Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
Weekly Theme: Water! - Local Admins: Anne Dyari

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ShiPainter

Random @ Tuesday, May 19th 2009, 10:56 PM

I felt like drawing a lineless picture :3

POODLEPEE @ Wednesday, May 20th 2009, 10:36 AM

omFG
i love lineless.
It's so appealing to the eye.
It's like a fresh contact.
Mmmmm...

ShiPainter

Random @ Sunday, April 26th 2009, 3:50 PM

i think i am allowed to draw here.. since i got two ins on my last tryout. xD but if so, i'll draw here more :]

this is strudel.... lol most of my characters have names based off of pastries. yum. <3

Ichigo @ Sunday, April 26th 2009, 3:59 PM

Aww so cute. Love the markings.

Toasteh @ Sunday, April 26th 2009, 4:18 PM

Fff yeah, you're in. We definately need more activity here. <3

lksj Your style is adorrable <333

Random @ Sunday, April 26th 2009, 4:40 PM

ohhh thanks <3

ShiPainter
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Random @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 9:00 PM

arg i don't have the patcience to finish this today </3
maybe tomorrow.

Random @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 9:08 PM

ah f--
it looks like the picture below

Toasteh @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 9:10 PM

NONO FINISH THIS IT'LL BE FUNNY
WE'LL HAVE A WHOLE BUNCH OF PEOPLE COME OVER HERE AND DRAW EVERYTHING IN THE SAME POSE!
SERIOUSLY, IT'LL BE HILARIOUS I'M LAUGHING JUST THINKING ABOUT IT!

Random @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 9:12 PM

LMAO TOTALLY
I DIDN'T EVEN LOOK AT YOUR PICTURE XD I JUST LIKE.. SKIPPED OVER IT AND DREW THIS AND THEN I WAS LIKE... OH SHI--

<3

Toasteh @ Tuesday, March 10th 2009, 9:28 PM

Ohoho it's the theme now XDDD
THIS IS GOING TO BE A FUN ONE <3

Random @ Wednesday, March 11th 2009, 8:43 PM

i guess.. it's done now.

Toasteh @ Wednesday, March 11th 2009, 9:55 PM

OKAY THEN
For crits...I'm not really sure what to say as this is mostly just my personal opinion

Well I think a little more could've been done with the water, but I won't count it against you seeing as how I can't do water...at all :C
As for the grass, I don't think it should look just like that. There are lots of little grass blades of different sizes that really shouldn't be...sticking up in the same direction as in your picture. At least not in the wild anyway, which is where this looks like is taking place. Wild grass also should have more variation in types of grass and weeds.
http://i.pbase.com/g4/83/568283/2/61510501.Kansas2006FieldsofWildGrass.jpg
http://www.mnsphoto.com/n_images_SA/SV_img_9625.jpg
http://farm1.static.flickr.com/48/139797540_965d1b9db5.jpg?v=0
As for anatomy the leg farthest away from the viewer is just a little too short.
I can't really crit much on poses like this. |D;
But I will tell you that the face is little off, I would just suggest googling some pictures because I'm too lazy to do it myself. /fail
I really wish you would've put just a little more effort into the squirrel. :C
The blood looks pretty unrealistic, although I can see what you were going for. C:

I'll go ahead and say in. |D

(Edited on March 12, 2009, 10:56 am)

Random @ Thursday, March 12th 2009, 7:58 PM

WELL it was pretty hard for this because i did this all on one layer.. dsgdfj and got lazy.

BUT I SEE WHAT YOU MEAN, thank you! <333

(Edited on March 12, 2009, 7:59 pm)

Random @ Sunday, March 15th 2009, 2:24 PM

this is a tryout you guys know, right. >:c

Detective Wolf @ Thursday, March 19th 2009, 7:34 PM

ShiPainter
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Random @ Monday, February 2nd 2009, 8:30 PM

probably re-tryout one?
i haven't drawn/been here in ages... >:

i played with the watercolor and i now realize how much i love it. c:

Anne Dyari @ Monday, February 2nd 2009, 9:29 PM

Nice job ^^ Love the anatomy and movement of this. Beautiful soft highlights!

Good luck on your next tryout!

Toasteh @ Monday, February 2nd 2009, 9:40 PM

Watercolors sure are funnn ~~<3

All I really have to say is those paws look a little small :I

Gl <3!

Hazuza @ Tuesday, February 3rd 2009, 1:16 AM

I like that smudge-like effect~ It makes it look like he's evaporating awayyyy~.... Or something. What were you trying to convey in that? =o

I find this pretty sweet~ Love the shading... The background seems a little plain... I like your sky though. You probably could've put the horizon a little higher and added... idk mountains or something... just to make it look less... flat? lololImbadatfindingwords

I'm with Toast on the paws, they're definitely really small :x especially the back ones. They're a little oddly curved in the back, too... For the front-left one, I think the ankle would bend the other way as it's pushing on the ground. The paws could also be a little broader. While I'm on anatomy... Might just be me, but he seems a little fat

Emphasize on the Might-just-be-me part *-*;;

Your lineart is a little unbalanced also, with thick lines on the eyes and face and nonexistant lines on the torso and tail. It would've been better if you kept it steady all the way through, or at least make the lines on the face lighter.

Sorry if I sound harsh D: I tend to be nitpicky, but they're just suggestions to take into account *0*; The more nitpicky my crits, that just means the better you did ;D xD

Random @ Tuesday, February 3rd 2009, 5:08 PM

thanks so much <3 i see what you mean about the fat and the bendy paws xD i kinda rushed the paws... :x and yeah, evaporating~

darkvine @ Saturday, February 7th 2009, 4:00 PM

X3 love this

wc is fun right?
i dig those smudges a heck of a lot i do

uh im not the best at crits so ill just say that the back legs seem a bit off
idk the one behind seems off the most
idk how to explain the best, probly too round, not quite as like legish with bones
ill stop haha
but i do love this

PaintBBS
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Random @ Saturday, July 19th 2008, 8:04 AM

I was drawing something else but my computer lost all it's memory and it wouldn't send the other picture.. At least i got a screenshot

I'm too lazy to ask an admin or someone to upload it though
And im also too lazy to ask for upload access bawwww /lazy bum

(Edited on July 19, 2008, 8:19 am)

Ichigo @ Saturday, July 26th 2008, 9:32 PM

Eet is so cute! So is this. I like spots!