Weazie Oekaki Intermediate

Weazie Oekaki Intermediate
	Welcome to Weazie Oekaki's critique & improvement board! Before drawing, please read the rules at this link ^{Updates: AH SURVEY'S CLOSED finally after like. months?? like 4 months. incredible. ((I'll be posting a summary of responses etc soon)) - Toasteh, 08 May 2014}
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BubblegumD @ Monday, June 29th 2009, 3:59 PM

uh... tryout one

yes
this is kaito btw without his demon wings C:

tigerchic643 @ Monday, June 29th 2009, 9:11 PM

to lazy to type so heres a redline.
http://www.iaza.com/work/090630C/redline56746.png

Anne Dyari @ Monday, June 29th 2009, 10:20 PM

I love how the background fits the pose and character!
The eyes look like they're bleeding color, it would perhaps more look like glow if you had faded the lineart and used the dodge tool alittle more inside the eyes?
Also, I would like to see darker shadows to fit the darker background, it looks like you only used highlights?
Good luck on your next tryout ^^

BubblegumD @ Tuesday, June 30th 2009, 2:18 AM

thanks for the redline c:

and idk thanks about they eye thing xD i was hoping for a way to make it non-fail D:
nyah i might have my next one done by this afternoon (london time lol)

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