~! | Time: 1h 23m
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City Lights @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 12:40 AM
Hey I'm Lynnie and I'm trying out. C:
I draw slow on oekaki.

Anne Dyari @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 3:45 PM
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Welcome to weazie!

Wow! You have such a cool style, -was watching the animation- It looks like this was done entirely with the pen tool with size pressure? NICE!
I especially am fond of the textures on the clouds and the trees, and though how you color isn't crisp and clean, it fits your style perfectly! Definately IN. ^^

Star @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 3:59 PM
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IN IN IN IN IN
get in here now
you seem to know what youre doing
dude im jealous
your choice of colors is amazing

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 8:03 PM
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OH GOSH your styyllee ;w;
IN

xlGrimBecky @ Monday, September 13th 2010, 2:44 PM
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UGH im sorry I can't watch the animation (at school lololol) but this looks lurvlyyy. The style's really unique! I like how you shade so much orz.
Definetely in! <3

(Edited on September 13, 2010, 11:09 pm)

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 6:00 PM
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HELLO- <3
I really really adore the coloring style you use. The only thing I'm drawing a blank on is the anatomy of her lower legs / feet... but whatever, it doesn't take that much away from the picture.
IN!

suzu @ Tuesday, September 28th 2010, 5:51 PM
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oh hey its you!!
i'm not sure if im allowed to comment because i haven't tried out 'v'; but i love thisss

Tree @ Saturday, October 9th 2010, 5:03 PM
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your style is so great


[728] Artist: Ichigo | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 9m
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Ichigo @ Friday, October 1st 2010, 10:29 PM
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http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_aFKO4ippru0/ScNB5If1xQI/AAAAAAAAALs/zcW6O_6PtUM/s400/Eurasian%2BLynx%2B(Lynx%2Blynx).jpg ref

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Star @ Saturday, October 2nd 2010, 2:54 AM
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beautiful as always, ichigo
ughhhhhh i love your style so much omg

Seidal @ Wednesday, October 6th 2010, 8:37 PM
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So painterly and loverly X3


[727] Artist: CatInYourCloset | Title: No Title | Time: 5m 27s
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CatInYourCloset @ Wednesday, September 29th 2010, 9:28 PM
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Help me with anatomy tips, guys!!!

I see a lot of you here draw humannns, and I want some tips, if you don't mind. ;v;

xlGrimBecky @ Wednesday, September 29th 2010, 11:06 PM
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Well, something that helps me is those line to circle things. Like, draw the head and whatnot, the make a line for the neck, a straight line vertically for the shoulders (add circles at the end), etc etc. But other then that, look at yourself in the mirror and see the lengths of your arms/legs maybe. :0

Seidal @ Wednesday, October 6th 2010, 8:32 PM
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urk.. I feel like anatomy is my weakest link...

But the best piece of advice that I've received is to practice drawing from real life -- like people eating during lunch or walking by in the mall. It doesn't have to be a perfect sketch. Just get some general idea of proportions and what not. Posemaniacs.com has an exercise that makes you draw different poses in under 30 seconds with that idea in mind. If you want to fiddle with nitty gritty details, use yourself as the model in front of a mirror.

Of course, guidelines help to keep everything balanced, but general knowledge of human anatomy will always be necessary. (I'm still working on it...) Taking an anatomy class would be a bonus, but not all of us have that kind of leisure / ambition.

I hope this helps!! ...and I love those details you put on his fingers and toes XD


[726] Artist: suzu | Title: tryout | Time: 1h 31m
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suzu @ Tuesday, September 28th 2010, 6:35 PM
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ok ok done!~
im suzu, aka mads
this is my first tryout on a oekaki board
i usually just stay at the beginner levels
but this time i decided to see if i could get in
a higher level

hope you like my picture lovies~ U 3 U

(Edited on September 28, 2010, 7:29 pm)

xlGrimBecky @ Tuesday, September 28th 2010, 11:34 PM
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Hi :D Welcome to WO Intermediate.
Anyways, lesse here.
Uhmm...Ugh I don't know what to critique ;-; The pose looks prettyful and the lighting on everything's done fine, along with the shading.
I'm gonna say in :I

Khadyah @ Friday, October 1st 2010, 4:29 PM
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Welcome to WO c: Hrmmm lessee 'ere...

I really like the coloring c: the shading looks nice (especially the hair -drool-)

The background is a little... lacking. I mean it fits in the picture but it's just very simple. I would have like to seen a little more.

The pose looks good and I like the proportions c:

I'm not sure what kind of technique you used for your shading, but it seems to have caught the lineart in some places and that looks a little sloppy to me :c

Also the.. brown whatever she's sitting on, is undeniably lopsided e-e It's probably not a big deal but it bugs me a little for some reason.

But overall I think you have good skills and I like your simplistic style so I would saaay... mm.... In. Yeaaah. I would say you're intermediate enough.

Really the only thing lacking is the background :T

Star @ Saturday, October 2nd 2010, 2:56 AM
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yeeeeeeah infosho
i luv ur style fgfdg
its pretty
the only thing that bothers me is the left leg
but yeeeeeah
so in
IN

Seidal @ Wednesday, October 6th 2010, 8:25 PM
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yay welcome~! :D

I really like that catfish looking pink fish on the left. I think the coloring and shading is done quite well that it looks 3D @w@

I also appreciate the highlights on the subject's skin, especially around her torso since it makes that area really pop and seem more realistic.

I would have liked to see some shading in terms of the shadow cast by the subject onto the object she's sitting on and shadow on the purple fish from her foot too...

Nonetheless, the simple style is charming and easy on the eyes.

INNNNNN INNNNNNN


[722] Artist: City Lights | Title: No Title | Time: 14m 57s
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City Lights @ Saturday, September 18th 2010, 10:58 PM
I'm going to assume I've been accepted? lol. xD
Hm today was tough. At least I'm feeling better~ :DDDD

(Edited on September 18, 2010, 11:35 pm)

Star @ Sunday, September 19th 2010, 8:16 PM
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YES youre in forsure
gfhgfhgdfgh
i cant get over how good your style is
and tough days suck ):
good thing its gotten better

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 6:01 PM
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YES YOU'RE IN DRAW MOAR PLZZ <3
And I'm glad you're feeling better..


[719] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: dyari x roxy litter | Time: 2m
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Anne Dyari @ Friday, September 10th 2010, 11:05 PM
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Make to auction off at Furrypaws >> <<

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(Uploaded by Anne Dyari)

xlGrimBecky @ Saturday, September 11th 2010, 12:57 AM
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Cute n__n I like 1 <3

Star @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 3:58 PM
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ahhhh super duper cute
i love your style as always <33

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, September 12th 2010, 8:04 PM
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These are all so cute hnngg <333 I love your style

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 5:58 PM
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they look so cute, they look edible. ...must resist...


[718] Artist: Kyuubi-Kitsune | Title: No Title | Time: 19m 21s
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, September 8th 2010, 8:01 PM
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:I

Star @ Wednesday, September 8th 2010, 8:31 PM
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this is gorgeous
what are you :Iing for
dude i have no skills
with
lines what so ever

xlGrimBecky @ Wednesday, September 8th 2010, 10:21 PM
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Holy jesus on a stick this is amazing.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, September 9th 2010, 7:35 PM
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what
you guys are like...
thank you but really. xD

City Lights @ Saturday, September 18th 2010, 11:00 PM
I hope you know that this is beautiful! :]

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 5:57 PM
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I love those eyebrows~


[715] Artist: xlGrimBecky | Title: Sea | Time: 1h 27m
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xlGrimBecky @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 12:51 AM
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Alllll finished.
The thing says for an intro, so uh
I'm Becky from the beginner oekaki.
I usually draw animu and my deviantart is choask1699 good day.

(Edited on August 30, 2010, 2:10 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 2:21 AM
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Good luck!

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 3:10 PM
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I say in, watching your animation, I can see the layering you put into the background, and I really like the sky with the clouds stretched across it.

Anatomy is okay, if I had more time, I would've liked to redline for you, but, overall, IN. ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, August 31st 2010, 8:49 PM
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This just seems pretty messy to me. I feel like some more detail/texture in the cave would've been nice? Like you can see all the brush strokes quite easily? OTL I fail at explaining myself.. but like the "painterly" thing can be kinda cool but I just think you should've ~*refined*~ it a little bit... aannnd the water's kind of messy too? like there's a line in the middle and it.. almost looks like you softened some bits but not all? It just sort of looks unfinished in that aspect. It's a nice concept, I just wish you had spent more time on it.
But Anne's right, you have a nice technique watching the animation. :>

Your gallery's not too bad for intermediate so I'm borderline/in ^^;;

(Edited on August 31, 2010, 8:50 pm)

Khadyah @ Saturday, September 4th 2010, 10:18 PM
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Hmm... all in all, the character looks well done and the coloring is nice.

My main attention for critique would be on the background. The shading on the cave looks pretty nice, not much to say about there. But the water and sky I think you could have done better on...

Since the sky is a nice bright color, I think the water could have a little more shine to it. I mean if you've ever looked at a lake or the sea and a nice bright day, you would know how much light the water can reflect. Get's pretty shiny.

It would have also been a little nice to see some gradient to the sky because well... skies have gradients. EDIT: never mind the sky looks fine.

And next time I would suggest putting the sky and water on the same layer. It's a tiny bit much more work, but I think the results are worth the hassle.

And I see a coupla color leaks here and there but they're not a big deal.

But all in all I think you know enough about anatomy and coloring to be considered intermediate so I would say INNNN~

(Edited on September 5, 2010, 9:21 pm)

Star @ Sunday, September 5th 2010, 1:07 PM
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yeeah i think this is suitable for intermediate oekaki so i say in! :>

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 5:56 PM
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I'll agree with Kyuubi on the messiness... but I can understand how frustrating water, especially the ocean can be. To add more depth in future backgrounds, I'd try implementing atmospheric perspective - fading out things that are further away. I'm sure you'll be improving with every oekaki you do so you're more than welcome~ IN!


[708] Artist: tigerchic643 | Title: No Title | Time: 1h 56m
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tigerchic643 @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 2:22 PM
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hi.

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Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 6:58 PM
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Hi ^^

Looking cool so far!

Seidal @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 1:14 PM
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those details are like *__*

Khadyah @ Saturday, September 4th 2010, 9:55 PM
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Yo |3

I love how the one on the left looks ouo I like his expression


[714] Artist: Kyuubi-Kitsune | Title: No Title | Time: 23m 53s
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 5:59 PM
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Things I wanna say about this:
'natomies, how do they work?
canvas too big~
ffgfgfggfg how do I oekaki again?

:I I am a tard for reals.

Seidal @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 10:01 PM
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cuuutee fat flabby puppehhhhh~<3
totally reminds me of my overweight pug at home!!!
...i have no idea on animal anatomy... so I don't think I could help much. so I'll help by just enjoying this XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, August 31st 2010, 8:54 PM
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AWWHHHH You have a pug back home? Luckkyyy :D
ahaha I know the pose isn't ~realistic~ I was just... saying that I knew so... in the comment... OTL;; I fail so hard


[712] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: CC for Kai | Time: 3h 45m
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Anne Dyari @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 7:02 PM
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African wild dog custom character, whoot Furry Paws xD

Coloring >> <<

(Uploaded by Anne Dyari)

Done coloring ^^ Timer lies.

Tree @ Thursday, August 26th 2010, 8:12 PM
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can you please just stop being amazing at everything?

Seidal @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 1:15 PM
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I don't know why but.. that posture is so nice to look at...

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 5:12 PM
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Agreed... something about the alert!stance is very cool... :P
Anyhoo... I love everything you do, Anne x3

Khadyah @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 8:26 PM
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Uggggh oh my gosh @-@ You're so awesome. It almost HURTS man.


[704] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: freckles furrypaws | Time: 42m 31s
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Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 23rd 2010, 5:29 AM
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tag for a friend

Tree @ Monday, August 23rd 2010, 7:21 AM
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this is so cute

Ichigo @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 12:00 AM
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///OwO/// Such an adorable puppeh

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 2:56 AM
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wut the...
TOO CUTE
TOO CUTE
that facial detail is really eye catching

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 5:14 PM
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gggggg so cute! and the subtle pink at the mouth <3 this is darling


[703] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: speedpaint | Time: 16m 54s
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Anne Dyari @ Sunday, August 22nd 2010, 12:57 AM
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xP

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 2:55 AM
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omg.. there's so many things to love about this. The lips and the nose are especially alluring~



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