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[715] Artist: xlGrimBecky | Title: Sea | Time: 1h 27m
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xlGrimBecky @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 12:51 AM
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Alllll finished.
The thing says for an intro, so uh
I'm Becky from the beginner oekaki.
I usually draw animu and my deviantart is choask1699 good day.

(Edited on August 30, 2010, 2:10 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 2:21 AM
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Good luck!

Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 30th 2010, 3:10 PM
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I say in, watching your animation, I can see the layering you put into the background, and I really like the sky with the clouds stretched across it.

Anatomy is okay, if I had more time, I would've liked to redline for you, but, overall, IN. ^^

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, August 31st 2010, 8:49 PM
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This just seems pretty messy to me. I feel like some more detail/texture in the cave would've been nice? Like you can see all the brush strokes quite easily? OTL I fail at explaining myself.. but like the "painterly" thing can be kinda cool but I just think you should've ~*refined*~ it a little bit... aannnd the water's kind of messy too? like there's a line in the middle and it.. almost looks like you softened some bits but not all? It just sort of looks unfinished in that aspect. It's a nice concept, I just wish you had spent more time on it.
But Anne's right, you have a nice technique watching the animation. :>

Your gallery's not too bad for intermediate so I'm borderline/in ^^;;

(Edited on August 31, 2010, 8:50 pm)

Khadyah @ Saturday, September 4th 2010, 10:18 PM
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Hmm... all in all, the character looks well done and the coloring is nice.

My main attention for critique would be on the background. The shading on the cave looks pretty nice, not much to say about there. But the water and sky I think you could have done better on...

Since the sky is a nice bright color, I think the water could have a little more shine to it. I mean if you've ever looked at a lake or the sea and a nice bright day, you would know how much light the water can reflect. Get's pretty shiny.

It would have also been a little nice to see some gradient to the sky because well... skies have gradients. EDIT: never mind the sky looks fine.

And next time I would suggest putting the sky and water on the same layer. It's a tiny bit much more work, but I think the results are worth the hassle.

And I see a coupla color leaks here and there but they're not a big deal.

But all in all I think you know enough about anatomy and coloring to be considered intermediate so I would say INNNN~

(Edited on September 5, 2010, 9:21 pm)

Star @ Sunday, September 5th 2010, 1:07 PM
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yeeah i think this is suitable for intermediate oekaki so i say in! :>

Seidal @ Tuesday, September 21st 2010, 5:56 PM
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I'll agree with Kyuubi on the messiness... but I can understand how frustrating water, especially the ocean can be. To add more depth in future backgrounds, I'd try implementing atmospheric perspective - fading out things that are further away. I'm sure you'll be improving with every oekaki you do so you're more than welcome~ IN!


[714] Artist: Kyuubi-Kitsune | Title: No Title | Time: 23m 53s
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 5:59 PM
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Things I wanna say about this:
'natomies, how do they work?
canvas too big~
ffgfgfggfg how do I oekaki again?

:I I am a tard for reals.

Seidal @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 10:01 PM
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cuuutee fat flabby puppehhhhh~<3
totally reminds me of my overweight pug at home!!!
...i have no idea on animal anatomy... so I don't think I could help much. so I'll help by just enjoying this XD

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Tuesday, August 31st 2010, 8:54 PM
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AWWHHHH You have a pug back home? Luckkyyy :D
ahaha I know the pose isn't ~realistic~ I was just... saying that I knew so... in the comment... OTL;; I fail so hard


[704] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: freckles furrypaws | Time: 42m 31s
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Anne Dyari @ Monday, August 23rd 2010, 5:29 AM
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tag for a friend

Tree @ Monday, August 23rd 2010, 7:21 AM
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this is so cute

Ichigo @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 12:00 AM
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///OwO/// Such an adorable puppeh

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 2:56 AM
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wut the...
TOO CUTE
TOO CUTE
that facial detail is really eye catching

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Friday, August 27th 2010, 5:14 PM
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gggggg so cute! and the subtle pink at the mouth <3 this is darling


[703] Artist: Anne Dyari | Title: speedpaint | Time: 16m 54s
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Anne Dyari @ Sunday, August 22nd 2010, 12:57 AM
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xP

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 24th 2010, 2:55 AM
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omg.. there's so many things to love about this. The lips and the nose are especially alluring~


[700] Artist: Seidal | Title: gaia lol | Time: 3h 47m
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Seidal @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 6:23 AM
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i can't believe... I'm drawing my own gaia avatar... lol

(Edited on August 17, 2010, 6:24 am)

Tree @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 1:23 PM
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but this is badass! you could use it to advertise commissions and get some gold!!! YOU'LL BE RICH!! i would commission you if i had any u___u

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 8:16 PM
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Your art is AMAZING! If i had a gaia account i would buy a commission from you.

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:09 PM
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Aughghughg those liness <3

MarsIsAmazingg @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 12:58 AM
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Gosh, look at those eyes! They're so pretty.

I also love the way you did the shirt. I for some reason have a lot of trouble making those look good. :[

Seidal @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 2:55 PM
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d'aww y'all are too nice XP
Just PM me and I'll draw something for you <3 -- most likely headshot tho lol
Though.. I am like a turtle climbing slippery slopes uphill when it comes to drawing speed lol.

(Edited on August 19, 2010, 3:00 pm)

Seidal @ Thursday, August 19th 2010, 7:55 PM
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@ Mars: Fashion magazines and websites for men have helped me out a lot XD

Star @ Saturday, August 21st 2010, 5:46 PM
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omg id so buy commission if i wasnt banned bawwwwww


[691] Artist: Majestic Cardboard Box | Title: EoS!!!!! | Time: 9m 2s
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Majestic Cardboard Box @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 10:55 AM
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Hey guys! I haven't drawn here in forever!

(Edited on August 12, 2010, 10:56 am)

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 3:18 PM
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WB ^^

Very cool, liking the dynamic lighting ^^

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 13th 2010, 12:25 PM
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Thank you :D

Tree @ Saturday, August 14th 2010, 10:40 PM
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i love the dynamic shading in this!

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:14 AM
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awesomenesssssss thats what it is!

Seidal @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 7:52 PM
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that black shading is so rad
I love it :D

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:11 PM
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Agreed w/ Seidal thick black shading is wicked cool. C: Very niceee

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 20th 2010, 6:17 PM
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:D Thank you guys


[687] Artist: soulwithin465 | Title: No Title | Time: 15m 41s
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soulwithin465 @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 10:10 PM
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feel like sketching ;p

Adulted for mild blood~

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, July 28th 2010, 11:07 PM
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Nice anatomy!

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 30th 2010, 12:48 PM
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Thank you eue

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 3rd 2010, 4:17 PM
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that.. is.. s-weeeeet.
Is it Slithers? That snarled look as it's biting is really nice

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:15 PM
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Augh this is way too cool <3


[690] Artist: Reflection-Shadow | Title: Tryout 2 | Time: 3h 57m
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Reflection-Shadow @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 2:01 AM
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WIP still but its almost done

(Edited on August 21, 2010, 4:40 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 3:21 PM
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Can't wait to see this finished! ^^

Seidal @ Wednesday, August 4th 2010, 5:11 PM
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Good luck!! XD

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:13 AM
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hey man, finish soon (:
looking good & goodluck!
uhh and is that a high priest i see? c:

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:11 PM
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Finish soon, and good luck! <3


[693] Artist: crack the sky | Title: Tryout 1? | Time: 34m 58s
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crack the sky @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 5:43 PM
I wanted to test my skills so I guess this was the best way?

Idk. SS. I'll finish it later. Maybe.
Btw, animals are not my strong suit, in fact, I suck at them. The dog was just a filler, so if anyone would critique it or do a redline I would really appreciate it.

So many mistakes. orz D:
Not sure if I'm supposed to do a second tryout later, but I'll see how this turns out first if I decide to finish it.
Also, sry for the, like, impossible scarf blowing. XDDD
DDDD: School.

Anne Dyari @ Thursday, August 12th 2010, 7:12 PM
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Looking good so far ^^

Majestic Cardboard Box @ Friday, August 13th 2010, 12:25 PM
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Looks awesome so far!

Star @ Sunday, August 15th 2010, 4:14 AM
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hi man this is cool
i wanna see this done
soon yeys
anyways, goodluck~~~

MarsIsAmazingg @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 3:25 PM
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Oh my. <3

You must finish this. It'd take awhile but I can tell it's toootally worth it. (;

Seidal @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 7:52 PM
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AUGHHHH AWESOMENESS
plz finish soooooooooon T__T

Khadyah @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 9:28 PM
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Ahhh it's looking good so far c: wanna see it finishhh~

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, August 18th 2010, 4:09 PM
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This is looking peretty spiffy already! Excited to see the final product, good luck! ;D


[679] Artist: Seidal | Title: Curses anatomy and muscles! | Time: 3h 33m
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Seidal @ Saturday, July 17th 2010, 12:36 AM
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....omg...
muscle man wut?!
anatomy help plz... >__<
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Looking through the actual Gray's Anatomy book. How did this guy do this? O___O;
I'll be finishing this up in photoshop

(Edited on July 22, 2010, 6:48 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:02 PM
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I wouldn't know what to crit but
this is sexy 8D

Tree @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 6:21 PM
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OYOY SEXY!!!!!! this is great, but his right arm looks a lot thinner than the left, and too curvy, as if his bones are bending... that's all i can see that's off at the moment. this is so great though THOSE ABS woww

Seidal @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 5:21 PM
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@cubey: Haha I'm glad that he's attractive? lol All those abercrombie ads for refs must have warped my mind. XD

@Tree: ohhh thanks for catching that! I appreciate all of your help <3 really really

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:31 AM
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This is SO HAWT on a number of levels!!!

Yay for green @u@

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 4:42 PM
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you're welcome, glad i could help! i love the crotch area as well dklgjsl i rly hope you finish this

MarsIsAmazingg @ Monday, August 16th 2010, 3:17 PM
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Omgsh. -Nosebleed-
This is amazing, my dear. The detail in those pants are to die for.

If you want a crit the only thing I can say is use one of those photoshop tools and center him. He ish leaning to his right. Then we have perfection. c:
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Of course, that may be what you were going for. -Feels intrusive now.--


(Edited on August 16, 2010, 3:19 pm)

Seidal @ Tuesday, August 17th 2010, 7:44 PM
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aww thanks so much XD
I have the finished version here if you're interested in seeing it:
http://seidal.deviantart.com/#/d2wn79k


[686] Artist: Seidal | Title: Desu Desu Desu Monster Monster Monster | Time: 1h 35m
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Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 9:18 PM
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DESUUUUUUUU!
This is fanart of Cubey (Kyuubi)'s Desu Monster.

Fully equipped with the Desu Eyerashes, the Desu Sound FX (which say 'desu' XD), the Desu Blash, the Desu Smire, the Desu Fluits, the Desu Raitoning and the Desu Supel Tlansfolmations.

OMFG wut have I dun.. 6___9
It's starting to look more like a love child between Cell, The Hulk, a braces commercial and Desu Monster.

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 4:02 am)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 6:52 AM
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holy freaking crap I'm laughing so hard right now durjfgmbnfmfnbmc,gmkdjmdyh
xDDDDDDDDD
this is quite possibly the most desu thing I've ever seen holy craaaaaap thank you
I think I love you, Seidal u__u

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 7:27 AM
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I mean WHAT THE HECK it's just so beautiful u___u
"It's starting to look more like a love child between Cell, the Hulk, a braces commercial and Desu Monster" hfdjdmskshfgid xD

Tree @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 10:31 AM
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this..... this is actually brilliant.......

soulwithin465 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 10:10 AM
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I wish I had your skillzzz!!!!....and those sexy eyelashes OuO

Seidal @ Tuesday, July 27th 2010, 11:59 PM
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@Cubey: Yay I'm so happy you like it! XD lol
I KNOW I LOVE YOU WAHAHAHAAHA!


(Edited on August 17, 2010, 5:05 am)


[667] Artist: halfdoomed | Title: tryout 2 | Time: 49m 30s
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halfdoomed @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 5:34 PM
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not finishing cause i'm lazy cause i don't have to

(Edited on July 23, 2010, 7:01 pm)

Anne Dyari @ Wednesday, June 30th 2010, 10:11 PM
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^^ Looking really cool so far! Can't wait to see this finished! The background looks so cool!

Khadyah @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 12:29 PM
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Wow this is looking really awesome so far can't wait t see it finisheddd 8DD

Tree @ Thursday, July 1st 2010, 3:15 PM
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i like this SO MUCH so far. it's good to see you neatening this up a bit. you're great with solids!

Star @ Wednesday, July 7th 2010, 1:31 PM
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this is
going to
turn out
super duper awesome
i jusst know it

edit] fixing some typos

(Edited on July 7, 2010, 1:31 pm)

Seidal @ Monday, July 12th 2010, 8:57 PM
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O__O
holy mutha...

Fallout @ Friday, July 16th 2010, 1:50 PM
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u lazy
i need to stop making you join oekakis you poor thing you
why u draw so nice

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:08 PM
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this looks pretty freakin rad

Moo @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 3:15 PM
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Hello! There's been a recent change to the rules so that only one tryout is required. If you want to finish this one, go right ahead, but at this point the only requirement is for you to post a link to your deviantart gallery. (Or any other gallery you may have, or even a few links to some recent works of yours)

Good luck to you! <3

halfdoomed @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 7:00 PM
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haha wow one tryout ... really... well screw this im not finishing it >:I
deviantart(s): http://halfdoomed.deviantart.com/gallery/
http://shippedgoldstandard.deviantart.com/gallery

Seidal @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 9:54 PM
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INNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!

Fallout @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 5:19 PM
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in because im biased

(Edited on July 25, 2010, 5:22 pm)

soulwithin465 @ Monday, July 26th 2010, 10:09 AM
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Fudge! Get in here!!!!!


[680] Artist: Kyuubi-Kitsune | Title: No Title | Time: 28m 28s
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 12:25 AM
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dfhjfkg Hi. Remember me?
So I guess I could use excuses for not being here, my computer broke, internet died, refused to work on oekaki, (all of which happened) but really, I kinda... abandoned this place. Now I feel awkward coming back yayyyy
Anyways I've forgotten how to oekaki.
idk deviant id or something

Seidal @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 12:56 AM
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CUBEY! XDDDDD
I misshed you sho very mucho T__T
lol is the right eyes twitching? its subtlety is nice ;3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Sunday, July 18th 2010, 11:02 PM
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SEIDALLLLL /hugs/ >w< ahhhh I've missed you! glad to see I'm not forgotten.
adahfjksfhd don't compliment this it's not even..... halfway decent.. xD

Seidal @ Monday, July 19th 2010, 11:15 AM
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;A;
Why not!? I wouldn't have even thought of adding eyelid to dot eyes XD
But it's good to see you back X3

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Wednesday, July 21st 2010, 11:10 PM
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hahaha sure x3
/feels loved/ 83

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:33 AM
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I've missed you ;^;

Happy to see you're back though~~
And omg sorry about all your troubles!!! My gosh if that happend to me I would just DIE >A<

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:11 PM
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Aaah I've missed you too soul <3 yeah it's been a pain but I'm gonna try to be active here again! I miss everyone ;n;

Arf @ Sunday, July 25th 2010, 3:15 PM
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<33 MY DARLING <3
i still need to do a 2nd tryout here x_x too bad i've lost confidence in my ability to draw on kaki D:
and this is much better than what i could draw, thank you. i don't even bother to shade my drawings anymore lol


[685] Artist: ? Space It ? | Title: Tryout 1: &#40165;&#12398;&#35433; | Time: 1h 14m
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? Space It ? @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:42 PM
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xD Figured I'd try out again over here~ Since it's been a while and I'm pretty sure I've improved by a ton.

Safety save since I need to get up and do something else. xDDDD

Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:51 PM
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Good luuuccckkk!!! XDDD
'Tori no Shi' nice... &#38929;&#24373;&#12428;&#65374;&#65281;

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 8:44 pm)

Oh then that would be &#27468; ;)
Tho "Bird's Poem" is cool too hehe

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 9:21 pm)

? Space It ? @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 8:52 PM
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xD
It's supposed to be 'Tori no Uta' (Bird's Song), so I guess I must've copied something wrong~
Oh well. Wouldn't be the first time. xDDDD;


[684] Artist: Kyuubi-Kitsune | Title: FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF | Time: 1h 30m
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Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Thursday, July 22nd 2010, 10:47 PM
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Timer lies vehemently because I can't oekaki :D
desu moster being desu because he is that awesome

Seidal @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 1:28 AM
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omg, the shading on the teeth is awesome, and the way you colored that tongue is great XD

WUT, you can oekaki just fine Cubey!!!

soulwithin465 @ Friday, July 23rd 2010, 10:44 AM
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I find the sunset colors in his mouth to be quite inspirational, as the trickling sound of his bloody tears sooth my soul~~

Tree @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 4:41 PM
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o______o

Seidal @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 5:49 PM
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I remember the first desu monster and desu monster baby you drew a while back with the fruits on their heads... can you bring them back!? T___T plezzzzzzzzz oh plezzzzzz!

oh maybe I'll ddraw the fanarts.. XD

(Edited on July 24, 2010, 5:50 pm)

Kyuubi-Kitsune @ Saturday, July 24th 2010, 7:10 PM
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thank you, everyone u_____u
@Seidal- absolutely! I will draw him at next opportunity! and he would absolutely love a fanart, just make sure you capture his inner kawaii desu-ness



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