Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
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Mizuchu @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 8:37 AM

My tryout #2
Alef, my icon character <33

please crit and comment!

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:37 pm)

(Edited on July 2, 2008, 2:52 pm)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:43 PM

Good luck ~ <33
I saw it D< sew me jk
fineesh sooonnnn

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 4:41 PM

omg this is so great i want to see it finished

Etch-a-Sketch @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 2:56 PM

WOAH.
Mannnn I so wish I could say in but I still need to try out ;; <3
this looks FANTASTIC. I love the background, color choices, and shading. THE SHADING IS AMAZING. ily.~<333

Tor @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 12:53 PM

i love how you shaded it, and that facee

you have a nice style

all i can think of saying is that the arm pose looks slightly uncomfortable (i actually tried to do it and hurt myself, but that may just be me). And some of the lines, mainly in the curtain, could do with being more tapered as they look oddd.

I say in.
goodluck.

Hoshii @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 3:16 PM

Yea the arm is still a bit weird ): it just looks awkward but i love how you did the skin and the shading on the curtains C: <3 Very pretty ~

WTFINPLZ

You're definately intermediate *A* <33

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:10 PM

uh uh how many more votes should I wait for? DDD:

Hoshii @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 2:17 PM

idk prob a few more because i dont think 2 is enough to be a unanimous vote but im not the boss n_N

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 5:03 PM

Mmkay, crits:

Some areas, especially the curtains, probably could have been filled in a little cleaner. Notice that the curtain in the top right has purple edges. Next time I'd probably take the tool, make it 1 pixel and carefully color in on the edges :3
Also there's a bit of coloring outside the lines in a few areas.

Despite those two problems, I think your coloring style is -amazing-. I LOVE the face here, it's oh-so-awesome <33 Great shading too.

So I will say IN because I think the small errors can be corrected over a short amount of time.

Mizuchu @ Monday, July 7th 2008, 4:54 AM

ok so far is 3(lol?) In votes and 0 outs, anymore people want to crit? I love learning, so please do...I will wait till Wednesday maybeh to finish counting votes? DD:

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Tansy @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 1:15 PM

tansy's back
back again
tansy's back
tansy's back
tansy's back

woop woop.
anyway.
critsplease?

Mizuchu @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 3:43 PM

nice, I love frogs <33
I really like this picture, especially the shading, but I don't like how the stomach looks, it's a little flat. I like the lineart though, good luck!

Zest @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 6:48 PM

Ahh, awesome! Yay frogs x3

Crits...
The lilypad seems to be at a different angle than the frog, so the frog looks to be floating.
Very simple picture but that's just fine, I absolutely love it <33

Good luck!

Random @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 7:13 PM

What an interesting idea for a tryout. c:
I love this. But I'm not for one who likes solid lines with watercolors.

ShaoShao @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 9:15 PM

I think you need to give more thought to lighting. What parts of the lily pad and frog are caught in the light, what obscures the light and where does the light not reach because of that?

There are a number of areas where the shading feels inconsistent; you expect it to continue for the rest of a limb but it doesn't. Things like that. The best way to understand these things is often to look at real life examples, try shining a lamp down onto a toy animal and note how the shadows are formed. Move the light or toy about to see what happens. It's something we see every day but fail to really notice.

Where use of the oekaki applet is concerned, I think you could work on blending shades a bit better, or deciding how blended you want them. Are you aiming for soft or hard? With more gradual shades you'd expect soft, but the effect isn't so seamless when the beginning and end of different shades are so distinguishable.

Criticism aside, the lines are wonderfully smooth and neat with great tapering. I have no doubt that this skill will be a strong factor in whether you're accepted. Looking at your DA, I'd say I'd probably vote you in on your willingness to draw a variety of things and complete pictures as well. I hope everyone else feels the same. :3

(yeah, I suck at praise... sorry orz;;)

(Edited on July 4, 2008, 9:16 pm)

Tansy @ Saturday, July 5th 2008, 7:17 AM

heh heh
not many people are a fan random
including me ;____;
but thank you for the crits guys!

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Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:34 PM

All done (:
I decided Trick, after my Manetric on Ruby x)

Her nickname is Sheebs though.
I just like that name (:

No shading. Too lazy!

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 8:23 pm)

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 7:58 PM

omg so cute
i think sheebs idk why
it sounds cute lol

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:23 PM

Thanks Mango (:

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:32 PM

apparently you named him trick lol
dang i really like the colors
and anatomy
very nice

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:36 PM

lol, yeah, her nickname is Sheebs (:

thank you<3

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:05 PM

hahah that makes sense
i could do somefanart for this guy
defintaly worthy of it except ill do it on wob sense im not excepted yet

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:14 PM

Really?
Woah. Thanks<3
I feel special lol.

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 9:21 PM

lol

Taz @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 8:26 AM

sheebs.
heh.
such a cute name. ^^

i love this designn.
its like...a giant pikachu mixed with a black lab or something. :]

Zero @ Thursday, July 3rd 2008, 1:17 PM

anatomys @w@

I love the paws

Laurz @ Friday, July 4th 2008, 10:54 AM

Haha I agree Taz xD
Pikawolf!

Thanks Zero<3

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Zest @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 8:33 PM

My first tryout, as well as picture 2 for the 100 theme challenge.
Hope you like <33
Crits?

Star @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:15 PM

goodluck to you c:
i adore your shading, im afraid i cant
crit because im not accepted
and im still trying out n__n

Zest @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:30 PM

thank you, star <33

Taz @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 8:56 AM

ahh, the idea of this is adorable. i love that the small heart is the light source in this.

your coloring really pops in some places, like on the green fur.

your anatomy looks pretty nice for this difficult angle. i do see some color leaks and uncolored pixels, so just be sure to clean those up next time. good luck! :]

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:15 PM

Taz pretty much covered it all (:

I love your style<3

Best of luck

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bluzze @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 5:59 PM

I'm accepted into WOA, but.. do I have to tryout here?

mango @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 6:09 PM

idk
i hope you dont lol

Laurz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 6:59 PM

No.
Anyone who is accepted to WOA
Is fine here (:

Taz @ Wednesday, July 2nd 2008, 8:25 AM

BLUZZE.
hai.

ShiPainter

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:20 AM

Ok so These people are Cloud (the wolf) and Blake (...the human D<)
Tryout #1 A kind of "Italy" theme maybe...T^T I should start on the next one now xDD

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:28 AM

Blake looks like he's staring off in to the distance and Cloud's front arm is still a bit to small but this is amazing, bebe ~ ; w ; <33 ilu

Glad you kept showing me your progress ~ Cloud and Blake are so cute together fhjkwe roflwtf ;__; <33

Good luck !

Kyogre @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:50 AM

My gosh I love the hair and the shirt! GL!

Etch-a-Sketch @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 3:09 AM

uhhhh hmmm I think I'm allowed to comment on intermediate?
I cant believe this is finally open ;u; I shall try out when you is done~<3
HE SHIRT IS AWESOME. JUST BTW.
MUCHO LUCK...O..S. *phail'd*

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:20 AM

aw, this is adorable. :3

the backround does confuse me though, im not quite sure what it is to be truthful.

the torso also looks a little off.

but yeah those are my only crits for now, good luck! c:

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 11:05 AM

Thank you everyone for all the comments!
<333

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Kyogre @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:36 PM

EDIT: Done!

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 1:04 am)

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM

Good luck ! >w< This looks amazing so far !!! <333

Hoshii @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:18 AM

fhewkj love the background btw ; u ;

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 12:18 am)

Mizuchu @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 12:23 AM

Nice, good Luck!
I'm trying out too~!

Zest @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 1:06 AM

This looks -so- awesome <33

Taz @ Tuesday, July 1st 2008, 8:18 AM

hey, this is really awesome! ^^

your watercolors are great. and the pose was a good choice too, the picture flows very nicely.

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Zest @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 6:04 PM

Wouldn't like to meet him in a dark alley.

Second tryout, crits and votes are appreciated <33

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 6:29 PM

Ok, this is awesome (:

I have a few crits though. I do think that this is a nice idea, but your background is lacking in detail [it's a little bit too plain] Your lightsource is good, and highligts are nice (: Your anatomy is a little off with the legs, but that can be fixed overtime. Overall, this is great.

I say in (:

(Edited on June 30, 2008, 6:29 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 6:41 PM

Uwaa this is amazing ;__; <33

I really like the lighting from the fire and i love how you drew the paws fhj

IN

Taz @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 7:18 PM

ahh yes i really love the lighting from the fire on this one. and those eyes make the whole picture even more affective on the whole evilness thing. :]

ill definately say in. ^^

Random @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 7:26 PM

Yes.. In.
I love the feel of this picture... The background is a little plain but that's just fine.

(Edited on June 30, 2008, 7:26 pm)

Zest @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:05 PM

Ah, thanks guys!

Soo...am I in, or should I wait for a couple more votes?

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 11:16 PM

I think you're in by the majority of votes

<33
Congrats ! I was just accepted today too, but welcome to WOA ! >w<

(Edited by Taz)
i think you mean WOI, Hoshi. X3

Haha whoops >w<'

(Edited on July 1, 2008, 12:26 pm)

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Random @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:44 PM

I would asume that the people who are accepted at WOA are accepted here. |3
Ignore this picture.

Zest @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 11:51 PM

But I can't ignore it...such amazing perspective ;O;

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:16 PM

That we are Random, that we are (:

Hehe. I'm getting the evil eye.

It's Chesse's fault x)

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Mara @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 4:40 PM

Safety Save :3
Subeta commish
Someone really liked the Skitty picture and asked for something similar

(Edited on June 29, 2008, 4:42 pm)

Hoshii @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 12:40 PM

Mara <33 *3*
I love this fhjkew ~!

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:14 PM

Your coloring ;-;

ily<3

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Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 3:17 PM

whoooot intermediate is finally open. :]

yeah so i see we have some tryouters here already? ^^

well hi i'm Taz and as far as i know, im the only admin for this oekaki at the moment. although im sure within time there will be one or two more.

ask me if you have any questionss. :]

Tor @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 3:35 PM

Hey buzz.
you're sexy. :3

lolsorry. the picture made meee

TAZZZZ. xD <3

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:14 PM

Buzzums!!!
I love her lol

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Deceised @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 10:21 PM

My favorite food turned into a dog (:

Cheeeeeseee!!!

Also, do we need to try out here
if we are accepted into WOA?

Moo @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 11:18 PM

Nope~ No need to tryout if you're already accepted over there.
C:

PS I LOVE CHEESE<3

Deceised @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 1:04 AM

Okie dokes (:

Thank you<3

Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 2:34 PM

reminds me of Cheese from Foster's Home For Imaginary Friends<3

Deceised @ Monday, June 30th 2008, 4:13 PM

lol, I know right Taz.
But she isn't xD

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Rupe @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 1:34 PM

s.s

Star @ Saturday, June 28th 2008, 4:00 PM

wewt good luck to you <3
looking good so far!~

Taz @ Sunday, June 29th 2008, 2:33 PM

i love the color scheme. :]
good luck! ^^

ShiPainter

Mara @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 5:22 PM

Skittty~
Nyanya
Random urge to draw my gijinka skitty and normal skitty
The reason there's all the stars is cause her face is the shape of a cresent, or the moon, and she needs a moon stone to evolve
So moon and stars go together which came up with that
I should fix the faces later but mom needs to get on
Congratz on WOI being officially up!
-confetti-

Okay made a few tiny adjustments
Made the face rounder and gave her some blushyness~
Dodged and burned a few places for depth but nothing major so it wouldn't screw up the picture
This is so much better than the last picture I drew here :'D

(Edited on June 26, 2008, 6:00 pm)

POODLEPEE @ Thursday, June 26th 2008, 5:25 PM